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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

thats heartwrenching...😭
she is going to be heartbroken..this time it wasnt Rk who is betrayed, its madhu betrayed...thats why one should never keep too much expectations. only leads to heartbreak😭..i feel so sorry for her😭


yeah. Expectations are evil. But I feel so sorry for Madhu. She wasn't really expecting all that much, but her luck is wretched.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

I was numb for some time. Awesome.

Madhu's feelings were so well described. She is realizing her feelings.
But she is practical enough to not expect more from him. Again I thought at least Rishabh could have asked her about her past and should have helped her irrespective of his decision to not to keep her. She was trusting him for that and anyway she was not expecting him to keep her for life.
Want to know Rishabh's pov. But he really needs to sort it out.
Madhu will be shattered. She is strong but really worried about her.

Take care.


I can tell you Rishabh definitely WANTED to know her better, understand her and help her.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolashu

Amazing update... Beautifully written...Somewhere at times, we do end up wondering if money is everything. No place for feelings or care as such in this fast paced world where things are changing continuously. I must say you are an amazing writer Teekay. Feelings are definitely your forte. Sorry for bring up "Ankhaee" here, but still to this day, it is one of the best stories I have read.No story has ever made me cry as Ankhaee. This chapter almost made me feel as bad as chapter 16 in Ankhee where Rishab breaks Madhu' s heart.. Wondering what made Rishab change his decision on Madhu.. What is her fault? Hope he saves her in time before things go back to irreversible. Madhu definitely deserves a better future. Please update soon.Hopefully things get better for you. Don't worry too much dear😊


No, no. No one has to ever say sorry for bringing up another story. Especially Ankahee.
Trust me, that story was really special to me. Although I had no idea this many people read it and actually remember it a year down the line! It was just a story!

Anyway, back to the chapter - I totally hear your pain. What is Madhu's fault? I have no answer.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muzikk93

Wow. Words cannot describe how well you've demonstrated the value of materialistic things through madhu's character. I felt bad for her when she overheard rk telling tony that hes ready to send madhu back. It must've been so heartbreaking for her. Is that where the "ilzaam" on rk comes because madhu went back into the same hell because of him? Interesting Either way


Money.
I know it's important but some times it astounds me how much it makes the world go round. How much of people's behavior is shaped knowingly and unknowingly by money.
There's another story I have been thinking of for a long time now that asks that question in a lot more depth, but I thought of Madhu's pov here and felt as if everything in her life was reduced to insignificance behind the world's quest for money.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Such an emotional part... Madhu was so worried about RK and thinking about his pain forgetting her own... She even tried to reason with her feelings for him and prayed for his safety... She started to believe her life will turn well from now that RK has bought her and she is away from Tony's world.

But god is showing no mercy to her and making her life hell... I knew Rk will send her back when their picture came in newspaper and when lawyer came personally to meet him... He cannot lose his case to dipali...

It's a story but still imagining madhu's state is bleeding my heart... what a life she is got... only betrayals... can't imagine amount of hurt she is going through after knowing that she has to go back to that world... How can RK do this to her... Can very well see prologue is coming may be in the next chapter itself...

Brilliant part... Thanks for giving back to back updates though you are not in good mood... hope everything will be fine with you soon...😊


Thank you for reading and your extremely thoughtful words. They mean so much to me.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kawan

read all updates in one go...
awesome..

wonderful update..
loved it


Thank you for reading :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tainar

I am shaking with rage that Dipali is back. I can't stop crying for Madhu. For the girl, after all that she has been through, was still optimistic and had faith. Ohh RK. 😭 I am afraid his words did what her father, Mukund and Tony and his kind couldn't do. He's gone and totally broken our girl. 😭

Yeah, it's unfortunate how that turned out for her. The girl was so innocent, so pure.
Damn, words.
They can heal, and they can kill.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

I don't know about crying making you feel better and lighter because I'm sobbing so hard I can't see the screen but I am livid. RK pushed her into the hole he had pulled her out from, where he had saved the last bit of Madhu but he destroyed that small part himself today. The woman who saved his soul and healed him he murdered her today because of his own ego. That cold ice armour she had broken through after RK bought her will be back on but the wounds inside it will fester and kill her. 😭

I hope there is an update later tonight because the contents of this chapter will be on loop in my head till I see a ray of sunshine for Madhu.

Great job! Please please update soon.


Sorry about that honey *hugs*
I know this is an extremely painful phase of the story, and trust me when I say I am having a really hard time writing. Words do not suffice.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Umair001

U r a superb writer plz also write rishbala os

You know, I did end up writing an OS before I could write chapter 21. Did you like it? :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: stay_on_waves

Read the update and it is good as always, maybe a little more pessimist update but I must say there is alot more in story, to start with, what happened when the photo of Rk madhu was published in newspaper, why did Rk rushed to office, Why he was tensed so much then why suddenly lawyer's entry then meeting and then this sudden trip to banglore after dipali's mess...
Rk's heart had won over his rational mind then why this sudden decision, he was thinking that Madhu is all a lie, what happened in banglore that made him think so about her and why suddenly his rational mind and hurtful soul has conquered the battle with his heart...
Madhu was so optimistic and Rk was so Pessimistic. What happened, I m too much curious to know the reason of RK's behaviour, what made his trust level from semi trust to zero trust...
plz update soon I m eager to read more...
And thank u for this quick update...


Yes yes I know there are a lot of loose ends. Patience, darling, patience. We'd get there, I promise.
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