😃Wow! one of my most favorite stories of yours is over... feeling a bit sad but i can't ask for a better ending from you... you gave a perfect ending and made me feel so complete... I loved the epilogue so much...
I loved all the characters but Veda stole the show in this update... she doesn't know to do magic but she was using her brother's magic power so well... she has wrapped her brother and her father in her little finger... poor Madhu... got a mother-in-law in place of a daughter...
Veda loves to make fun of her mom's incapability to do magic... LOL! we all knew why madhu couldn't do magic because she couldn't concentrate... she was always thinking of buying a parrot... you started the update with the same scene nah madhu trying to levitate a pen and her mind was wavering somewhere... aww... I guess I have by heart this story... she once wanted to name her parrot "Rishu" then decided she will name her baby... and finally she wants to name her rat after her husband...she is so funny... oh what a wonderful mom she is... her daughter gets scared of rats so she particularly wants to buy one... it's her way to frighten her baby girl who always makes fun of her...
Well, finally Rk came to know why his effort to make his wife do magic go waste... his son made him hear her mind voice... poor boy used to leave his meeting and come to her home to help her do magic... and they even used to think when their passion is high Madhu could perform magic... hehe.. but that was the work of their son... who is allergic to KISS! he can't even spare his sister kissing his father... why boy? why you hate kissing and kissers? you should soon find a knockout kisser to cure you from kiss-a-phobia! LOL
Oh Arjun... man, you are unbelievable... wish I have your powers... I can go world tour without Visa! LOL... Veda is the youngest in the lot but she is bossing everyone... and Ajju (I loved it when Rk called him Ajju... such a sweet nick name... the way he calls his son shows the love he has for him) Ajju is only too willing to show off is magical tricks to his baby sister... aww... boy he asked her what color swim suit she wants and changed her in it... lucky sis...
Patil is so funny but so loyal to his chief and his magical family... he was hell scared of all this magic but still sticking to them.. aww... he trusted those two little devils words and lost the bet... guess he will take a decade more to get used to Arjun's magic... LOL!!
hehe.. Rk is very cautious while romancing with his wife... he strictly ordered no magic in their bedroom... his son was the one who always brought Rishbala closer but he was also the one interrupted their heated moments!
God! I really loved this story so much... it has every element in it... magic, love, romance, betrayal, hurt, pain, trust... everything... its one complete package...
I have loved few particular things so much and wanna mention it...
1. Title... befitting title to this story...
2. Madhu and Rk's soul connection... they are true soulmates... they fell in love just at one sight...
3. Funny elements in this story... like Madhu's outrageous flirting... her stupid mind voice... her shocking magic... (she can do magic only when she is hell mad at Rk... first time she tried to kill him with a rod and next she damaged his f**king car.. after that I guess she couldn't perform ever as she was always thinking how nice, caring, loving and sweet her husband is... LOL)...
4. There are two updates which are my most favorite... one Rk exposing Madhu to his family by showing the video... and madhu breaking down in the middle of the road... Rk begging her to forgive him and pleading her he will make everything right... Madhu trying to kill him and the rod drops on his toe and even in that pain the first thing he asked her will be marry me madhu... wow... just wow... she was hurt but she couldn't see him in pain... and he was in pain but he couldn't let her go... their love was brilliantly portrayed in that part... every time i read that part I cry... and then i love another up so much... Part 13... Rk bringing madhu back to his home marrying her... Mukkund entertaining madhu... Their SR... abhimanyu playing his magic and making his dad sleep with his momma... Oh and the rose petal filled bed he made for them... Lol! This boy knows to decorate bed for them but dont want like them kissing... Silly!
5. I just loved all the characters... Apart from Rishbala and their kids... Mukkund will be my most fav.. Ajju's partner in crime... Lol! He boost that boy much... But actually he is the one giving proper respect to a wizard! LoL ... Poor mukkunk tried to marry trishna and become Madhu's chacha... But his dream didnt come true.. I wouldn't have minded if he had married trishna... He would have been one lucky hubby to see his wife young and beautiful forever... Lol
6. Oh and I so loved the fact that u brought in the villain so late... It gave me the feel that it was full fledged Rishbala story... With lots of cute sweet romantic and emotional moments... The villain made made his entry a couple of updates back and exited soon... Ajju easily defeated him ... Brilliant...
7. I cant forget to mention other supporting characters... Bittuji loyal!
Patil - funny! Nani - scary! Radhaji - sweet! Trishna - smart! Mukkund - flirt! ... Did i miss anyother character? I hope not!
Oh I just enjoyed reading this story right from start to end... Rishbala are one magical couple and this magical story enriched their love beautifully...
I couldnt find better adjectives to praise your creativity... You are just awesome..
Oh and I have finished telling this story fully to my mom... Thats one reason for delay in my reply... I just wanna add her comment too... My momma just loved the story... She said Rk won! Lol! She likes this Rk more for the efforts he took to win his madhu back...
(My momma's most fav scenes - Rishbala's second time meet in the coffee after she forgets him.. Then Bittuji and Rk visiting Madhu... That time Bittuji will ask where she is really a witch... He getting scared and Rk assuring him nothing will happen bcos she will be focusing on killing him Lol... It surprises me my mom remembers those two scenes lol... She loved Abhi (fetus) and Ajju too (boy) ... She found Veda cute and LAZY) HAHAHAHAHA!!!
Thank u so much for giving us this outstandingly amazing story to read!
Love u
Sudha
Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago
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