Rishabala FF : Bewitched : Epilogue - Page 154 (10/10)

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jerose

@jerose

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#961

Congrats on finishing this ff. This is a lovely story looking forward for you stories. Keep going.

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Yas

@IcecreamCupcake

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#962

Hai di...
Unresd..
Wow..Epilogue of this story..Can't believe this story ended but it was such a Fantastic and Magical..Pls do come with a Sequel of this story haan..i want to read more of Arjun's antics..lol..
Oh oh Rk is pissed..of course Arj how wouldn't be wen u went for the Bulls race..
Aww..Rk u wont be much pissed at ur Cuties..lol..This Arjun is same..Lol..He doesn't like kissing till now..
Lol...Arjun's antics to not to go school is so Adorable and Cute..Rk's children can easily make him agree by just making Cute Faces and Kisses too..
Can u pls Parcel Arjun to me because in a whisk he does everything changing clothes to travelling to make a Person come from were they are..lol..Seriously I want him to make me go to college In a jiffy and I can eat alot Paanipuri too..so pls parcel him..
Lol..Patil scene was too Funny he didn't know were he was and was singing Dhoom Machale lol..Yaar c Dis Arjun is helping in making food too..i so want him then I can eat anything..They easily made Patil a fool..lol..
Aww that was cute wen Arjun healed Bittuji's wound ..yeah I agree He should be a doctor..he helped his Sis to change her clothes too..Aww..
Lol this Rk is so crazy about Madhu till now..they r going for Disneyland too.. Oh oh Rk jealous of ur Bro haan..
Everything he does in a whisk he handed the mop too..He will make everyone lazy..
Lol Madhu's Concentration is too good if she goes on like this then definitely she can learn everything in her Dream...Rk's thought was cute he is Proud and Angry too at the same time..
Madhu seriously u gonna name the Rat as Rishu..lol..This both cuties r too too good and Damn Naughty..i like both..
Rofl..Rk is scared of his son for kissing Madhu..lol..This RishBala moments are too good..I seriously want to read Arjun's Married life to know whether he kissed his wife or not..lol..
Wat a ending just loved the whole Update and story too..I can't believe it ended..Thank u so much for penning down this story for us..It was totally Fantastic and Mind blowing..
Thank u..
P.s.Do add me to ur Pm list di..

Edited by Yasmine16 - 8 years ago

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#963

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Sorry to unres a little late but I know you won't mind 😆 Still it would be wise of me to ask that na 😆

Amazing end to an amazing story!! Loved it so much... You gave an apt end to this fantasy di... Not stretching too much or not too short... Just perfect!

Oh good...Arjun is not bothered about his parents kissing Lol... No magic in bed room na and he is even a little mature. That explains how Vedha was born 😆

Wow... He can eat anything he wants... Even without his parent's knowledge!... Can go to any place in a whisk...do anything and everything...heal wounds... and even change dress!!😲😆

Madhu is still bewitching RK 😉 Hehe... And after 11 years RK found out the reason behind Madhu's superb magic Lol!! Hehe rat named Rishu?!! 😆 But I bet Madhu can do magic wonderfully if she is angry with RK 😆

Patil scene was hilarious! I still remember how he freaked out seeing RK's toes getting healed magically by the touch of Madhu! Hehe and now he is happily singing and cutting carrots without realizing the surrounding 😆 Poor guy thinks that the kids will remain true to their words 😆

Seeing RK and his son's convo... I was reminded of their imaginary convo, a virtual reality envisioned by RK 11 years ago... 😊

Loved each and every bit of the update and treasured reading them... So I took long time to read as I know it would end soon 😭

Write more di... You are too good... If possible publish a book or collection of all your works!! I would be one of your n number of readers by then... 😳

Thanks for the PM 😃

Edited by vishuv - 8 years ago

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Twinkle

@twinklev20

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#964

Awesome story and lovely ending...😉👏😊

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Tinku2015

@Tinku2015

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#965

⭐️👏Thank u for the lovely epilogue...but v sad thats the end...awweee it would have been so wonderful continuation of rishabala the pregnany...their nonkjhonks ...their daughter...miss them a lot n ofcourse ur lovely presentation...but still thanks for this lovely wizard journey...😛always waiting for ur amazing writeups...love u...

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#966

awesome update 😃

through out the update i was smiling big time 😃

they are so cute 😃

picture perfect family ⭐️

arjun is so cute and veda she is papa princess 😃

madhu and her concentration😆

waiting for an os 😉slow burn and marriage trilogy married to stranger 😃

plzzz start these stories 😳

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#967

Superb end Di loved it

It was awesome

Loved arjun n Veda

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#968

No no no. Ur going to finish this. So soon?? U know I was expecting either of these 2 options.

1) they'll go back in time n start a new fresh love story without betrayal.

2) rk takes nani's help find madhu, save her, slowly she realises her love for him , abhi playing cupidetc.

But u finished the villain's role with two updates. Entry exit matter over. I was expecting this to go long lik its in his kiss. Dreams gone in drains. *sigh*

Anyways

Awesome update. Loved the starting, flashback etc. Will the flashback continue in epilogue? ??

Abhi/ arjun( I lik both names) is really smart n powerful. He's advicing his own dad before birth itself.now what all he'll do after birth? He'll get a sis to handle too. Poor rk, he thought madhu stopped loving him coz their daughter cant do magic. Idiot, why dsnt he understand love is not washing machine or tv to on and it'll start , off it'll get over. She was just wandering hurt due to his betrayal. Though he did it due to misunderstanding. Love is divine , not just drinking wine Lol. Joke from a film.

Thank god madhu explained to him and that she still loves him. Poor guy else would've gone insane. So rk madhu together again. Ya so soon but still happy. Sad its gonna end soon. Thanks a lot for the pm di. Do update others too soon. Any os coming up??? Do tell me :)

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#969

Amazing update.🤪Cute family they r. Arjun is my favorite. He can do everything by magic.Veda the cutee dada's girl love her.Patil is there n bittuji also.

Arjun don't like to go to school . His antics r cute n his aversion for kiss is still there.

Madhu n rk r so much in love still.Haye gonna miss this story.

A magical story. Thanks for writing such fab one.👏