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thank you zoya! I'm glad u liked the update! and thank you for commenting.
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Hi everyone. So I firstly just want to thank everyone for liking the first chapter and for the really sweet comments and feedback. I really appreciate it. Anyway below is chapter 2 to this FF. I hope it's decent and worth reading so let me know how it was. And I'm sorry for any errors. The index and pm req is on page 1. Okay bye.
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-Chapter 2-

She glanced at her watch impatiently for the last time as her irritation was beginning to get the best of her. She had been sitting on the local park bench for the past half an hour waiting for this Madhubala girl to arrive. RK had texted her the day before saying that he was going to bring Madhubala to the park near by around 11am so that they could meet. Pooja had gladly agreed and being the punctual person that she was she had arrived exactly at 11. But little had she known that she would have to play the waiting game. Pooja was known for being on time for everything. She didn't like to be kept waiting. Ever since she was young she had always been told by her parents to be early for things as that showed you were a responsible person and that you respected the value of time. Everyone around her knew that fact about her and yet they still made her wait. She just didn't understand why everyone tired to figure out new ways to annoy her. Why couldn't they just be truthful and not drag her along. She had better things to do.

Okay seriously! If He doesn't show up in the next 5 minutes then I am going! I don't have all day here to sit and wait! I have other things to do!

Pooja looked around the park hoping to spot RK and sure enough a minute later she saw him walking towards her with a woman she assumed to be was Madhubala.

"Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! I know. I know were late. But I couldn't help it! I got held up at the station."

"You know there is something called a PHONE! You use it to communicate with people so you can tell them when you are running LATE!"

"I'm said I'm sorry! I promise never again!"

"Fine. But only because you are Sameer's friend!"

"Thank you Pooja! I love you!"

"Yeah yeah yeah. Enough! Now introduce me to your friend."

"She's not my friend!"

"Whatever! Are you going to introduce me or not?"

"I am! Pooja. This is Madhubala. And Madhubala This is Pooja."

"Hi Madhubala. Nice to meet you."

Pooja smiled at her warmly as she extended her hand for her to shake. But instead of getting the usual hand in return to shake Madhubala just stood there motionless.

Okay. I guess she's not in the mood.

"Um..anyways why don't you sit down Madhubala and we can talk."

"Yeah. Madhubala have a seat and you can talk to Pooja while I go and make a phone call. I'll be back in a bit."

And with that RK excused himself and walked away from them allowing Pooja to do her thing with the hopes that Madhubala would at least talk to her.

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"So...What happened? Did she say anything?"

He stared at her waiting to hear a response. After he had left Pooja alone with Madhubala his mind had constantly been distracted. He had kept thinking if his idea had worked or not. He wanted to know if Madhubala had opened up to Pooja or not. He didn't know why but it had been eating him up alive. He just wanted to know. And so after escorting Madhubala back to her cell RK and come back to his office to talk to Pooja. But it seemed from the expression that Pooja was currently displaying that she was deep in thought and wasn't paying attention to him.

"Pooja!"

"Huh? Oh sorry. What did you say?"

"I said! What happened with Madhubala? Did she say anything?"

"No. I tired RK. I really did. But she just wouldn't say a word. I mean I kept on talking and talking and she just sat beside me and looked at me as if I was crazy. I didn't know what else to do. I mean I'm usually able to make people talk and yet she has her guard up I guess."

"Dammit! I really thought this would work. Now what am I going to do!"

"I don't know if this will help or not but...

"But what?"

"Why don't you try to be her friend?"

"Her Friend? Are you crazy! Why would I want to be her friend?"

" Let me ask you this. You're the only person that she has had the most contact with since she was arrested right?"

"Yeah. So?"

"So...if you try to become her friend maybe she will feel more comfortable talking to you and maybe she will open up."

"I am not doing that! You know what happened last time...and I don't want to go through that again. I won't be able to handle it."

"I know. I know RK. I understand but that was the past. I know it's not going to be easy but if you really want to save her life then you are just going to have to do it. It's the only way."

"Why are you so annoying?"

"Because..I'm Sameer's girlfriend. So something was bound to rub off."

"Yeah. I guess your right. I'll try to be her friend."

"That's the sprit. Okay I better go. I have to meet my mom for lunch. So I'll see ya later. Bye."

"Bye Pooja. And thanks again for your help."

"Anytime."

And with that Pooja got up from her seat leaving RK alone with his new task.

Great! Just great! Now I have to become her friend! And how am I going to do that? She doesn't even respond! It will be like talking to a wall. I mean the last time I was friends with a woman it didn't end well. And since that day I promised never to be too close to a woman. And now I have to do it all over again. Man! I am so screwed.

