Rishabala SS : Puppy Love : Part Three (End) on Page 18 (04/06)

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stay_on_waves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

its a sweet and simple story we can call it a passtime story but not very catching an eye type... neither ai liked it nor disliked it was jst a sweet simple pass time for me... thnx 4 a sweet story lazy

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rekha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

lovely ending lazy .rk realized he loves madhu and proposed her but madhu agreed to marry mukund .poor rk koi baath nahi last main they united loved it

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swpna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

superb ss...loved it...
ending was awesome...
thanks for this amazing ss...

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Its ended never thought so it will end so soon.

I like Rishabh's two things in return. He realised his love for her and Madhu cannot give his place to anyone. It was perfect ending. Through out I was thinking will he go forever what will happen now. Thanks a lot and keep it up. Good work. 🤗

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

I realized that in the middle of paragraph three, I was holding my breath! I knew something was coming.

I loved your writing for Madhu in this story. Her emotions, her confusion was written so well.

What a situation to be in!

It was heart breaking. Madhu finally gets her confession of love and it is on the eve of her wedding to another! That was painful!!!

After RK finds out the truth, honestly I was not feeling much for him. My pain was with Madhu but when Trishna goes to see him - well then I felt really bad for him.

And then the conversation between RK and Madhu on her wedding day was really good! It was beautiful!!!! I forgave RK for the last chapter!

Beautiful ending. I loved it!!!!

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sufidox

@sufidox

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

THE JOURNEY OF HER LOVE WAS JUST MIND BLOWING ND IT QUITE HAPPENS SOMETIMES. I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT THE END WAS SIMILAR TO MOHABBAT NA HO JAYE UNTIL YOU SAID THAT IN THE LAST PART.
ALSO PLZ UPDATE BEWITCHED FAST. I AM WAITING. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