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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christobelle

a really different story

waiting for the next

Thank you dear, will post the next and final part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ha ha ha, very different title na, i copied it from Vishwaroopam movie.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha.366

awesome os uma 👏👏loved so madhu is terrorist but she loves rk but cant do any thing for him kya rk died in the blast i hope not😭😭😭 waiting for epiologue😃

Thank you rekha dear, ya she loves RK, but she has no other way
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shasha1989

it's a nice different story dear
waiting for the epilogue

Thank you shasha dear, will post the epilogue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow uma...i liked the concept 👏
a naughty rishabh as military officer 😆...and a brave madhu as a true jungili billi 😆
wow...u know which part i liked most????...the part where madhu pulls her the cloth off her face before rishabh does...wow...what a scene was that!!!!! 👏

it somehw reminds me dilse movie...but don't make a sad ending

i think in epilogue she will hav a son...but rk ????alive or not????? 😕😕

code red means "be ready with weapons",right?...for an emergency!!! 😕😕

i hav a gift for u...not a gift but...hav a look... 😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

wow uma...i liked the concept 👏

a naughty rishabh as military officer 😆...and a brave madhu as a true jungili billi 😆
wow...u know which part i liked most????...the part where madhu pulls her the cloth off her face before rishabh does...wow...what a scene was that!!!!! 👏

it somehw reminds me dilse movie...but don't make a sad ending

i think in epilogue she will hav a son...but rk ????alive or not????? 😕😕

code red means "be ready with weapons",right?...for an emergency!!! 😕😕

i hav a gift for u...not a gift but...hav a look... 😃




Wow Rose, it was so nice, if i had got this pic sterday, i would posted it on that part, no issues, will post it now.
Love you Rose, No i don't know the actual meaning of it, code red means the said person is dead or the mission was completed, like that, i got this from a movie.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey friends, i know many of u were confused with the title, i have tried all possible ways to explain it clear by this update, this will have a small flashback + epilogue.Here it goes.




That was a mourning day throughout the country, but at one part of the village, it was a great celebration, though everyone in the army office, knew it was their work, but they didn't have any strong evidence against them, and apart from, now it was their first preference to look into the missing soldiers, to check whether their alive or not or they are in need of any medical aid. And some of them were busy with informing the sad news of the death of their beloved to their family members, and to tighten the security at the border so as to prevent any further attack.

While a group of people were indulged on working on the blasted bomb, the make, from where it came, but most of their questions remain unanswered, and nobody has any clue to trace the problem and how to sort it out finally.The celebration was going in full form in the same village, people having beer, dancing, enjoying the death of their enemies who wore the army dress, they never care about the human inside the dress, all they want to kill as many lives in that dress. Everyone was enjoying in one form, dancing, drinking and etc, but a pair of eyes remain away from all these, and was waiting for some beloved one, and kept her eye on the door, and finally saw a man entering the door, and she rushed to it and said "Did, you find her sultan, tel me, where is she? where is my madhu?" asked padmini to her son.

He glared her and replied back "Thats why i told you, not to involve her in this, she is not fit for these, she has soft corner for him, i could see the pain in her eyes, and i pleaded her to come na dmeet you once, but she never mind to come back and see us or join with us in our happiness, her life is more important for her than ours. " He paused and continued "Ya and finally she asked me to convey a message to you" she raised her head with so much hope and she heard him say "CODE RED" and finally she was happy, this was what she was longing to hear from her. Sultan stood at the same place and said "See you people will never grow up, still using the old code language, which even the new joinee in that army office can guess" and he left the place and joined the celebration.

Padmini smiled seeing her son and said herself " Its you, who has to grow up, CODE RED is not what as you think, (CODE RED - This is a name given to the plan/ operation , and it defines that the said person is dead/no more - even i doesn't know about this, i got this information from the movie Vishwaroopam - a kamal starer movie, hope u all remember).


