OS: Why is love soo complicated??

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OS:Why is love soo complicated

madhu was running to her father who was working in the fields worriedly.she called her father n said"baba, they have come again".mallik looked bewildered at her saying n ran to their home n madhu too ran back of him.they reached their home to see mohan kundra ,the landlord was standing in their home n ordering his servants to throw all their things out of their home.mallik went near him n said"sahib, plz give us some time to repay ur money.i assure u ill repay ur money.but understand I have a daughter n my wife where will we go"

mohan kundra angrily spatted "how much time u wud say the same thing?i need my money within one month.do u understand it.orelse I'll throw ur family n u out of this home".he nodded nervously.after mohan left, mallik broke down into tears as he hugged his daughter madhu n his wife padmini.as he felt helpless that he couldn't do anything for his wife n his daughter.he was just a poor farmer with all debts on him.he was worried at his daughter.how wud he give his madhu a secure life?

Mohan kundra was calling his wife"radha, come fast" .radha came running n asked"what happened?" mohan asked"did u send sikky to receive rishu from the railway station? I don't want any disturbance for my son.he is coming after soo many days I soo happy today"then he heard the phone ringing.he attented it n shouted"u r good for nothing sikky" he cut the call.radha gave him a questioning look.mohan said"he received but rishabh took away the keys n fooled him"

Rishabh stopped his high speed car with sudden breaks.his wheels screeched as he saw a goat standing on his path.he said"what the hell!".he opened the car doors to see or remove it.suddenly he saw a girl coming rushing up n took the goat in her arms n said"plz forgive us".rishabh smirked at her n said"ur not" she turned to see him all shocked.rishabh saw her face.she was beautiful rather say serene with two honey filled eyes n button nose with cuty rose petal like lips.he has never seen any girls in Mumbai too like that.eventhough he had many girls.she looked like angel.she ran away.

He came out of his thoughts n saw her going to nearby field.he took his keys out n ran behind her silently soo that she is not aware of his presence.her goat fell in mud.she carried it n said"rathi, ur dirty come I'll wash u"she took the goat to a nearby pump n washing it.in that process ,she was getting drenched.he saw how her half saree's dupatta cluched her body giving him an idea of her curves.suddenly her dupatta fell off her shoulders.she immediately looked everywhere.i turned back as I didn't wanna see the girl or offend her dignity.eventhough I saw many girls clad with bikinis .i m feeling different for this village girl.i turned back n saw but she had already left.i couldn't see her.

I drove back to my home,the kundra mansion.my papa rushed to greet me n my mom took Aarti of me.i entered the home.i had a full fleched lunch with my family.it feels nice.i was not intreseted to come to this dirty village but papa forced me too.but it feels good to come here.his mind drifted to the girl whom he saw.he wud get freshen up n go in the village searching for her.he went to his room n took a nap n got ready to leave.he was abt to leave when he saw the same girl carrying a heavy load.i got angry I called patil to unload her.he immediately unloaded her heavy load.i abt to go near her.when I saw papa approaching her.

He asked her "u r mallik's daughter naa?" she said"yes.baba has sent this grains from our field as rent for this month" my papa mockingly laughed"beta, when is ur papa planning to pay his debt.does he wants me to make a sweet girl homeless"I didn't like baba's speech.i hated it.i rushed out to see the girl was crying a lot.she was abt to trip .i immediately went catched her.the moment her eyes bore into there was sumthing changed in me.i felt shivers in my spine when her hands touched my chest.i m falling for her.i want her.she steadied herself n left.i followed her to her home.she said everything to her father.her father told "I think after month let mohan sahib take this land n home n we wud sell our field to him n inreturn ask some money to him n settle some other place n wud get our madhu married to some good boy"n caressed her cheeks.

I reached my home n saw my papa sitting in our dining table.he called me to take food.i went to him n said"I want to marry"he smiled n asked"whom?some girl in Mumbai " I said"no.that mallik's daughter madhu"he was shocked n said"no never.i have dreamt of ur marriage with a rich n effluent family.i can never give consent to this marriage" I asked"is this ur final decision?" he said"yeah"I went to the kitchen.i could hear his voice"I knew my son wud agree to me always" I came out n cut my wrists .he rushed to me n I said"this is my final decision.i wud marry her or die".he said"if u want her as ur misteress then I wud get her to be.then leave her when u r satiated" I cut my another wrist n said"I want her only foe me.only my wife" he had to comply.

Soon he convinced her family.i was in my altar for my marriage with my madhu rather my bi..wi...the marriage seemed to take like generations.now finally the nost awaited moment my suhaagraat.madhu was sitting in my bed.i approached her.i opened her ghungaat .she looked at me nervously.i caressed her cheeks n kissed her.she didn't respond me.i thought she is nave .after this night she wud be comfy with me.i removed her jewelries n placed soft kisses in place of it.i made her lie on the bed.all the while,she looked at me wideeyed.i removed her clothes smoothly n sensually which aroused me.she turned to hide her naked body.i kissed her back n gave her soft smooches on her soft earlobe.n turned her n kissed her face moaning"mine".i toached her breasts n caressed her n groaned n said"only mine".i sucked n kissed n bite every inch of her body claiming it to be mine forever.finally I entered her breaking her virgin barrier.she screamed.i felt soo bad that I hurted her soo badly.i sucked her tears n soothed her pain.later I hugged her n drifted to smooth peaceful sleep.

Madhu was digged in his chest n locked in his arms.she looked on the ceiling remembering her mother's words"its ur duty to satisfy his needs now.he is ur husband n remember if u don't do according to his wish.he wud destroy ur father.so its in ur hands"she never knew when tears formed in her eyes.she never thought her life wud turn up like this.she closed her eyes n slowly sleep came in as she was too tired.

