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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bria

❤️love u sonu🤗Dil ki baat boli...i was thinking the same things...MB is now a sinking show and no1 can save it ...they made many blunders in past and they r repeating them even now...and their biggest blunder was TAKING LEAP...their so called TRP was much better be4 this crap...


ps: its high time they change the name to ABHAY EK BADLA EK JUNNON



thanks Bria and I agree it was better to end the show with RM after 500 episode, or I guess there should be rule that no daily soap could be on air more than a year. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Na na na..this is all the fault of Gunjan...at least is what RKbala fans used to say before superstar uhhh ex superstar entry... so now don't put the fault on the amazing storyline created by AS team and fans who helped him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant excellent post shonuu
they should have learnt from their previous experience
previously the first mistake was sultan introduction
second mistake was the heroine track
third mistake was the miscarriage
fourth mistake was ria
fifth mistake was rm death
sixth mistake was gu as a hero
seventh mistake was making jm so helpless
at times i feel if even she is rm daughter
she is just so submissive and abla bechaari
they have to make many changes
they have to give us a good story
they have to make the leads too strong
they have to make madhu give back to ak
they have to make someone like ananya support madhu
they have to make madhu find out her parents truth
they have to remove the k clan from the rk mansion
they have to stop giving ak the left overs of rk
they cannot give ak the same dialogs as rk
wish u tweet this thread to AS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bang on!. I am not a Ekta Kapoor fan but still her shows have better story line and creatives . All the supporting actors have a role in her shows. Whatever TRPs they are getting now is just from few crazy fans like us.

The leads of this show are given the worst dress/clothes in the whole TV industry. 😡
Edited by bcbs_srk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: priyachand

Very good analysis Shonnu! PH job dint end with bringing VD back in d show. Evn crap episodes in season 1 worked becos of rishbala, bt to achieve that effect rishbala story had a very strong base n well defined characters.

bt in this season, there has been no planning n casual disregard to characterisation n storyline. we cdnt evn connect much with JM after she came to mumbai. post leap till the story ws in mathura, the trp was also not bad, infact it rose. cvs shd have focused on giving a good story line.

if they had planned post leap then they shd also have planned good story line. their first mistake ws in selection GU who dint suit the role of a super star. that started the first slip.

people who were used to DVD pairing were unable to accept the new lead. if GU ws a better actor this might still have worked. bt he ws not n ppl started rejecting n leaving the show. (the leftover few fans)

so emergency situation VD ws brougt back. wonderful move by AS! bt shdnt he also spent some time on storyline. all of us knw success of the first season ws RK n rishbala romance. and there was enough obstacles to make d story interesting. initially we had balllu in waiting, deepali to give local effect and rishbala themselves fighting with each other.

whereas in second season we have abhay whose reason for revenge is very weak n his methods are so kiddish that it is not evn funny. LW n sweety play season 2 deepali bt the revenge they attempt are cinderalla times. whn d prince who is supposed to come as a saviour is himself playing a victim, wht hope fans will have.

still i wd say the story is still salvageable provided cvs take some emergency measures. i still feel optimistic. apart from improvign the track, PH also shd give some attention on promoting the show.

apart from few promos there are no promos at al. new show like BI is promoted in other channels like zoom. MB promotion is not happening evn in colors. AS, can get them to do a live chat in NF or give some OLV or somethign to keep the buzz live.

bt the major thing to be focused shd be d story. if not for good story we will nto have good show.

hope AS does the needful.



Awesome write up Priya 👏

I dont know why the writers don't write the characters as humans.. do u find JM human? and people are offended for the disrespect of woman.. let her get humanly rights first and then talks about women rights.. chalo lets put ourselves in her shoes? chalo I am JM for instance .. the first thing I would do is to call Bittu and tell him to dont let AK and his calls to get access to Radha and then call the police and human rights organization at AK mansion and get him arrested.. after that I would make sure to become that powerful that no body in their right mind could think of harming me or exploiting me in any way.. if money and success gives AK a license to control and ruin others life I wouldn't be at peace till I attain that power to show him his place.. and then I would think of charity and social work and think to make Raju's life better.. here maa-baap mar gaye? ok! let them go to hell.. lets play ghar ghar with Raju.. I am sorry but I have no respect for someone who has no self respect.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Good Post Shonnu.. and you perfectly said all the Facts... the show was kind of ruined even before it get its start... They shud have easily gone for Reincarnation other than going for Leap.. but again I think it was ST's call to go for Leap so that he can cut off one of the most popular leads from the show as part to closing the show.. then the spilt became official and AS got MB.. so he tried his hand in already week story... but he need to Try even more hard very Hard...

Instead of bringing some random look-alike of RK as Raju that too a mentally challenged one.. and getting him married to Madhu as Revenge... AK shud have shown as making some plastic surgery to his own some younger mentally challenged bro (who was locked in some dark room for yrs) to have a look alike of RK so that he can take revenge on RM2 thinking them as RM1... and Since this Raju is from the same Kapoor family.. there wont be any pblm for JM to stay there...
Meanwhhile they shud have also shown as JM getting curious about her parenst and about their death.. and she can even claim her right in that Mansion... later they shud have shown as Raju getting back to Normal but still being a Kapoor family memeber decided to fake before JM to help AK without knowing the tru colors of him...

Raju faking before Madhu and feeling weird with her closeness as a friend and seeing her standing for him wud have been intresting to watch... Later they can show Raji double crossing AK... and AK coming to know about real murder of his dad... and retiring from his Villian act...
And JM leaving Raju for faking to her... and Raju can become all possessive towards her...
and then some BW story like Raju doing movies or trying to launch JM after seeing her talent and knowing her wish...
JM wont confess her love to Raju bcos of her self respect & pride... and Raju hesitating to confess his love becos of his male-ego and attitude... and their fight when they are together and their ishq when they are away... Pam and NIk can show their couple act to make and create more problems in RM2's life... and RM figting against them for eachother's love...

Sorry Shonnu i was about to write a reply comment to your analysis but ended up in writing stories for MB on RM2... Thanks to MB CVS... I really hope they bring some strong story line to the show before it is too late...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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now its all storyline,dress,look problem before its gunjun and DD 🤣 atleast glad DD had better than now sharam naak T.R.P 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are right. The story line is weak. While we had a strong script in the first season. Adding one more point, in the first season everything about MB was filmy. I liked that aspect, the eccentric villain (Ballu), mother India, Shamsher Malik reminded me of dharam paaji and cherry on cake RK!!
In this season only the word hero,superstar AK is the filmy connection that the show has now. Hope they focus on the main track rather than bringing in extras. Even now if she old everything to bittuji, moved to chawl, tried to get into movies and avenged AK it would make sense. but i have no hope
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Plz post this to cv's too. Taki unhe akal aaye.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@RM fans, you all can happily kill Nats, I am not going to protect her 🤣🤣🤣

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