Deception|RiMa Mini FanFic|Final Chapter 7-Page:22 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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t's a nice & different concept...
i have sent u a buddy request...plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!! loved it...plz add me to ur pm list...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic! Love the concept! Please pm me your next updates .,..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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realyyy nice interesting prolg waiting fr the story to star awesome banner😛 it reminds me of Mb s golden days filled with junoon rage😳 n all continueee soon plzzz n count me in
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is good stuff Tash :)
didnt know you write too :)
and your an awsome writer :)

please Pm me when you update :) <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The following 27 member(s) liked the above post:

vishti4eva, pa24703987, Ponochka, sekiigirl101, TRPS, momi78, ashabanerjee, v.p.joshi, rinku06, revathinair, manju01, ainanwer, iluvrainaarti, mydrashti, rishabalalove, meenji22, aan-rish, shasha1989, aDarkAngel, 4ever4love, arunsunita_gm, shweta2728, sanghita0000, namita25, -StephinesS-, rima4ever, rekha.366,

Thank you so much everyone for taking the time to read.comment and like the prologue. I'm really touched. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha.366

wow lovely prologue so rk is cop and madhu criminal interesting madhu want to end her life and rk want to save her and madhu having child so she is married ;interesting waiting for next update and please pm me


Thank you rekha. I'm glad you liked the prolouge. And I will surely pm you.

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

I love your idea for this story. Good luck.

I find RK's attitude amusing. Instead of worrying for Madhu, he is mad at her and wants to yell at her. I love it!

I have sent you a buddy request!!!!

Pls continue soon! 😃

Thank you hun for your sweet comment. I'm sorry I don't know your name. But thank you for liking the prolouge. Yeah he is not happy with her right now. And okay I shall add u to my buddy list.

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Wow nice concept! I love the way you write! You have to continue!!!

Thank you shweta! Aww really I'm glad. I don't like my writing very much. And I will continue for sure.

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

It's great coz it's different 😉 !! Am a sucker for investigation plots lol !! But when the agent /cop feels for the victim then it's a different story heheh !! Here it's even intense, as RK is already in kind of dilemma regarding madhubala and to make things complicated she has tried to commit suicide !! Very very interesting !! I would love to read whether RK is even right about his instincts reg Madhu and if what it looks on the surface is real or is it a layer of deception !!

Ok now you know..am all ears , eyes and all heart for the story 😆..pls continue soon 😛

Thank you hun. I'm sorry I don't know your name. But thank you for the sweet comment. I'm glad you like the plot already. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ainanwer

very nice and different concept

Originally posted by: rishabalalove

nice concept...i have sent u buddy req.. Pls pm me

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Interesting concept... Continue soon

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wonderful start

please continue

Originally posted by: chinnamsahithi

nice start plz continue soon...plz pm me whenever u update...

Thank you all so very much for enjoying the prolouge. I am really out of words. I hope you all will enjoy the rest of the story just as much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aan-rish

Really nice prologue 👏. Pls continue soon. Can u pls send me pm whenever u update 😊

Originally posted by: shasha1989

t's a nice & different concept...
i have sent u a buddy request...plz pm me

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! loved it...plz add me to ur pm list...😃

Originally posted by: momi78

Fantastic! Love the concept! Please pm me your next updates .,..

Thank you everyone. I'm really touched. I hope I don't let you guys down.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -StephinesS-

This is good stuff Tash :)
didnt know you write too :)
and your an awsome writer :)

please Pm me when you update :) <3

Originally posted by: namita25

amazing prologue...loved it.

Originally posted by: mydrashti

realyyy nice interesting prolg waiting fr the story to star awesome banner😛 it reminds me of Mb s golden days filled with junoon rage😳 n all continueee soon plzzz n count me in

Thank you guys. I'm glad to know you liked the intro. And thanks to those who liked my banner and think that my writing is good.😳

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