She got up in the morning to see her husband still sleeping.she was scared of him but she had to live with him for her baba n maa.she immediately took her clothes n went to bath .after bathing, she gently escaped from his room so as to avoid him.she saw her sasuma in kitchen .she went there.her sasuma told"take this tea to rishabh.he has the habit of drinking tea.from tomorrow u have to prepare tea".she took the tea n nervously stepped in his room.he bathed n was wearing his new clothes.

When she approached him to give tea.he gripped her n made her to sit on his lap n started kissing her.he started kissing her neck n said"madhu, I didn't even hear ur voice.just say me what u want?" he removed her dori.she got scared.she didn't want the pain like yesterday night.she ran away.but he caught her n asked"what do u want madhu.i'll bring that".she meekly said"I don't want to do this".he was shocked n he looked at her.madhu said"sorry, don't do anything to my baba" I said"no, madhu .just say".she hesistated n said"I m not ready for it" I said"why didn't u say me last night"she said"I was scared that u wud do sumthing to my papa"I felt like I was a rapist.i was feeling guilty.i told"I wud never touch u until u want me too"n left her.

He heard some noises in kitchen.he went there n saw madhu crying n his mother scolding her.she said"u good for nothing.poor girl.destroyed everything.go n sweep the home" I found my temper rising.i reached there n scolded my mom n said"from today onwards madhu wud not do any work.she is my wife.she will only look at me"I pampered madhu in all the possible ways to make her fear go.she started talking to me abt her goats n field.her smiles r enough to turn me on.but I had to control my urges to have her forever.everything was going smoothly.

Pabbo n dipali came to our home.dipali was my childhood friend.soo I was excited to meet her after long days.initially pabbo n dipali were shocked to see me married.but later smiled .whenever I used to be with madhu , she used to drop in.i didn't like it a bit but she was mom's relative soo I had to tolerate it.madhu was feeling lonely as rishabh only talking to dipali.whenever he used to come to her she dropped in.the worst thing was she didn't like her hugging rishabh everytime.she started feeling dejected as no one in the house liked hern dipali n pabbo never missed to taunt her.rishabh also didn't speak to her much

She broke down n cried.rishabh entered n saw it n asked"why r u crying madhu? Plz don't cry.what u want say I'll do"she sobbed n said"I don't want to live here.i want to go to my home".after hearing it, he felt his world crashing down.but seeing her crying face.he felt helpless.he dropped her to her home n instructed her parents to take care of her n not allow her to do any work.i gave some money to take care of her properly.

I reached back home.i felt empty.i missed madhu.i didn't know how n when I started loving her.she became an integral part of my life.her smile n her eyes were haunting him soo badly.even dipali came to talk to him but he never spoke with her.his parents tried to ask him why he left her to her home.he left her before the day of their 1 month anniversary of marriage.he started sneaking to her home without her awareness to see her.he started following her sometimes.

One day,when he was following her.he saw that she abt to fall unconscious.he took her to her home n sprinkled water on her n said her parents to call doctor but they didn't budge.he got his fury hit his mind he shouted"why r u not calling the doctor?".they said"she is pregnant soo only she is falling unconcious.she has fallen like that many times".he was soo happy hearing it.he was going to be a father soon.but again he became angry n said"no one cared to inform the father of child".they said"it was madhu who refused to say this"he got angry he said them to go out.

He saw madhu getting up.madhu was shocked to see him but ignored him n was abt to move.but he caught hold of her n asked"why didn't u say abt our child?" she was shocked but said"I didn't think as important" I got furious n asked"u didn't think as important to say me abt my baby"she said"I thought u wud busy with ur spl ones.why to disturb u? when u r not interested in mr then why wud my baby matter to u?" I said"what the shit ur speaking I was not interested in u? bloody u wanted to leave me n u left me" she said"ohh really, u were the one who completely ignored me n u never tried to stop me from going.coz u wanted to be with ur love dipali as ur mom said"I got shocked n said"dipali my love...noo..why wud she be?..if I loved her why wud I marry u?" she was confused n asked"why did u marry me?" I said"coz I love u got dammit!" she was broken into tears n said"I too love u .i started loving u by the way u pamper me, by the way u treated me as ur princess.i love u".

Then he kissed her with all love he had .he asked"can I touch u?" she blushed n said"yes".he carried her to the bed n started removing her clothes.she said"noo. We cannt"he looked at her confusingly.she took his hands to her tummy n he smiled in realization.he kissed her n snuggled to her n hugged her n said"you r soo complicated to understand" she smiled n said" soo do u" he smiled n kissed her temples n said"soo is our love complicated.i hope our kid is not complicated like us"

in this story ,i feel like i have complicated things.i wrote in a clumsy manner .plz bare with me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os chris
Loved this complicated love
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Lovely update Chris...!!!
I felt it could have been a two or three shot... There was much more to be explored in their relationship... But you expressed their love beautifully... I didn't find it clumsy.
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Wow...very nice OS 😛
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different avatar..
light hearted sweet little os!!
lovd it .. u did it FAB!!
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Lovely OS Christ 😳
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hey hey only the tittle has 'complicated' word...the story wasn't complicated ...it was a beautiful one...and i liked it😊
first i thought mohan will ask malick to give madhu as his daughter-in-law to his spoiled chils rishu as an exchznge for the debts😕...but this was a different story...a gentleman rk and a lovely madhu...and a cute baby on the way😆

P.S.:cngrtz christy for being a goldie👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os christ ,you first long update aahaan😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee os dear!!!! complicated one... hahaha!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS Christo!& Congratulations for becoming Goldie!

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