Rishbala OS - Code Red epilogue on pg 9

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

woww UMA a OS with a flashback and epilogue...and that too Madhu has a different character..nice yah..keep it up darling :) muah

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

ha ha ...padmini not only made sulthan fool but also us too 😆😆😆

hey hey i liked ur idea 😊😊😊...so can i believe whole this code red was inspired frm vishawaroopam???...means the idea clicked ur mind when u were watching that movie?hun?? 😊😊😊

do u know which was the line i liked most???

enjoying the death of their enemies who wore the army dress, they never care about the human inside the dress, all they want to kill as many lives in that dress 😊😊😊

i'm happy with my rishbala...nice ending uma 👏👏👏

p.s:happy to know u liked my gift 😃😃😃

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rekha

@rekha.366

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

superb ending uma 👏 👏iam proud of madhu👏👏padmini i like her she is good mother

Edited by rekha.366 - 11 years ago

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Its awesome Uma 😳😛 !!! So Madhu dis choose RK instead of her family and village 😳 !! she even saved RK !! Code red... though had a different meaning but glad Padmini knew it from before and she actually supported her child through out !!

Loved for the happy ending 😛 !!!
Its very different take ..must say kindled many emotions satisfactorily 😳😳 !!
so Congrats Uma , for the successful trial 🥳

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shasha

@shasha1989

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

superb update uma...it's really a surprise ending dear

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Uma this is fantastic...i really want to applaud you for this writing...you have always been writing the romcom..but this is entirely a different genre...and i must say girl...you stood with flying colors...lovely madam...lovely..

this is absolutely a wonderful epilogue...it's just not an addition to the story...but it unfolds the story...may a times even if we odnt read an epilogue we can get the story...bu this is entirely different...if you dont go through it...you will never get what is CODE RED.

just loved it...keep bringing them on...

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: kg15
Uma... Silly you!!! For this you were crossing your fingers!! It was simply as brilliant as the previous part!! You cleared everything sis!!! And yippiieee... My speculation turned out true!!
Starting from the initials... Till Sultan conveyed Padmini the message, I was angry on her for the she used her daughter as a bait but as soon as I proceeded, I was happy that the actual meaning of the CODE RED changed finally!!!

Finally, she flew away from her disgusting world to her love!!! She again proved the power of love!! I was really impressed!!!
And Rishabh, as I was thinking, he survived!!! But you managed to keep the real him intact even after the disaster!!! I felt bad when I read the last paragraph... She never looked in his eyes after that!!! She still felt guilty for the night!! But with Rishabh's efforts, they will overcome soon... He will get his Madhu back...

I just loved this story!! You emoted so well Sis!! Fab piece!!!

@Tanuja- dekh Tanu, Mera asar nahi Hua!!! Hahaha Kavya to ek hi hai!!!