FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 57

Originally posted by: sweetdear

Truly dark chapter..hats off to you TK for pulling it off so nicely !!!

Wow...MADHU is one Iron Lady. Well at least she is when it comes to her brother !! Madhu is breathing just for the sake of her brother and his safety !! Hopefully she at least succeeds in this challenge of hers !! I just don understand why is she hiding from him, well they have lived in the slum with a drunken, abusive father all along, won't her brother understand if she explains to him...obviously he would have seen LIFE...of all kinds!! I belive she is overthinking n at the end the same brother will only blame her for keeping him in dark !! Her past is gut wrenching...death is so easy than this ...Flesh trade is such a vicious circle, brutally punishes the innocent victims leaving them stranded stripped of dreams,hopes and freedom and where people are living dead !!

I was in a assumption that RK has bought her for life, OMG just one more week then ...guess the prologue is fast approaching haha!! But he is very close to the REALISATION now...hope this time he wins after he chooses to lose things that gave nothing but betrayal,pain and torturous life !!

Guess now everything relies on Rishabh's CHOICE !! After all he is a Knight (at least for me haha) though a broken one now !! I believe only him and only him can save rest of Madhu's life along with her brother's too!! Let's see how much has he already HEALED in this aspect.

Loved it...awesome job on a lengthy n gripping chapter TK!!

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Well tk u r one great writer...just hats off !! U not only have written Madhu's condition,situation & circumstances and her inner turmoil very well but also made me think about the girls who do exist in this world like madhu who are prying in hands of monsters like Mukund.Its very painful and emotional to read Madhu's condition but here I say Rk had now came out atleast moved from knowing that not everyone is dipali and his condition compared to madhu is different in a way of pain & turmoil going through but madhu is in a bigger worry.still Rk atleast must connect the dots himself from the matters starting from buying madhu as virgin,tony saying she is Virgin ,her soothing words,her purity atleast he shud know abt madhu.I wud read every update in expectation of atleast one time Rk wud come closer to know madhu past from her.
But hope next in further Part Rk wud become madhu strength,saviour and also he wil sooth madhu like she had done him.he has to nurse madhus wound with words nd care.

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Amazing part...i feel RK can never understand madhu's pain... even after going through so much in her life she is still strong and able to care others... Her fear is understandable as it is for her brother she is living this life and truth can damage her brother's innocence... her dilemma whether to take RK's help or not is very well described...

RK is thinking about what Trishna said about madhu.. he also know that madhu is dipali and not everyone in the world are cheaters..atleast he admitted that truth... he bought madhu only for 3 months? Does madhu knows it? I think he will not let her go... Beautiful update..

Thnx for the pm.. continue soon...

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Well dats a good news fr us if u r makin it long .

It was painful n sad but u wrote it beautifully .

Read both parts .

RK still doent understand n know her properly . He doesnt even trust her. Well its not his fault too.

I guess prologue is comin up .

wat wud madhu do now . I guess she wud leave his place but wont go to tony . She wud leave dat place forever.

sorry fr commentin late . Just logged in after a long time .

👏👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: twinklev20

Firstly, Thanks a lot for the PM...am reading this update in middle of night cos the story is really awesome n CAPTIVATING...rather very well expressed... 👏

Well, the update was superbbb...as always and loved the way u portray the thoughts n emotions of the characters in the story...🤗

I am hoping RK understands her reasons for bring into the role she is...but cant imagine how will it happen in story... 😭...though he likes her,he wont be able to accept it...pata nahi aagey kya hoga...anyways AM LOVING THE STORY TRACK... 🤗


again...awesome update...very well written n plsss continue soon...😊

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Really painful update TK

Madhu's contract time is over. Now Tony wants her back for another trade. I am scared of RK' s decision. He is not willing to accept that Madhu is trust worthy or not willing to accept that he is having some feelings for her. He may send her back to Tony just to prove himself that he is not affected by her.

I am really proud of Madhu, so much bad happend in her life but still she is strong and able act peaceful. She loves Manav alot, Now there is a possibility of Tony or Mukund using using Manav aganist Madhu. because he is her weakness.

And the last part where RK finds a pen with happy Birthday Rishabji note made me cry 😭

Originally posted by: japura900216

You know what? these days i come to the forum only to read your story😳 I love this story and you are an amazing writer who very much know to handle emotional updates very gently.Keep up the good work dear👏Waiting for their feelings towards each other to be unfolded.😃

Originally posted by: Mikolingam

Really good update hope RK will help MADHU and get married to her to keep her away from the gang . Pls continue fast just love the story so much. Heart ache to see Madhu so helpless and RK in so much pain not trusting any women any more. Thanks for giving us a beautiful story God bless you my dear

Originally posted by: geeta-99

U shocked us dear rk bought madhu only for 3 months .when will he know her past...

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE NIGHTMARE IS ACTUALLY THE REALITY OF HER LIFE

MADHU WAS SOLD BY THE ONE MAN SHE TRUSTED - BUT FOR HIM SHE WAS ONLY A COMMODITY

AND NOW SHE IS STUCK WITH THIS TAG OF A PROSTITUTE WHILE THE MEN MAKE THEIR MONEY AND CARRY ON

BUT ISNT 75 LAKHS A LOT OF MONEY FOR ONE GIRL