FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Nice updat
Feeling bad for madhu n rk
Hope rk gets to know abt madhu more n h'll respect her as any other women n would start to love her.

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Mikolingam

@Mikolingam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Heart wrecking story both Rk and Madhu 's life with such bitter experience hope Rk and Madhu find some love in their life, just want Rk to love her tenderly.(tender loving care) hope to see you write something good with both of them together thanks dear .

Very differently you started the story Madhu an escort good job well done

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

very long update

the relation between RK and madhu

is so sensitive

waiting for them to understand each other

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

great & lenghty update
plz try to post next one soon

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

AWESOME. AMAZING. SUPERB .👏👏👏

Beautifully written. Loved every bit of it. 👍🏼❤️ I had tears in my eyes when patil insulted her badly 💔

wat was her fault? For me she is still an innocent pious soul

Loved last scene ❤️

Btw where is her lil bro n does rk know abt her bro?

I guess she wont tell him her real name till she is in his house .

RK might not accept this but he has already developed a soft corner for her in his heart .He is posessive abt her he finds solace in her arms. After knowing her reality these feelings wud bcm stronger.But his ego n bitter experience might stop him frm telling her abt his feelings n tell her to leave.

plz continue soon dear. cant wait to read nex part🤗😃

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Mayajh

@Mayajh

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Thanks for the long update!! Both are in so much pain and need each other. Where is her brother? Nice update!

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

awesooome,,,,,love it so much...very well described madhu n rk's turmoil...pls update soon

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rdave1

@rdave1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

First of all WOW!!! You really have a way of getting into the human psyche. There are so many unknowns we witnessed in this chapter. RK's views on all women and Madhu's views on all men because of their experiences. I flinch every time RK's so casually uses the term prostitute to describe Madhu yet that is what she is for him but her being forced into to it makes her a sex worker. It's shocking my how easily we assign titles to people whom we know nothing about other then their profession. Phenomenal update. Great job!

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Seriously...must say the way u write ones emotions...dear..ur amazing in this...👏👏👏

coming to the story...RK need Madhu's embrace to come out of his solace...but...wlill he be able to come out of his pain and help madhu to come out as well...

whatever it is..wll be waitign for ur updates...

Thank you for this story sweety