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Posted: 8 years ago

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#932

Yayyy lazy u r backkk..wohooo

Welcome back

Amazing update

Loved rk n his son convo

Da daughter showed him dat he can fight even without d help of magic

He didnt like kissing hehehe

N madhu named him arjun kundra

Balraj is no more

Dey saved d world,dey saved their son

Dey r back

Loved d way madhu told rk dat she loves him

Looking forward to epilogue

Edited by ...Seema... - 8 years ago

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#933

Wow u r back!!! Welcome welcome welcome dear!!!

You are the light of this forum... Please shine here brightly... Love u...

Brilliant ending...

Not even at a single place I could guess how this story will turn... How Rishbala and their son will defeat Balraj...

Oh god! U left us in a cliffhanger and disappeared for long and from then i was thinking how Rk will find them... How could I totally forget this little wizard?

Hehe... He is naughty... He really scared his parents by showing the two future images to trishna... Of course that fear in Madhu's mind brought Rk closer to him as she believe he will keep their baby safe...

U have tied all the knots perfectly dear... For long i was thinking it was Nani who stopped Rishbala from kissing lol... But this little boy did that just bcos he finds kissing eww and yuck! Lol! Like seriously he should say the same when he becomes a teenager...

Aww... Son is like dad... But knows magic like Momma... And daughter looks like momma but doesnt know magic like her papa... So beautiful... I loved the logic behind why their daughter couldn't do magic...

Oh that illusion rk & his kids future scene was brilliant... Thru that u gave the answer for Rk's question... Even a comman man can fight without magic...

Every single thing explained in this story was perfect... The reason why Madhu didn't like the name abhi becos he died at a very young age and why she wants to name him Arjun... Just amazing...

Even i didnt want their past to be changed... It was epic so why should they change it?

Loved this story so so much... No words to express how much i loved this story and enjoyed reading it...

I m excited to read the epilogue... Hope u will post it soon... Then i can narrate the balance story to my mom... She loves this story and often asks me whether u have completed it... She is also crazy like me... Haha...

This is one of your best stories... Very unique and well written... Thanks for taking me to a magic world...

Would love to read more and more lovely stories from u...

Please dont say u have lost interest in writing... U r still doing a great job... In fact u r the best... Oh and we will never forget u... U r the star writer of this forum...

Love u...

Sudha

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Yas

@IcecreamCupcake

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#934

Hai di...
Welcome back.. 😊 .
Update was Too Fab and Amazing..The way Rk was Confused how to search Madhu and his Son. I thought Nani will help him but nah here his son showed him the way..It was Amazing and the Future scene of Rk and his kids was too too too Awesome..Lol..This Abhi is too Naughty..Loved him..The way he scared his father too was good and His Daughter helped Rk from her brothers magic..Rk and his daughter doesn't know the Magic and Madhu and Abhi knows the Magic..This idea is too good...Both Rk and his Kids scene was Like Aww moment..The way Rk asked Abhi to not to leave him was too good..Lol Abhi doesn't like his Father kissing his mom.. 😉 .Rofl this made me laugh..He doesn't want his Father to kiss his mom..lol..
Thank god Balraj is dead..I thought how they gonna fight with him and at last Abhi saved the Whole thing..
Atlast Madhu Confessed that she didn't hated him and their Confession and Promise session too was good..I liked this yaar wen Madhu denied to use her Magic to go back home Abhi did it..They can travel anywhere without tickets..lol..I so want to travel without paying but here Abhi can make his parents to travel anywere..they can't get tired by traveling too..
Rk narrated whole thing to Madhu and They Changed Abhi's name to Arjun..so cute...Wen Rk tried to kiss back Madhu and he couldn't..the scene was Rofl..Lets c wat Madhu says wen she got to know about this..
Thank u so much for this update..
P.S.Pls accept my Buddy Request and Pls Update Perfect Someone too..Can't wait..
P.P.S.This is my 100th Post..I hit a century with this post..Thank u for updating..
Keep Writing...Every one missed u here..

Edited by Yasmine16 - 8 years ago

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Rumi

@RijaMalik

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#935

awesome story.. beautifully written...

ur a fabulous writter lazy..

plzzz do complete ur other stories too..

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anu023

@anu023

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#936

omg omg... am i seeing it right???

lazy u r back...?

great update as usual..so the kid indeed saved thm from balraj...

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#937

Omg am I dreaming

U r back

Thank u for coming di

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#938

Welcome back,
Superb update,
illusion part is awesome,the kid is naughty,
loved rk & his son convo and he said to rk that he don't like kissing,
they named him as Arjun not abhi,
balraj is dead,they saved the world and their son,
rk had told madhu about meeting their son,
Madhu never stopped loving him,she was angry on him but never hate him and she don't want to change their past,
when rk tried to kiss madhu his son didn't let him to reciprocate the kiss,
waiting for the epilogue,
thanks for the update

Edited by harini_ - 8 years ago