Rajbala Janwar FF- from 3rd May episode

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My story is set after abhay kapoor was killed and Madhu tries to leave the house (still karwachauth day)

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'I can't live with a murderer like you. You didn't think once about killing anyone who are you what are you your not my Raju. Let me go please' Madhu exclaimed trying to remove his grip from Raja's hand.
'Nahi Rani ' he pulled her closer as his breath mingled with hers he placed his other arm around her waste. 'Your coming with me. Now listen to me carefully and understand it well I will Never let you go samjhi. Anything you do will be by my rules anywhere you go will be with me. Your in my life now. No one leaves my life without my permission.' Raja said in a serious tone showing power and dominance as he grabbed her closer leaving no space between them.
'Don't defy me Rani ever' he warned as he loosened the grip. Madhu felt something when she heard those words and his close proximity scared her. She wanted to run but where would she run. This man is scaring her. She thought to herself she won't be scared but something triggered . It was his voice his eyes his seriousness. She tried to step back when he grabbed her.
'Not one step without me ever samjhi' He growled at her.

Was this her life now she wondered.
'Please Raja, let me go I can't love you can't live with you' She tried to explain when he turned to her in annoyance and frowned as he put the tip of the gun to her lips . He motioned for her to be quite as he forcefully dragged her from the Abhay Mansion into his awaiting car.

It was a long journey, Raja drove as Madhu sat silently trying to figure out her life. The last 3 months especially the last three hours had changed. She wanted to run. She wanted to live a normal life with a husband a small flat kids and a working husband. But knowing what she has seen from Raja so far, would this be possible ? Who was he who is he she didn't even know. She looked at him. He was not her sweet innocent Raju but a dark villain. He says he loves her but then wants to control her. He wants her to stay. Shock then occurred to Madhu. What if he wants to consummate the marriage. It was as if he heard her thoughts

'listen Rani, I'm taking you to my world. You will meet my Dauji. And my people. Be respectful to them. It will be a shock to them that I have returned . I have some old scores to settle with a few people and it would help if you keep to my rules . Do not ever go anywhere without my permission not even out of the room. And one more thing , our marriage I remember , the vows as well. I will always protect you. But you remember yours as well. We haven't consummated our marriage . I know you need time to digest what has happened but listen carefully I'm Raja not Raju. I have needs from my wife to fulfill. I won't wait forever samjhi. I will stake my claim if forceful so be it ' he said straight without emotion concentrating on the road.

'Meaning you will ..go aganist my wishes' Madhu whimpered out frightened at the fact.

He stopped the car and looked at her intently.

'I hope it won't come to that, we have arrived.'

Madhu looked outside the window and it looked like a chawl. Similar to hers but much larger.

'This is my chawl Madhu and these are our people. Come let's go'

Precap: Raja is alive you moron I thought you killed him. Now he knows it if he founds out it was us and he going to strike .
Why are you crying this time he has a weak link that sexy item his wife.

Precap 2. Dauji, this is Madhu my wife. Dauji looked at her as she scrutised her.
'She beautiful Raja. Eh Ladki never hurt my Raja samjhi'

Precap 3 'betiyaa, I trust you will be able to help Raja become a better person. He wasn't like this before. You need to save him from Dauji rule

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful! Continue soon please ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Any more lilkes

This is what should have happened
Raja should have been a dark hero with an intense criminal past
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RishbalaAsyaMG

Any more lilkes

This is what should have happened
Raja should have been a dark hero with an intense criminal past


I luv it plz plz cont soon nd dont forget to pm me😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start ...do continue & pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start...loved it...plz pm me...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks will continue soon

Guys imagine a chawl like the one in agnepath hritjik roshan one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start !! Will it be continued ??

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