Rishabala OS : Lonely Hearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

hahahahaha ending part was really awsm!! actually no d whole os was awsm!! luved it. thax fr pm.

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Julie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

The beginning was so heart breaking. Losing your entire family like that! You dealt with both RK and Madhu's reactions perfectly. The shock, the loss, the sadness and confusion. And then the loneliness.

And from a woman's point of view, Madhu truly was helpless. Her age played a factor but so did the fact that she is a female and so she needs to have a guardian.

Madhu and RK come together so well. First as ppl who have both suffered huge losses and they need to support each other. And then for their nephew.

Even though RK is older he was just as unsure, afraid and lonely as Madhu. The slow bonding over a difficult situation and loss, helped them to begin their lives in a new path.

Beautiful story!

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war_is_peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

super story!

i really dont have words left...

i loved how the story started with grief proceeed to friendship and then to awkward moments and finally love...the grief was gone by the end and it left a light impression with lilttle moments of fun.

LOVE IT!

luv u 😛

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Sanju...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

wat shud I say 2 this..

milk thing..🤣

talking 2 baby abt feelings.. 🤣

calling baby dude n all , fighting for 90%🤣

superbly done!!

awesome os!!

u workd ur magic with words once again!!

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nahtani88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Mind Blowing OS
Thanks For The PM

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

OMG!!!!!!! What a Mindblowing OS lazy dear...i loved every phase of dis OS sooo muchhh...
Starting was tooo Emotional nd latter when when Rk kicked out Leela Aunty is tooo dammm goood part of dis OS...
nd Rk is Superbbb like always...
i loved last part about marks is Outstanding ...i just LoVE's UR MINDBLOWING Writting Skills nd UR BEAUTIFULL Thoughts tooo...

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Amazing n Mind Blowing OS..!!!!

Thanks for the PM!!!

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Tainar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Aww! My poor babies. 🤗 A marriage of convenience turned into love. So sweet! I love this RK...and the ending totally had me in stitches. Child bride. 😆😆😆 Great job! 👏👏

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