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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry friends, I was going to post chapter 2 today but my desktop is not working. I'm sending this message from my mobile. I will definitely post next chapter on Tuesday, promise. Sorry again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER:2 Madhubala- The Singer

[Dolly(guitarist), Ruhi(drummer) and Madhu sitting in Madhus room.]
Madhu: "Tera ishq hi mera junoon...tere deewane."
Dolly: What the hell, if you sing this love song in a beach concert people will throw shells and sweet corn at us.
Ruhi: By the way, for whom did you compose this song?
Madhu: R...
Ruhi: R...??? who R??? What's cooking? Am I missing something?
Madhu: I mean, array... its for Rocky, my boy friend. Whom else can I composr a love song for?
Ruhi: Itna romantic song for...a dog?😕
Dolly: You can fool Ruhi but not me R doesn't mean ARRAY. R ka matlab RK hai.
Anyways you'll soon stop dreaming of him coz I have found everything about him over the internet.
Madhu: But in internet only his fathers name is given...uh...I mean who RK? What internet?
Dolly: Ok then, rehnay detay hai. If you don't remember who RK is, then why waste time on him. Tani(keyboardist) kaha hai? Aab tak kyon nahi aayee? Today is our last day to practice.
Madhu: Tani is late... now we have nothing to do...so if you have something to tell... about someone ...I don't mind listening.
Ruhi: Lo...Tani aa gayye.
Madhu: (iss tani kay bacchi ko bhi abhi aana tha😡)Hi Tani, we were waiting for you only😃.
Dolly: Chill Madhu, agar kal tu nay audience ko apnay singing say impress kiya, I will tell you everything I know about RK.
Tani: Sorry guys... went to beach to check all the arrangements for tomorrows concert. After so much difficulty we got the permissions for performing in Juhu beach. Hope this concert goes well or else hamaray band 'Junoon' ko beach kay pani may behay jana padaga😭.
Ruhi: I don't think hamara concert hit hoga. Hum nay 110 logon kay hisaab say concert arrange kiya tha and ab tak sirf 10 tickets bickay hai.
Madhu: Mamma-Pappa nay college kay baad 1yr. ka time diya tha band establish karna kay liya. Tomorrow is the last day. Parso mujhay ladkay walay dekhnay aah rahay hai😭
Dolly: Aunty nay ladkay ka photo diya tha na... dikha...
Madhu: Here it is,.
(Ruhi's phone rings, after answering the call she is shocked and speech less)
Ruhi: Guys all tickets are sold😕
Madhu, Dolly, Tani: 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
(next day at the concert, the girls standing on the stage talk amongst themselves)
Madhu: Ruhi, you said all the tickets were sold, phir audience may sirf 10 log kuon hai😕
Ruhi: May be they are late...got stuck in traffic😕
Madhu: 100people are late 😕
Tani: Madhu start singing varna jo hai who bhi chalay jayangay.
(Madhu was about to start singing while her eyes falls on some one and remains wide open. She forgets her lines.)
Dolly: Now I see why 100people were late together...1 RK was late😆.
Madhu: RK bought 100 tickets? 😲 ☺️
Tani: Madhuuu start singing😡.
Madhu: (Madhu looks into RK's eyes and starts singing) "Tera ishq hi mera junoon...
Dolly😲, Ruhi😲, Tani😲: Oh shit... what is this girl singing😡😡 😡.
Tani: Girls no time to argue, play music according to her song.
(concert gets over and madhu rushes to meet RK but finds him nowhere. The other 10 audience liked the concert😆 so madhu's friends are no more mad at her. Dolly walks up to madhu.)
Dolly: Tujhsay milay bina hi chala gayya tera Romeo😆.
Madhu: I only wanted to know if he really bought 100tickets, even I'm not interested in meeting him.
Dolly: By the way, he is business tycoon Jai Kapoor's only son RK. This year he'll start shooting for his first movie which is being produced by his dad.
Madhu: All this even I read in internet, what's his full name?
Dolly: That even I don't know, well for now we'll call him Romeo Kapoor. Madhu's Romeo😆.
Madhu: Thodi time aur rukh hata toh kya chala jata uska😡. Atleast mai naam puch laytee. Ab patah nahi, if i'll ever get a chance to meet him😒.
Dolly: Chill...jiss speed say yeah jaa raha hai, I doubt, kahi teray ghar rishta lay kar na aajay😆.
Madhu: Shut up 😳
CHAPTER:3 Alliance for Madhu...
Hey friends, sorry for the late update. I know this update looks more like dialogue writing than story writing but I didn't know how to express the story in writing. Do hit the like button if you wish to get further PM's😳.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey me first, *party* *dance*


Coming to the update, madhu already havibg a boyfriend named rocky, *shocked* waiting eaferly for rishbala meeting.
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update! 👍🏼

I love this romeo rk 😳

I liked ur smiley expressions & very well written 😛

y rk bought all the tickets? is he in love with madhu? 😉 soon v ll get to know more abt him & his full name too 😎

thanks 4 d pm 😃 🤗

waiting 4 next update 😳
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: uma88

Hey me first, *party* *dance*


Coming to the update, madhu already havibg a boyfriend named rocky, *shocked* waiting eaferly for rishbala meeting.


Rocky is the name of her pet dog. Hope you got it 😳 and thanks for readingEmbarrassed
Edited by Love-my-self - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your comment is always better than my post😳. Thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

nice update! 👍🏼

I love this romeo rk 😳

I liked ur smiley expressions & very well written 😛

y rk bought all the tickets? is he in love with madhu? 😉 soon v ll get to know more abt him & his full name too 😎

thanks 4 d pm 😃 🤗

waiting 4 next update 😳

Thank youEmbarrassed
Will try to update as soon as possible😊
Do continue to read😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Love-my-self


Rocky is the name of her pet dog. Hope you got it 😳 and thanks for reading😳

Thank you dear, when her friend asked its all for a dog, i thought that her friend calling madhu's boyfriend as dog, silly me 😆😆

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