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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

The previous update gotta know that his kid and wife are dead dead but a son still alive was not at all expected..when are you planning to reveal his past..Poor Ayaan feel bad for the kid.. how long more for Rishbala to love each other..

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Chinnu

@JINS_ROSE

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Amazing...
RK hav a son...that s truelly unexpected ,...n i loved it...
very interesting ...
plz continue...im eagerly waiting for nxt part...😊

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: SreeRK
The previous update gotta know that his kid and wife are dead dead but a son still alive was not at all expected..when are you planning to reveal his past..Poor Ayaan feel bad for the kid.. how long more for Rishbala to love each other..

Hehe RishBala won't be falling in love so easily, especially with the pasts they've got.

Most of my stories don't have any of the main characters falling in love quickly, I like to build their relationship up and make them fall in love gradually so their relationship is strong and there is trust...

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

RK has a son? And a daughter and wife who are dead?!! Wow .. amazing update .. that was some great twist! Eagerly waiting for the next part ..

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

nice update

i hope aryan does sumthing to unite rishbala

loved ur twist

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Rk has a son lol
Cant believe
Inbetween wonderful update

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome update Dear 😊 Loved Rishbala moments 😳 RK's had a wife & a daughter who r now dead 😲 His son Aayan is still alive!Didn't expected this!Pls continue soon 😳

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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

omg RK has son totally unexcepted 😲

and RK killed aayaans mother and his sister too😲😲

wht wl happen next??waiting for update

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mimibm

@mimibm

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

So Rishabh's past is coming out gradually...he has a son whom he is avoiding for some past mistakes...I am very eager to know what it is...it is only a strong longing for Madhu that Rishabh has...very interesting, I am really enjoying this story..