I am in love with my EX-WIFE Ch5 pg 14

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ForbiddenFruit

@ForbiddenFruit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I really don't know what to say. I bet I can shower flattering praise...but I am gonna keep it simple. I love your writing! " Just like fall, she was stuck in the limbo between rain and snow, between love and separation, holding on and letting go". I love this line. Your writing is so poignant.
Now I have to go and read second chappie!

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ForbiddenFruit

@ForbiddenFruit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

"His queen, as jokingly referred to her, might know her coffee but her kiss was never bitter. Yet today a hint of dark brew cut sharply through her sweet vanilla."...simply wow! Y r u not a published author yet????
Aahan...wat a coffelicious update!!! I can almost sniff coffee in the air.
Der hug!!! I almost wanted to hug my teddy bear while reading dat.
Absence makes the heart fonder,huh?? Dilwala ex-dulhaniya ko le jane aaya!
Now...has he come because he realised his mistake of taking her for granted...or sum ulterior motive??? U never know wid rk! But this is ur story...so we wait!

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

wow..looking forward for the next part..continue soon

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Indhu

@Indhulovesparii

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

great..looking forward for the next part

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

oh what was it. a late awakening in him. Wonderful piece of work. But what is Madhu going to do about Rishab now.

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

loved it...waiting for next update

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927945

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

wohoo madonna loved it😊can u give link to previous works

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit
I really don't know what to say. I bet I can shower flattering praise...but I am gonna keep it simple. I love your writing! " Just like fall, she was stuck in the limbo between rain and snow, between love and separation, holding on and letting go". I love this line. Your writing is so poignant.
Now I have to go and read second chappie!

HOOO gurl

I love me some flowery words.😆

Joking, you ij just as good😉

I like when people appreciate the effort it takes to weave these intricate words together. It ain't an easy feat to procastinate and write this story instead of my english essay😆