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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

wow😳 breathtaking update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 please continue soon...

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

update update update 😆..soon soon soon 😆

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

where r u maria???

please update soon...

waiting...waiting...

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Just

@Obscurity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

I was just mesmerised by your story and currently I am dumbfounded. No words to describe this story

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

awesome update maria👏

i loved rishaan's softer side...u know my love for him right?😉

it was heartwrenching to see wen rishaan stopped the media...this dark wall he has purposely build for himself..to torture himself knowingly...its only fair that he dies saving his love...nothing else will rid him i guess of whatever the guilt is..

i loved the studio scenes of rudra...brilliantly written!👏

the ganpati scene was fab..and the end wen he yells her name n collapses...👏

oh so maya is scared of? i know she hates her face...was it that only or something else??😕

and finally rudra's letter has reached maya? or is it someone else?😕

waiting to see wat happens next😛

jaldi jaldi update

luv u 😛

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benaz

@benaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Heya! I really like this story of yours. It was superbly written and I have enjoyed reading the chapters up till now! I must say I was totally stumped when I learnt that Rudra is in fact RK not Rishaan! Im totally loving his interaction with Maya. You have me really engrossed in this story. Can you please PM me when you update? I'll buddy you😊

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: rima4ever
this was a very unexpected interesting update
a lot of things have happened
a lot of things have been cleared
a lot of things has been explained
the plot thickens further
will review it after some time

Thanks Dia. 😳

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Awesome update.

Now, Rudra will start to understand the reason of his dreams. I think Maya will also understand these things slowly.
Loved the another side of Rishan when he was helping the kids.
Who is the secret admirer of Madhubala??😡😡

Very Beautifully written.

Thanks Shreya.
I am glad you like the update. About the secret admirer... you will know soon enough. 😛

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: arshisfan
I love the update, it made see new shades of Rishaan's character, what's the mystrery behind that man, and Rudra, he will start from now on to understand the reason behind all the dreams he used to have, now I hope the restlessness he used to feel will come to an end, but what will be the new equation of Rudra-Maya, Maya was living the same even if we didn't get much details from this update but I think soon she will understand!!

I loved the magical moments Rudra and Rishab encounter before Rudra realises that they are one, I'm eagerly waiting for more 😃

Thank you so much, JJ!

You would think that Rudra's restlessness will end here... but it cannot be that simple now, can it be? 😛😆

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: -StephinesS-
I love love love the update Maria :)
the part where Rudra sees Madhubala walking towards him just had me in complete awe <3 :')
reminded me of RishBala :'(
hats off to you <3 for writing sooo beautifullly <3
Love love loveee this story and im sooo glad you finally updated :D ❤️

muahhh <3

xxx

Thanks a ton Steph for proofreading the thirteenth update!!

And I am so happy that you liked the update! 😳