Rishabala OS : Lonely Hearts

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Superb os kuku loved it just awesome n loved child bride dialogue

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

superb os lazy

loved the way u narrated abt little ad too

rishabh n madhu were soo cute

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Saha Vikram Khanna

@SahaVikamKhanna

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome Os. It's always a pleasure to read your stories.

beginning was really sad, middle was great, and ending was superb.

milk dialogues😆

thanks.

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Laters.Baby

@Laters.Baby

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Girl I Seriously Love U!!

U Knw Today I Had Serious Wish To Read A New Story Frm U!! Evn Thought To Msg U! Bt Thn Stopped As Evryday U R Updating Any Of Ur Stories Or Writing New Stories.. So U Need Rest!
Bt Nw I Can't Say U Thanku Enough Fr Writing Ths Amazing Story!!
*Enough Of My Blabbering* 😆

Okk About The OS..Absolutely Loved It Loved It To D Core! Seriously I Too Wonder Hw U Make Evry Stories So Magical Or Attractive! Oh! I Hav To Say Ur Stories R Lyk Drugs To Me!! 🤣 Thts Y I Was Demanding! 😆 Fault Is All Urs! 🤣

U Beautifully Developed D Stories Frm Start To End! 👏 👏 (obviously u can do as u r d BEST!⭐️)
@First It Was Emotional Start! Bt Thn I Loved My Hero RK, Who Took D Situation On His Own Hands So Cleverly!😎

RK-Adi-Madhu D Trio Was Perfect Family! 😳
As Much As RK Was A Perfect Father & Husband Same Goes To Madhu @First Perfect Mother Bt Yup Teen Wife! 😆

Breast Feeding Convo Was Hilarious!! 🤣 🤣

Adi- Madhu & Adi- RK Convo Was So Beautiful! Hw Cute Thy Cldn't Share Thr Feelings To Ech Othr Bt Wid Thr Son!! AWW!! 😳😳

R U Mad!! U Didn't Messed Up D End! I loved It Hw U Did!! Madhu Seriously @Tyms So Childish, Her Results Reaction Proved It! 🤣 🤣

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wowww Lazy ...such an awesome OS...it started with tears but ended with smiles

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow...such an awesome OS Lazy 😛😛

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

KUKU WAS MISSING UR UPDATES FOR AGES.😭..U KNOW ...
ITS BEEN TWO DAYS U HAVENT UPDATED ANY..
DONT LAUGH!!!! AM SERIOUS...🤣
BUT A BIG WALA HHUG...U MADE MY SUNDAY AWESOME🤗🤗
COMMING TO THE OS...
DAT WAS SO SWWEET...FIRST BEEN EMOTIONAL FROM DEATH TO LEELA TO DER MARRAIGE AND ADI...
GHOSH DAT MILK PART WAS HIGHLIGHT IT JUS CRAKED ME ROLF..HAHA HAHA SERIOUSLY RK...THE PRODUCTION IS NOT YET STARTED...☺️😳🤣😳...
ND AGAIN THE END IT WAS SIMPLY AWESOME AND HIS CRAKY COMMENT AGAIN ...CHILD BRIDE HAHAHAH🤣

LOVLY KUKU LOVELY...
🤗

DO WRITE MORE...
LL BE WAITING

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow a cute os dear 👏👏

really it was a story of two 'lonely hearts'who were together😊

i feel sad for madh and rishabh as they lost their parents😭...but was happy that they hav each other.😊...madhu is 18 and rk 28...that was a terrible combination,i liked it😊...do u know one thing, earlier i was adamant on the fact that hubby should be only 3-5 years older than wife,but now a days i feel nice seeing large age differences,don't know y suddenly started to feel nice about it😕...maybe bcoz that tym atleast one will be reasonable where the other can go stupid😆

AD was the factor that brought them together😊

the talks of rk about madhu asshe was some milk-producing factory under construction was super!🤣...it was hilarious dear😆😆...so funny😆

and madhu's question "who was supposed to make me pregnant here?"😆...the sexual tension started frm this question!😊

hey lzy u havn't messed up last part,i think it was cute😊...the way madhu went on and on about her marks...and rk's and his party for 46.4%!😆...oh my god..😆

P.S.:without ur updates saturday was BOARING😒

Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago

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Grishu30

@Grishu30

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Ohh wow what an OS..i was lil.sad cz it came to an end..
Superb..
Pls update beauty n beast..i m eagerly waitin fr it..plsss lazy..
My exams r goin on..bt aftr readin ur stories..i feel fresh..n dt is bcz ur an awesome writer n a deep thinker.. 😛 😊
thankyou lazy fr ur awesome stories.. 😛

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shonuu

@shonuu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Awesome OS Lazy. I just loved there crazy talks with AD and his confused expressions and all the "Dairy production talks" 🤣🤣🤣

and I loved this Rishabla so much ...thanks for the OS🤗

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