FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

VOW ...EXCELLENT UPDATE...AS USUAL... 👏👏👏👏👏

FIRSTLY, WAS HAPPY THAT MANAV STILL ATLEAST RESPECTS HIS SISTER N IS WORRIED FOR HER AND GUILTY FOR HIS OWN BEHAVIOUR...👏👏👏👏👏...GOOD HE IS NOT ANSWERING MUKUNDS' CALLS...😊

THEN THE WAY U EXPLAINED...RATHER VERY WELL EXPLAINED ...🤗🤗 🤗...RK'S EMOTIONS N RATHER HIS INNER TURMOIL SO WELLL.....EXCELLENT N SUPERBBB...👏👏👏👏👏.....BUT RK HAS STILL NOT REALISED WHAT HE FEELS FOR MADHU N NEITHER HAS MADHU REALISED...

AND LASTLY THE NEW TWIST...THE TWIST MIGHT WORK IN FAVOUR OF DIPALI ON WHOM RK WAS FILING DIVORCE ON ADULTERY GROUNDS...BUT...WAIT A MINUTE...WHO CLICKED THEIR PIC...N HOW WUD RK HANDLE THAT SITUATION...

EXCELLENT MOVE...PLSSS UPDATE SOON...😊

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

very nicely written chapter 6...first part was soothing with reunion of patil kaka n madhu bitiya and it was completely reversed by rishabh's venting out his pain, anguish...loved the way madhu was trying to understand him n support him..

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ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Madhu knew manav is very short tempered but he is understanding also... she is right...now he is actually thinking about his behaviour towards his only family his sister... he is guilty for what he did... that is really shows he loves his sister...he might contact RK to reach madhu...

RK was so torn between his mind and heart... it was written beautifully... he just couldnt ignore madhu, he cant see her in pain,he really cant put limit to her... he tried doing it but the moment he saw her tear stained face he forgot everything... now the new twist... badly worried for madhu...whats in store for her.. will RK be her saviour?

Fab update... eagerly waiting for next... thnx for pm😊

continue soon plz...

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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omg chap 7 is wonderful...u brought out 2 extreme emotions again together...first it was rk torturing madhu endlessly through his violent love making n then patiently listening her, registering her words n sending her clothes...yes, happiness s a choice..

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

beautiful description of rk's feelings disturbing him inside through chapter 8, storm within him, also the way he was trying to analyze madhu n finally dumping the choice 'misery' in trash, he seems to have chosen happiness...

Edited by memad - 10 years ago

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Momi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Loved reading Manav's POV! And twist after twist ... who leaked the picture to the media? How's that going to affect RK's divorce proceedings? Or will this scandal finally make him realize his feelings for her? So many questions .. please update soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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sweet chap 9...happy, delighted n relieved to see rk slowly opening to madhu n she through her calm n belief making rk feel comfortable, determined n satisfied...loved the way she exemplified with moon..

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teekay

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: memad
sorry for commenting here as the thread of ur OS was closed due to inactivity..n i had to comment..so thought of commenting here, so that u can read here...
wonderful OS... FORGIVEN..
shortest OS i hv ever read but it said so much...Rishbala's torturous past n in-amicable separation n finally both shedding their inhibitions, forgetting their painful past, becomes one soul...loved last lines...they r again young-intimate strangers and not the forgotten-indifferent strangers...superb use of words...👏

No problem. Thanks for finding that story and reading it. I had forgotten all about the post and re read it when I saw your comment. I write random stuff on whim, clearly.

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jalebi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Are u gonna update now dear??

so that i can stalk ur thread, come first & Go to sleep after reading ur update. I m quite addicted to this story!!

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#620

happy reading chapter 10...omg, how cute, innocent n naive madhu is excited at rishabh's gesture of fixing her mother's butterfly pendant or be it asking him to get contraceptives...
Rishabh seems to have found positive energy n fighting spirit through madhu's optimism but at times he s still going in that denial mode which is quite understandable...

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