FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 101

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Teekay its time for another thread😃

Congrats in advance dear 🥳

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

ohhh Lord..thank you for clarifying the other side of the story..though wasn't soem feel good stuf..as unable to see their [ain and agony...

Roma..guess what she told to madhu is kinda true...ohh God...separation is killing me...God..

very painful and heart touching update Teekay...but change this to FF..I don't think it is going to be an SS...coz we want more of this story

Originally posted by: teekay

Yeah, I should. I think I apologized already around chapter 16 or 17 that this is no longer a short story. 😊

Originally posted by: uma88

Res

Unres

I need to google to get some set of new words to appreciate ur writing, as i have already used few words i have known, and this chapter, this revelation, this truth, god, how much ur mind have worked to create such possibilities, as usual stunning update, i guess bothrk and madhu would die tne next moment they leave each other blaming their own fate.

My dear fate,

where are u? My poor rishbala had suffered a lot and lot individually, since the last 3 months they were better with each other, so come in form of teekay and end their miseries and get them united together forever.

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Thank you for the double updates and clearing up the confusion.

I knew Rishabh did not do it by intention but did not think that the choice was so difficult. Sorry for judging him.

Though he has made rational choice it is not fair to Madhu, but then life has been unfair to both of them.

Hoping against hope for Madhu.

I know its not fair to ask, but still please update soon. Feeling restless as to what will happen next though I know that next update won't be Tuesday evening.

Needless to say Awesome writing.

Originally posted by: silverfire

Awesome... Is too mild a word for this update n story. I can totally understand RK. He either saves 35,000 families or his madhu. Any one. It is almost Monday now. Only one more day to go. Can he save his madhu. Suspense is building up. I'm not able to sleep in the night thinking about his story. That's how addicted I have become. Plz. Continue soon.

Many be RADHAJI will help...I'm I thinking too much.

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Wohooo! rain of updates 😃

Im loving it 😎

First time im not an gry wid RK . He is not at fault this time.

Infact, he is trying to save her n so many ppl.

His biggest mistake was dat he trusted bad ppl in his past specially dips.

This RK is very kind hearted n gem of a person. I admire this RK .👍🏼👏

But wat to do if destiny has some other plans .

so prologue is coming up n im anxiously waiting to read d story after prologue .

I really wanna see wat wud madhu do now. Hw wud she save herself n her brother?

I dnt think she wud ask for anyhelp frm RK now.

NOT ONLY MADHU BUT RK TOO HAS FALLEN FOR HER❤️

Originally posted by: twinklev20

BRILLIANT UPDATE...AS USUAL... 🤗


CANT BEAR RK'S INNER TURMOIL IN THIS... ...😭 😭 😭 ...NOT ONLY FOR HIS OWN CONDITION ( and he needs her to support him emotionally for his future life...OMG), BUT ALSO FOR SAVING HIS FATHER'S LEGACY AND ALSO FOR MADHU'S SAFETY...

.....RK IS CAUGHT IN A TRIANGLE OF TROUBLES... ...


OTHER THAN GOD, ONLY YOU KNOW HOW U R GOING TO SOLVE THIS TRIANGLE OF TROUBLES TO CONVINCE US READERS...CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE

BUT SINCE YOU HAVE BUILT THE SUSPENSE EVEN MORE...PLSSS UPDATE SOON AGAIN...I KNOW AM BEING DEMANDING...BUT AM BEING SPOILT BY UR OWN EXCELLENT SUSPENSE WRITING SKILLS...😉