FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 83

Originally posted by: riyakhanna728

First of all sorry Teekay for commenting after so many updates ... I was pretty much occupied with work and read most of the update through office phone where I really cannot login to IF 😲.

Coming to the story : Its amazing. I have read "Ankahee" (ur masterpiece), its very close to my heart but somewhere I feel like I am falling for this one also ❤️😳

The way you describe emotions , happiness and pain of RK and Madhu is commandable. Your philosophy about life in each situation is awesome.

I can feel Madhu and RK's pain but somewhere I love Madhu more here. Despite of all the pain, she still believes in optimism. Her power and stamina to accept and face each situation is amazing. RK is total pessimist but somewhere Madhu has given him strength to fight back with people and situation.

I usually don't cry while reading fiction , but last update made me cry (I also cried while reading one / two updates of Ankahee - I will be honest 😛) and thats the power of your writing.

I m so much in love with this story and your writing. Thank you so much TK for another wonderful story.

You are a rockstart ⭐️

Pls pls pls pls continue soon :)

Originally posted by: memad

omg, heart breaking and the most painful chap 20...reminding me of mid-stage Ankahee...felt my eyes welling up...it was such a relief to see madhu under shadow of gratefulness, sympathy and unknowing love of Rishabh, weaving dreams of her SAFE SECURED future. She was even never expecting Rishabh to be with her all her life but was confident that whenever he would dump her, he would ensure a peaceful living for her in future...omg, can't see her hopes shattering down like that...m crying, crying, crying😭...

Originally posted by: memad

Teekay's Rishabh r super dumb n late lateef in all her stories. That character is always pressed by society, family n their norms...

Originally posted by: silverfire

Read all the 20 chaps in one go. I have never read a more painful love story ever in this forum. These two r hurting so much that we can feel their pain in our heart. I'm almost dreading the nxt chapter. I do 't know how these two r going to come out of this mess. Tuesday is the deciding day.

Ur writing style is so unique n we can actually feel their pain. Awesome writing.

I'm scared to read the nxt chapter. What is dipalui going to do, what is tony going to do...so many questions

Fantastic...

Originally posted by: twinklev20

Hi TK,

Read the recnt three parts 18, part 19, and part 20 all together today, sicne I was away for last few days...

Am very happy n satisfied that you are continuing the story as u hinted to in the Prologue.😊

Also just very very Angry about that shameless Dipali n her behaviour...😡

But am curious to know what happened in Bangalore...y had RK gone there...y was the matter so worse that he has to give back Madhu...am sure he cud have hid her for sometime after he bought her from Tony atleast until the Dipali matter ended...

plsss continue soon...cant wait for next part...am sure Madhu is absolutely shattered after hearing RK and Tony convo...😭

Originally posted by: riyakhanna728

I have read this shayari somewhere and I feel like it perfectly suits to Madhu's situation :

"Duniya se to kitane shikwein hai , ek tumase shikwa aur sahi
Ek darde mohabbat aur sahi, ek zakhme tamanna aur sahi"

Pls conti soon , eagerly waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: h231087

hi plz give us happy ending pm me i dont want RK to handover madhu to tony pls

Originally posted by: memad

so I guess the prologue part will follow in next update...

I read somewhere u mentioned that u r more attached with this story n not so much with YOU PROMISED. hey, pls don't ignore YOU PROMISED..its equally close to my heart. in fact, i feel it is more realistic than ilzam...may be bcoz we don't get to see ilzam characters much in our real life than the YOU PROMISED ones...the families of army ppl often suffer with the same trauma of alienating with husband/ brother/ father which we civilians overlook...

Originally posted by: Tainar

Madam...I expect you to throw up an update today. 😃 It's a request and it's spelled O.R.D.E.R. 😉😆 I must know what other stupidity the boy has wrought.

Originally posted by: teekay

Aye, aye mam.

I know I am a little late, but this chapter was HARD. trust me.