LAZYYY DEAR,after a long time 😊😊😊...sry for being late to comment 😒😒😒...i was one of ur readers who asked u to post the puppy love in rishbala version but yet i didn't comment for first two parts...so sry dear...i will make it up to u by giving a detailed review 😊😊😊...actually i think i'm helping myself to express my feeling about this story otherwise the pressure will go up inside my body and i will burst 😆😆😆...actually i had read the parts early...but after reading 1st part we(me and my family) went out so couldn't reply...after reading second part my eyes got wet that i decided to comment later but missed ...and yesterday night i read the last part...and ended up in crying 😭😭😭...i'm telling this truly dear...anyway i'm not surprised with my behaviour of crying,ur words always hav such an effect on me 😃😃😃1st part:the line that first captured my mind was "she felt so lonely that she had cried herself to sleep"...it reminded me of my first n8t in my hostel...during the daytime i was okay but when the night came and when i saw a family near the hostel frm my hostel bedroom window(on 3rd floor) i cried...i missed my family then...so i liked that line 😊😊😊
then next part i liked is the way by which madhu and trishna became frnds...do u know what, i hav told this story to my best frnd in clg...she knows u all frm (frm my talking ofcourse 😉😉😉)...she too liked it...then she laughed out loud when i said the "happy birthday" part 😆😆😆
then the dialogue..."i trishna kundra,hereby give..." it was like i'm reading a court declaration 😆😆😆 then madhu touching the part where rk ruffled her hair ...oh lazy i'm imagining that
2nd part:oh god...i liked this madhu...putting trishna and sullu together for getting her chocolate boy 😆😆😆
my fav.part was madhu telling malick this "It's true, Papa. I never consider RK like that, just like how RK had never considered me in that way." 😭😭😭 and hugging her close...u portrayed a nice father-daughter relation even it was by some sentences 😊😊😊
Can i plz quote my fav.parts???
1)Being her best friend I know that you broke her heart and I will never forgive you for that.
2)Suddenly, her tears, every word, every gesture she had made today were making more sense to him.
and my most fav part...oh i love you lazy for each word for this phone conversation... 3)"RK?" and she hears him gasp softly and then he stammers "How.. how did you know?" "I just knew." She whispers. RK was silent for a while then he says "I never knew, Madhu." "I know, RK." "I am sorry." "It's not your fault." "Then why do I feel so?" he asked her desperately. "Because you are a nice man. Because you care for others." She said in tears. "Then why did I end up hurting everyone? Why is everyone in pain because of me?" "It's not because of you, RK. It is because of me. They love me, that's why." Madhu says. "Even I love you, Madhu." RK said. "I know, RK. Just not the way we wanted." Madhu said sadly
4)"Never had the courage to tell you and when I was going to do that, there was no need for it."
5)I didn't have that magic that you wanted
3rd part:in milchi's forum when i read prachi saying "i'm getting married.tomarrow is my marriage" i too was shocked 😲😲😲...shocked beyond limits 😲😲😲...somehw i too thought madhu will wait for rk...but trishna was also right.they can't ruin her life!...
when i was reading madhu's part where she asked trishna why didn't she told rk that she was getting married...and rk also asking the same...my eyes were filling 😭😭😭...and the dam broke when rk entered in the dressing room at her marriage 😭😭😭...i wanna copy and paste the whole part...but my comment is becoming longgg...i was really crying lazyyy 😭😭😭...just like i cried reading it in milchi...i told u i was reading the last part at yesterday n8t...so when i looked into mirror before going to sleep...my eyes and nose were red(but strangely i was looking beautiful in that too 😆😆😆)...anyway i'm happy when i got the old rk and madhu back at the end 😊😊😊
plz plz will u plz write epilogue???????...i know u wrote "END" also...but plz lazy...PUPPY face for writing the epilogue of PUPPY love