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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

rajbala ki khushi mein update dedo baba 😛

tu jump kar 16 pe, main aise hi catch karungi jaise raja ne catch kiya 🤣

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Tanya Kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

yes please update soon!! amazing amazing story so far 😃😃😃

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

I would love to read the rest of the story 😊. Hope u will continue the story. Its one of my favorites.

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Congrats on the reincarnation of this reincanation story ...jokes apart it was a great chapter !!!!!!!!
So Maya is unaware of the glimpses of Madhubala she keeps showing...and Rishaan ...I feel for this guy...kahan itni ambition ke saath ladki ko phasaya tha acting ke liye...aur khud hi phas gaya uske complicated life mein

Rudra's tensions just keep mounting dont then...that Bittuji Rudra scene was awesome...the way Rudra leaves Bittuji flabbergasted and shocked was awesome ...quite an emotional scene.

My favourite how ever was the last scene...Maya is a tough cookie...and Mrs/Dr Roy just got a telling off from her when it comes to Rishbala's love story...loved the way Maya speaks of them...so much fire for something she is not even aware of...and what a way to end it...

the unconsciously done reflex of a past life...a signature...carried over to the present life ...such a small action is gonna have big repercussions. Or so we think ...
Again I say...poor Rishaan

All in all, an enjoyable and awesome chappie ! Looking forward to the next one !

P.S. - only for you, would I deem this place worth my time my Alpha and sistar ! 😆

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

I was missing this story so much that I don't even remember the number of times I've read the previous updates. Thank you for finally updating. Missed you a lot 😊
The update was as usual gripping and am emotional roller coaster. I really like the way you capture the emotional turmoil of characters who are coming in terms with their past while on the same time juggling with their present. It's truly commendable 👍🏼 I love love love the character of Rudra. I'm totally crushing over him 😳
I'm getting worried seeing Rishaan getting so close to Maya. It gives me jitters. Maya signing as Madhubala Rishabh Kundra 😲 oh my God. Has she realised that she is Madhubala? I'm so intrigued. 😉
Continue soon my friend 😃

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

gonna read this right from the start :D

Good Job Mar :D 🤗

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

Wow !!! Finally you updated😃

I am really glad to find this update. This is one of my favorite stories. And I really really loved the update. Thank god Rudra got that creepy note from the car and decided to investigate more about it. I am looking forward to know the history behind creep and Maya. I really feel bad for Maya. She is in trouble. She really need an expert help/advice. Loved Rudra Bittuji conversation. And I think Maya also subconsciously aware of her past life otherwise how come she signed as Madhubala Rishab Kundra?? RIishaan is a sweet heart , he is really helping Maya. And this Maya is a tough girl. Its going to be difficult for Rudra to get close to her😛

Once again Thanks for updating Maria. Shall we expect your updates frequently now..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#759

OMG!! I can't believe this ...u updated after such a long time...My favourite part is Rudra-bittuji's scene...I loved how Rudra instead of directly telling bittuji about himself , he just left him shocked so that he thinks over it ...Rishaan is trying to help maya , but the closeness between them gives me jitters...It will be a tough job for Rudra to make maya his madhu...I am happy that he found the note in his car...waiting for Rudra to find that creepy guy...Btw can I get more Rudra-Maya scene...Its always so less...