SS: NOT a love story [Discontinued] - Page 3

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

your neighbor to the north, Canada. bonjour.

Ria left? good! honestly, india and most other collectivist cultures look down on the other man/woman as well as the adulterous spouse (rightfully so). so one has to be really cautious just introducing characters like that without a good reason. I mean she wasn't really adding to the already messy plot so...

I really liked the format of YRF television that aired on sony a few years ago. would love to see that again.

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Nice one... I did not read d prologue, so i guess i need to do that first.
Happy new year...

Originally posted by: rdave1

Well hello there neighbor.

I think with Madhubala the CVs learned from the dragged out Sultan track that fans will tolerate a lot but not a third wheel. TRPs dropped below one the week Ria was introduced plus had she stayed she was going to accuse RK of rape then "get" pregnant, etc.. so she got PACKED UP.

YRF on Sony? Which one is that?

Originally posted by: ..NadiaZ..

ur writing style is very impressive and the story is interesting *..i can't wait to know their past

Originally posted by: rdave1

Okay, I'm a little confused and that could be because I want answers that you don't want to give us right now.

we can try.

RK & Madhu have a 14 year old son, Arjun, right?

yes.

Madhu is a programmer who creates security system and their son has taken after them???

maybe. she is the CEO of a conglomerate but we know that she does have some coding knowledge.

Son doesn't seem to like Dad very much and I easily feel the distance between RK and Madhu.

the former can be a typical teenager's actions or not. only time will tell. good catch with the couple's dynamic.

I makes me sad to say it but it almost seems like they were never madly in love; he never stole money to buy her cup cakes; their marriage was a business transaction.

seems like it. because you (as a reader) have nothing but RK's word to go off of and right now he doesn't seem believable. wait for the backstory.

To me it seems like they lost themselves and each other in search of money and security.

that I can agree with. as of now anyway.

I'm assuming the prologue is a hint at the future; where everything will crumble and that makes me sad.😭

not necessarily. you will see what I mean soon.

Brilliant job!