FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Quiet a few oh crap moments in this chapter. I know Manav called Mukund but I'm hoping somehow RK gets to him before Mukund does. Sadly as much as I was hoping that RK would find a solution to saving Madhu before the week is up is now likely not going to happen with the latest tabloid stunt. Things are about to get really really bad for Madhu.

Brilliant job as always. Update soon.

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Manpreet Cheema

@A-Star

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#582

Amazinggg Uptade Teekayyy 😳

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lucygrey21

@lucygrey21

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

wow the story gets interesting day by day. I love it
waiting for next part

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Awesome update. Loved it. Thanks for the pm

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Awesome update

Like the way Manav was feeling bad for his

Behaviour towards Madhu

What's Rk going to do now

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Awesome update.

RK's inner turmoil was so well written. As expected he is thinking practically n have decided to stay away from Madhu. The newspaper picture has added to it.I think for now he will send her back.

Manav has realized his mistake, hope it's not too late.

eagerly waiting to see how you are going to take this forward.

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

hmmm...the way you explained Manav's guilt and his reactions and confusions..thanks, the thoughts of me about Manav has changed a bit..

Oke now, RK's is in Dilemma...actually he is not in between his feelings or hers, he is still thinking how can he trust somehow...how can he believe in the word call "LOVE"...or affection...

Oke from this chapter, i came to this conclusions...

Firstly, he might end ups ending Madhu back as he don't want any hurdles to get divorced and be a free man..

or something else????

thank You for the wonderful Update TK...lovign it