Shit.. that is one heck of a story you have written 👏 👏 👏
I read all the chapters at once and damn..I am left wanting for more.
There were times when I couldnt take it..but didnt want to give up
wonder if that is how Madhu felt in this relationship of theirs...which was almost always more about RK and his work/life/friends/wishes/priorities (the way he viewed them) except when Madhu was ill or on a rare ocassion angry..
It does kind of reflect the people they are..Madhu, a girl craving for love all her life..willing to compromise..not speaking up in the fear of losing the one person who loved her back for once.
and I do think he loves/loved her..but it was far less than he loves himself amd his life as it is/was. He has always had a good life and he wants to conitnue the same and not deal with anything that might hamper its equilibrium.. always taking the easy way out..he realised she had issues with her family and he knows she is the silent types reluctant to talk abt her own self ( maybe coz in the inital part of their long dostant relationship he never showed interest in her talks abt her work) and yet he didnt ask her abt it the next day. he was relieved that she didnt bring it up. he knew she would need support on her visit back home for her sisters wedding and yet he thought of the inconvenience it would cause him as it was midweek..excuses to avoid the unpleanstness that would accompany the visit and thinking of himself over her.
ironic isnt it...he was hurt thinking that she didnt want to be a part of his life when she lied to him about leaving his office party..when he himself didnt want to be a part of her life..the part that was all rosy and comfortable to him.
He wants her to understand that the imporatnce of other friends/work in his life..and she probably would have..had he ensured that they understand the place she holds in his life too..but he never did..thinking she had to understand..it took Rohan to correct Nitin...
He is hurt too I am sure..but she was never that imporatant it seems..or even if she was/is..he hasnt realised that
Breaking up rather than being unhappy is the way to go..the problem being..did he really try to make it work..put in a honest effort instead of relying in the silly explainations, Maya's assurances to justify breaking up
going from the prologue..Maya is still something they havent cleared up..so is it going to the time Madhu decides its enough..well all I can do is wait
Once again..you have done an awesome job..
PS: was that sorry from Vikram? their relation is such a contrast..for once it seems more about Madhu than any other relation of hers has been. hope they make up soon.. and as much as I have liked RK Madhu in other FFs and the show, I am open to see Vikram Madhu relation go any way you deem fit.. Friendship or something more than that
and now I should just shut up
apologies for typos
Edited by NalayakShaitaan - 11 years ago