FLASHBACK

"Are you sure?" asked padmini to Madhu, she smiled at her and replied, "Its my turn now, i will get it done at any cost" padmini who was still not convinced with her daughter's decision said "Am ur mother, am more worried for you, and those guys, you know, they were not good, they will go to any extreme, and play with our life" She said this and turned around to saw the retreating figure of her daughter, he cursed her fate, when she gave birth to her daughter, her community, it never gives any good chance for women, and she knew this was going to happen to her daughter too, she has to risk her life, her feminity to get her work done, and their community people taught their daughters from the age of 5, that they should do anything for getting their committed work done, and thats why madhu accompanied by two other girls fled to the army office to get the file, which has stored all their personal details and their identification, which may cause a problem after the operation.

And later that day, Madhu ran back to padmini and informed about her encounter with Rishab, padmini was little scared, so she decided to make madhu stay away from this operation, but before she could take the matter in her hands, it was their village president, who heard everything madhu said to padmini, and decided to play madhu as the trump card to implement the operation through Rishab Kundra, and they wantedly sent madhu to meet him regularly, but the plan moved slowly which caused a great tension among the villagers, so they decided to bring an end to this operation, so they sketched a plan and asked madhu to bring Rishab, out of the army office, to their place, either by her talks, or by seducing him. And they asked her to bring him under her control at any cost, risking anything of her. Madhu was little shaken by their words, she was confused a little, she went to the terrace thinking about the outcomes of the this operation, padmini found her deep in thoughts,and she went near her and talked to her for sometime, and before leaving the place, she said " We were born with this duty borne on us, and there is no way to go beyond this, and now you are on this mission and you have to do this. If you are not going to do this now, they will risk another girl's life and get this done, so think well before you implement, save yourself, save your love, i want your happiness at any cost" and she kissed madhu in her forehead and bid a goodbye to madhu.

And next day, she found madhu lying on her bed teary-eyed, she guessed, it was all because of the previous day, and she decided not to interfere,and left her alone to think well about her life, and few days passed by with this silence, then again padmini spotted madhu on the same place on the terrace and went and patted her back and smiled at her, and madhu cried hard saying " I failed as a girl, i failed as a daughter and i failed myself, i coudn't stand his love" Padmini was little shocked hearing this, and she convinced her saying "If your love is true, it will help you to get him back, don't let him know ur identity at any cost."

Finally on the fateful day, Madhu was looking so pale, she didn't replied back to padmini nor waited for her, she just rushed like a lightning and stopped on his office, she knew, he will try to get her, so she dropped the gift box on the wall outside once she was sure that he saw her, and she flew just like that out of that place.And padmini was so restless, waiting to hear about her daughter, and when sultan came and told that Madhu wanted to convey "CODE RED" to her, she was more than happy remembering their first convo on the terrace a few days back." I would wait for you madhu, the day you would want to go out of this place, the day u realize that ur life lies outside this place, but u will not be able to get back to me,and don't forget to pass me on this happy message, that you are leaving this place,don't fear how u will pas this message to me, just say CODE RED to any one u meet last at that time, which clearly says that u quit from this"

For others including sultan , the term CODE RED meant that the operation was complete or the person targetted was dead or no more or any such thing.But only padmini could find the real menaing behind it that Madhu decided to quit from her past life, to cut off all her relation with them,and she smiled amidst the pain of missing her daughter.



FLASHBACK ENDS



2 years later

There was no traces of a bomb blast at army office, everybody became conscious after that one incident,and never ever any suspected culprtis were let to roam freely and the villagers have been drown out of the place mercilessly. Everybody were right on their position, as they were waiting for the secret message from their government, which was encrypted and sent. And the detected signals are decrypted by cryptologist and given to the Colonel in-charge. And this information is highly-confidential, and the only people who knew who the cyryptologist was the colonel, for his/her safety purpose.

This time, the secret message reeived was a map describing a particular are nearby the border, where there were no human traces, but for past few days, somehting abnormal was detected through the satellite and they were ordered to check the particular area immediately, before anything happens.The colonel commanded everyone to take up their place, and all were set to that place, and few reporting officers stayed along with the colonel to communicate to the other soldier and to the call from their head office. The colonel handed over the walky-talky to the officers there and excused himself for few minutes,and came back to the room to thank the cryptologist, and he went inside and smiled seeing him, he seemed to maintain his hot looks even with the horrible scars on his
face.

