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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Amazing update Tashu Di!Thanks for pm!So Madhubala has a mental disorder & RK knows it now!Pooja is Sameer's girlfriend & She knows something is up with RK about Madhubala!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Pari...your way of narration is absolutely amazing...the way you are keeping the suspense, yet rolling the story forward gradually is really commendable...So Madhu has been convicted of murdering her own child even after there is no solid proof...it is only because Madhu is taking the blame on herself...and I suppose this whole absurdity of the situation is baffling RK and somehow attracting him more towards Madhu...I liked all his friends, J, Sameer and Pooja...I suppose with the help of all these friends he will be able to penetrate Madhu's indecipherable mind and get closer to her romantically as well 😳...
And I loved imagining RK as a policeman...it will definitely add a power-packed passion factor to the story πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm loved how sameer shushed up with the mention of name Pooja..so I am believing there is something going on between sameer n Pooja heheh !!
Rishabh's restlessness when it comes to madhubala looks pretty unnatural πŸ˜‰ !! May be that's the reason why even Pooja suspected in this regard !!
Though we didn't witness any scene between madhubala and Rishabh, but the way Rishabh's thoughts had only madhubala..it felt like she was there all along the update hehe...but then want to know if madhubala is also affected by Rishabh in a similar way too heheh !!

Do continue soon 😳...hope we will have rishbala in the next one hehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
thanxx 4 d pm 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update. I want to read more. Poor Madhu lost her child and having a mental disorder. I wish RK could get her out of this trauma. Want to know more abt Rk and Madhu. And btw your banner is awesome. Its a typical RM banner ,looks very intense and passionate
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update with different concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all so so much. I'm glad ur all liking the story so far.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankitashaw1996

vrrry nice dear continu sooon

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

And the suspense builds!!!

Everything is about Madhu for RK and he does not even see it.

So you have given some info on Madhu and yes, there are still questions - lots actually. Looking forward to actually meeting the character.

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Wow nice update! So suspenseful! Does RK know Madhu prior to the case? Please update soon!

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Iam Reading This Version T.
(:
It's Better Then AR One.
Hehe.


Thank you guys for the amazing comments. You will meet Madhu's character soon. And as for RK knowing her from before he didn't. I just want to clear that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...but I was just thinking that whether RK knows madhu before the case or not??...

Originally posted by: -StephinesS-

Whoa!
now that was an amazing update!
sooo looking forward for the second chapter )
keep up the good work :) <3

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Great start! Full of suspense.

Eagerly waiting for the next one. You are doing great.

Thank you everyone. I'm touched. I'm glad u are liking the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ainanwer

awesome update with different concept

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Very nice update. I want to read more. Poor Madhu lost her child and having a mental disorder. I wish RK could get her out of this trauma. Want to know more abt Rk and Madhu. And btw your banner is awesome. Its a typical RM banner ,looks very intense and passionate

Originally posted by: rishabalalove

nice update
thanxx 4 d pm 😳

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Hmm loved how sameer shushed up with the mention of name Pooja..so I am believing there is something going on between sameer n Pooja heheh !!

Rishabh's restlessness when it comes to madhubala looks pretty unnatural πŸ˜‰ !! May be that's the reason why even Pooja suspected in this regard !!
Though we didn't witness any scene between madhubala and Rishabh, but the way Rishabh's thoughts had only madhubala..it felt like she was there all along the update hehe...but then want to know if madhubala is also affected by Rishabh in a similar way too heheh !!

Do continue soon 😳...hope we will have rishbala in the next one hehe

Originally posted by: mimibm

Hi Pari...your way of narration is absolutely amazing...the way you are keeping the suspense, yet rolling the story forward gradually is really commendable...So Madhu has been convicted of murdering her own child even after there is no solid proof...it is only because Madhu is taking the blame on herself...and I suppose this whole absurdity of the situation is baffling RK and somehow attracting him more towards Madhu...I liked all his friends, J, Sameer and Pooja...I suppose with the help of all these friends he will be able to penetrate Madhu's indecipherable mind and get closer to her romantically as well 😳...

And I loved imagining RK as a policeman...it will definitely add a power-packed passion factor to the story πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Amazing update Tashu Di!Thanks for pm!So Madhubala has a mental disorder & RK knows it now!Pooja is Sameer's girlfriend & She knows something is up with RK about Madhubala!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!

Originally posted by: momi78

Fantastic !! So Pooja is finding it weird that RK is getting addicted to a case ... in the name of Madhubala! Aahan!!


Thank you everyone for the amazing feedback! I'm really grateful. And thanks to those who liked my banner! As for the story keep reading!

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