I read your story last night and I have been trying so hard to think of something funny to write, to find some hindi dialogue to tell u how much I loved this.
Well I failed badly. Saying 'Julie Kush hui' is yawn.
So I will have to settle for the basic English language.
It was funny, creative (more so since u had to work with so much dialogue), it was emotional (I so felt for Madhu, and hated Trish).
Can u do a part 2??? Maybe where Rk is the one saying all the romantic hindi dialogue???? Just a thought, like RK - in SRK style???