Pooja glanced behind her one last time as she walked out the door and smiled. She could see her idea had worked. She had purposely told him that she had tired her level best and failed. She knew he would get frustrated and would end up doing whatever she said. After all she wasn't a therapist for anything. She knew how the mind worked. And if she wanted to clear her doubts that RK may have developed feelings for this Madhubala girl then she had just been given all the proof she needed.

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He watched as his best friend paced back and forth in front of him mumbling to himself.

He had never seen RK so nervous about a woman before. RK was the kind of person who could charm a girl without even trying. He was the outgoing one. He wasn't scared of anything. Hell he could take a bullet for someone without even thinking. And yet his best friend who was a great police officer, who fought with criminals, was having to think twice about how to be friends with a woman. Sameer almost couldn't help but stifle a laugh. This sure was one side of Rishabh Kundra that he had never imagined existed.

"Will you stop? You're going to be fine. She's not going to bite you!"

RK who had been lost in his thoughts jumped in his skin as Sameer's voice resounded into his ears.

"What you mean I'm going to be fine? No I'm not! I can't be friends with her! It's not going to happen! You know what happened last time!"

"RK you can't let the past keep coming in the way. What happened then is over with. Okay fine. Don't be friends with her. Don't get the information you need. Don't bring any justice to her. Let her die."

RK stopped pacing as Sameer's words hit him. What the hell was he about to do? How could he let his past come in the way? How could he give up on someone he was trying to help? That's not what a police officer did.

I can't believe myself. I can't give up like this. I can't let the past interfere. I need to be strong. I can do this. I can be friends with Madhubala.

"Okay. I'll give it a try."

"That's what I like to hear. Best of luck!"

"Thanks. I'm going to need it."

Okay Madhubala. Let's be friends.

As he watched his friend leave the room Sameer couldn't help but smile. He couldn't believe Pooja had been right. If she had not called him before RK had arrived he would have never been able to see what she meant. His best friend had unknowingly developed an attachment to Madhubala. He would have never thought a day like this would come again. After what RK had been through in the past Sameer had been worried about him. He hadn't seen him show so much concern about someone in a long time. But now that he was seeing it Sameer prayed that it continued. After all he only wanted to see his best friend happy.

If what Pooja and I are thinking dude is right, then I couldn't be more happy. I know right now it seems like things aren't going your way but I'm sure you'll be able to fix everything. You always do. Man I just hope we are not wrong about this. I just want to see you happy man. I just want to see you happy.

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He stood outside her cell trembling in his skin. It had been a long time since he had last tried to be friends with a woman. He tired to avoid it at all cost. After what he had been through in the past he had promised himself he wouldn't go down that road. As it only lead to pain. He had tried to drown himself with his work as much as he could so that the idea of even talking to another woman would evade his mind. But little had he known that there would be a time where he would be put into such a situation that he would have to start over. He now had to for the sake of Madhubala and his job learn how to bond with a female all over again.

Okay. Deep breath. I can do this. I can be friends with her. I can talk to her. There is nothing to be scared of. Like Sameer said...she won't bite me. She's only a woman. She's not a monster. What's the worse that could happen? She won't say a word? But then I'll have to think of something else? No. Be positive. This will work. This has to work. I've tried everything else. Okay RK. Go for it. Just be yourself. Don't think about anything else. Just go in there and talk to her and everything should be fine. And remember don't treat her like a criminal. Treat her like a normal person you meet at a coffee shop. Okay. Okay. Best of luck. Omg. I can't believe I'm going to do this. God help me!

And so with a last silent prayer RK put in his keycard opening her cell door and walked in ready to start his mission be Madhubala's friend. As the door closed behind him enclosing him in the room his heart began to beat rapidly inside his chest as if it was a speeding train. His feet that were used to constantly being on the move where now glued to the floor refusing to move. If it had been any other person he would have gladly went ahead without any hesitation. But the fact was that it wasn't just any person it was Madhubala and she was a female who he now had to become friends with at all cost

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update dear what was rks past thay he is afraid of being friend with girl ,waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vrrry nice n what past really wanted to know continu sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Frndship huh? nyc update ...thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant update Tashu Di!Love Sameer & His GF!Poor RK is so nervous!Waiting to know RK's past & see Rishbala's conversation!Pls continue soon!
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I love Pooja and Sameer -- great friends! But very curious to know what happened in the past when RK tried to be friends with someone else or was it Madhubala herself?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice n rk's past want to know what happened with him
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Nice update! Can't wait for the next part! I wonder what RK's past is...
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Now that ground rules are set and scrutinized by Pooja and co ... I am really curious to see RK's actions n reactions while wooing madhubala lol !! Hope he stops fidgeting n starts approaching lol !! Continue soon..I feel there are more layers to it than it seems 😉

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