Rishabala OS : Lonely Hearts

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alina.b

@alina.b

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Aww this was such a sweet story! So cute! My fav part was when they were talking to the baby and he looks back uninterested lol. For some reason I kept imagining Sid-Pari in this story instead of rishbala.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

LOVELY STORY LAZY

LOVED THE MILK BIT

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Fantastic os lazy, everything was nice, but what was brilluant was 3 day party for rk getting 46.4% rofl, ha ha ha

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moumita.madhu

@moumita.madhu

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Its really cute you know! Adi reminds me one and only Mannu from Balika Vadhu on Colors! And thanks for naming that cheap woman LEELA!

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Sorry it took me so long to read and leave a comment. I really loved the take on it, loved how they came together because they needed to but their flourished because they wanted it to. It was easy to see they were both young and some what naive but learning together. Great job!

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sangeet

@sangeet6690

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

hey lazy i liked the story..understanding between these two..both being there for each other n loved their small family him her n Adi

but sorry i would hv loved it more if Madhu was not just 18 had she been 21-22 i would hv enjoyed the story mory..it has nothing to do with the age difference but 18 is too young to get married..i wanted to give my honest opinion..

keeping the age aside i loved the whole story..u portrayed their growing bond beautifully.. n loved Adi madhu n Adi-RK talks😊

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benaz

@benaz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Heya! Glad to be reading another OS by you as you simply come up with amazing and hilarious concepts. I have missed reading the OS by you😊 This one was superb like from how they started with grief to finding their own happiness at the end. But the most hilarious part has to be the joke about producing milk and I seriously cracked up at the way how AD was trying to feed off her and to what it led afterwards. And RK's confession was so cute and sweet. Liked what he said at the end about Madhu being so good in bed that he forgets she's still in her teens😉 Overall amazing OS.

Looking forward to reading another one by you soon!😊

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

awesome...I know the start was sad & painful , but still after reading the whole os I was laughing like a lunatic...🤣...madhu & Rishu convo about producing milk & RK telling that to Adi was hilarious...😆...also when madhu & RK both were sharing their feelings being in love to Adi separately was soo cute...I just loved it...😃...& the way u describe Adi's expression to their convo was also funny...😆...lastly I loved the result scene...don't worry dear u didn't messed it up...it was cute & funny & I think it perfectly ended...😃

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Awesome... Superb OS (This was an OS right 😕 )
N u lazy stop saying u messed up😡
Everything in d update was perfect..
The pace was lil fast bt since it was an os, it had to be...
It cud hv been a short ss of 3-4 parts, that wud hv been nice too 😊