FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 102

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

Well back to sobbing like a baby. My feelings are all over the place. I am feeling hurt for RK yet I'm pissed at him that he can't find a way. I'm mad at the lawyer who is being loyal to his employer and is doing his job. I'm hurt that Madhu has resigned to her fate of never being able to live her life the way she dreamed. I'm hurt that the one person who has a good heart is demanding to know why does she have a heart? I'm hurt that RK's truth is painful that no matter what he does he won't win. He can save his father's legacy and those people but he will loose Madhu and himself or he can keep Madhu and loose his father's legacy which in turn will cause him to loose himself.

Oh god! What a clusterF and now you are saying you won't update right away. Even we aren't winning this battle.

Phenomenal job! Update soon.


Sorry for all the pain yaar. The despair of the situation is quite painful. I'd hate to be Madhu right now, but I think I would hate to be RK even more. At least Madhu can have self-respect and blame others for doing something to her she didn't want. RK would die of the guilt.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


Oh come on, stop advertising Ankahee as the story from hell. It wasn't that painful! 🤢😡😛




lol...It was painful but still very close to our heart...
Edited by memad - 10 years ago
Rafangirl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


that's not fair. he's no that dumb in this story. Don't hate my rk please. I love the poor guy



hahaha😆...even I love the poor innocent RK...In real life, I see so
many RK's around who r really good, loving n genuine at heart but pressed by society n unable to express their real feelings to loved ones

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


I am not ignoring it. I just...forgot...the burning angles that I wanted to write there. I like the story but I am not feeling it right now. I can end it in 2 chapters+epilogue from where it is right now and I probably will. IT won't be perfect but at least there will be a closure.

I don't know what to do with it - somehow my words have dried up.
Maybe it's the fault of this story. This is too intense.



yes, right...this story is so much consuming...it is difficult to attend 2 stories at a time...
update the other whenever u feel so...

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Posted: 10 years ago
i hv to catch up lot of pages n last 3 updates...was totally overloaded with lot of work...now getting some respite...will read all updates, comments n put my comments soon...

btw, Teekay, u hv made me famous just by reading ur story...m getting pms from last few days that why m i disappeared from here n not putting any comments, predictions n not taking part in any discussions...
Rafangirl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will write detailed comments later as m too sleepy now...

but suddenly, an idea struck my mind--
-How about RK inform cops about Tony and ZEST clients and plan raid on the places where Tony operates? This can be done before sending madhu back. But looking at RK's disillusioned state, I don't think he is in position to come up with that or any other brilliant idea...or If he goes by his tubelight/ late-lateef nature, he can tip the police even few hours after sending madhu back to Tony and of course before madhu is touched by some1 else...

- or may be he can take Manav, put him in safe place and then help madhu run from Tony..as madhu would also happily do that bcoz she has manav safe with rishabh...

- or may be Trish, the only witness of their beautiful relationship, apart from patil kaka can come to rescue madhu...may be she can pay to Tony...
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Posted: 10 years ago
i have no words 2 say anything as m feeling very sad 4 of them...when vl their misery end? waiting 4 that moment
teekay thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: memad

i hv to catch up lot of pages n last 3 updates...was totally overloaded with lot of work...now getting some respite...will read all updates, comments n put my comments soon...

btw, Teekay, u hv made me famous just by reading ur story...m getting pms from last few days that why m i disappeared from here n not putting any comments, predictions n not taking part in any discussions...


It's ok. Take your time.
We miss you around here - none more than me. That's perhaps why you get those PMs. I do understand though that real life comes foremost that's why i never ask anyone to come read or whatever. Especially because i have been writing at an ungodly pace.
I know you would read, if you want, when you want. Still, we can't help missing you.

Also, you are more famous than me. Because i never get any pms asking for an update (almost never) or when I disappear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
rereading part 21...felt my eyes getting welled up...madhu overhears rk-tony convo...n i felt my heart broke into thousand pieces like madhu..she didn't deserve this ...for first time, madhu's past, her childhood is divulged...she has inherited all qualities from her mother, padmini--loving some1 to the core, sacrificing life for that love, living up to the promise of taking care of manav n literally living for him..
Rafangirl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful portrayal of emotions in part 22...both Rishbala trying to accept this grim situation n trying to cope up...rk more helpless...very brave of madhu- despite bearing so much betrayal, pain, hardships in life..she is still strong n in end thinking only abt surviving for manav...

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