He hugged him and said "Well done young man, but y do u want to hide urself in dark, is this due to this scar, come on Rishab, girls will drool over you even now" He smiled and replied " I will come back at the right time, serving for the nation is my aim thoguhout my life, so i want to be here through any form,and am thankful to you, that you allowed me to work at this place, and offered this role, and about the girls drooling over me, i am no more interested in that, i have a wife at my home to drool over me anytime" and he started back to his home.

He went back to his home and went inside to find his wife, neatly folding clothes and placing it on their wardrobe, he back hugged her and kissed her earlobe and asked "Missed Me?" she nodded her head and he made her face him, and he again mistakenly looked into her eyes, her yes, which lead them to this much distraught, she never face him after that fateful day, Rishab who understood her situation, had forgiven her, even without any apologies from her, he forced her to marry him, she who is filled with guilt, just lived like a dead woman.

On that day of bomb blast, He went to answer the call, on which padmini explained all the happiness and how madhu was trapped in it, and in the meanwhile, the bomb blasted, and he was thrown away.He opened his eyes after few hours and found him in hospital with madhu being in his side, he tried to get up and madhu helped him up, madhu didn't face him, he held her by hands and was about to tel that he learnt everything from his mom about the plan, but before that she told "I am responsible for all this, don't confuse my love for u with this, i hope u trust my word" and he kept his finger on her lips to make her stop,and he could see the pain in her eyes, and hence he decided on that day, that they both will never discuss about this ever in their life.

He nuzzled her neck and said "Biwi, how about a long drive" she nodded a NO, he moved his lips all over her neck,and she gripped him tightly, and he repeated the same question and again it was a NO from her, he slowly went down her neck, with these two years of life and love making, he knows how to turn her on, and not able to take more, Madhu started to moan his name,and after a small make-out they both went for a long drive. Though Rishab was succeding little by little to bring madhu out of this grave silence, she tries hard to live with it.

Finally i have completed it, still if u have any doubts, please feel free to ask me, as i may have missed to explain it at some places. Now time for your likes and comments.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uma... Silly you!!! For this you were crossing your fingers!! It was simply as brilliant as the previous part!! You cleared everything sis!!! And yippiieee... My speculation turned out true!!
Starting from the initials... Till Sultan conveyed Padmini the message, I was angry on her for the she used her daughter as a bait but as soon as I proceeded, I was happy that the actual meaning of the CODE RED changed finally!!!
Finally, she flew away from her disgusting world to her love!!! She again proved the power of love!! I was really impressed!!!
And Rishabh, as I was thinking, he survived!!! But you managed to keep the real him intact even after the disaster!!! I felt bad when I read the last paragraph... She never looked in his eyes after that!!! She still felt guilty for the night!! But with Rishabh's efforts, they will overcome soon... He will get his Madhu back...
I just loved this story!! You emoted so well Sis!! Fab piece!!!
@Tanuja- dekh Tanu, Mera asar nahi Hua!!! Hahaha Kavya to ek hi hai!!!
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow very nice epilogue👏 very different story & u ve written it too well👍🏼
u ve maintained d suspense till d end & as u said it was a real surprise for me😛 i m really happy that my hero is safe & rishbala is living together forever😳
i m sure rk will look ever more hotter with that scar😉😆
so code red means ... dropping d killer plan & living happily with urs loved 1s😈😆 very nice code word btn paddo & madhu but poor sultan thought it was a very old code word. yes! d word was old par uska matlab kuch aur hi hai😉😆
one word from vishwaroopam made u write a wonderful story😳
keep writing more of such stories😃
thank u🤗


Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome epilogue. ...thank god d meaning of CODE RED changed. ...😉.
rk is alive ...yay...
this is a different story from all of which I have read till now...I loved d concept...😃
Keep writing dear...
Edited by shriyakadge - 11 years ago

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