Rishbala FF- A Twist Of Fate -Chp.15/Pg127-[05/10] - Page 79

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rg0782

Chapter 5: Its short but sweet...aww I loved Rk and his cuteness...he has it full !!😳😳

Chapter 6: Thank god Arjun nd Trishna r couple..I didn't want another angle to their story...
It was a pretty nice update...but Malik irritates me...and now who is this HE??????😕😕😕
chapter 7: emotional update...The way RK consoled Madhu was heart warming...
Chapter 8: Poor Madhu..she had to bear much pain...hate Malik...seriously...
Loved the last hug of Rishbala...so soothing...😳😳



Glad u r liking it...keep on reading to find out more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay I think frm thia point its just ni invading the thread...so no replies
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry to anyone who has left a comment between ni's invasion and I didn't reply to u...u can scold ni for that and also shree!
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Posted: 10 years ago
An Update after long i knw...but guys Ni has agreed to update as soon as i update all three of my stories...so here i am updating one and will update the other two soon 😆
Chapter 15

"Here take these", RK threw a bunch of towels at the three of them, who were lazily relaxing on the couch. "Hey! Have some manners." snorted Adi as most of them landed on him, making the rest laugh. "Don't be such a cry baby." RK commented back. "I am not crying!" "Sure." He replied rolling his eyes at him whilst grabbing a towel for himself. They all had played until they got tired and crashed on the couch straight away making Rishabh go and get something for them all to wipe the paint off. "Ok, this Farmhouse is not so large so there are only two bathrooms. How about you twins go off first?" he suggested. Agreeing with him both grabbed their extra pair of clothes and rushed upstairs to the rooms, after all they did all need a shower after all the fun they had.

"I am just going outside to make a call, alright?" "Yeah sure" replied back Trishna. He smiled and walked out. "Di come lets make some food." Trishna said standing up. "Do I look like a cook to you?" Madhu asked with a straight face. "Don't be lazy and get up!" "Stop ordering me." "I will." she said authoritatively.

"But I don' t want to do anything.." she moaned lazily. "Oh come one Di, be a bit more active." "A bit more?" Madhu exclaimed shocked. "Wasn't this much enough? My legs are hurting like hell!" "And?" "argh.." Madhu snorted back at her. Trishna grabbing her hand pulled her out of the couch and up on her feet, all the while Madhu just whined.

"Now what do you wanna make?" "I don't know." "How can't you! You're the one who was oh-so-excited about this." Madhu exaggerated making Trishna chuckle. Looking around in the kitchen cabinets hoping to find something, she grabbed out a packed of pasta. "Here lets make this...it's not even much effort." Madhu smiled. "Yh sure, with those three monster eaters we have, this will totally satisfy them." Trishna remarked sarcastically, to which Madhu didn't bother replying, therefore just rolled her eyes. "Well if they are so hungry then they can cook themselves, but pasta is mine now. " She declared

"And what about me?" came in another voice. "How can a superstar eat this, this pasta, that too plain?" Madhu faked mischievously. "Oh you know I would eat anything and everything." "Of course how could I forget, after all you still are the same guy years back in London." She answered back laughing at the old him, whilst opening the packet. "Well not really..I have changed a lot." He said walking up to her. "Don't you think..?" he whispered next to her ear, making her go still. Chuckling he walked past her and up to Trishna who was standing next to the counter. "What do you think Trish? Am I still that same guy, you meet 8 years ago?" he asked with a smirk.

"Yeah, you have to be honest. During the first few years you were still pretty much shaken up with all that happened.." she trailed off going quiet suddenly, grabbing Madhu's attention and RK going pale. Madhu turned around looking at both, scrunching her brows. "Yh..YH I really missed Madhu at that time right.." RK said turning around, facing Madhu with a smile. "Awww...this big baby missed me?" Madhu said grabbing his cheeks and pulling them. Both Sisters burst out laughing at his pout as he rubbed his cheeks. "You witch.." he muttered making both laugh even more.

"When will we reach?" "AS i said before..In.A.Bit!" he stressed his words to which she gave him a whateva' look. "Woah! Look at that!" she pointed out of the car window. "What's so Wow in that? It's just a few kites in the sky.." he answered back confused at her. "Argh! You are no fun to be with! Your stingy all the time.." "I am what?!" he asked loud and dangerously as he stared at her with angry eyes. Priya turned her head away, afraid of him. How was Madhu even friends with him?' She wondered. This guy was clearly no fun to be with, always serious, that never ending attitude, and since the past week or so everything seemed to have been heightened; and here she was, stuck with him for another project. To her luck she assisted Madhu and not him. "Can we stop somewhere?" "Why?" "Just, because.." "Okay , so when you have a reason then i will have a think." he answered, turning his head back to his tablet and continued to read. "Mr Driver can you stop at the next station?" The driver who was clad in a white uniform answered back in positive. "What? NO!" Mukund nearly shouted. "But why?" "What why? You want to reach asap! And then you want to stop somewhere!" "But i need the toilet!!" Priya argued. "So? You can go once we reach the hotel." he said. "But i need it Now!" "You are no Kid! Hold it in!" he commanded her. "Ass." she said to herself as she turned her head to the window. To her luck he didn't hear her otherwise she knew for sure he would of thrown her out of the car. This guy had temper issues for sure!

"How long will it take us to reach?" Trishna asked, now getting irritated with both twins next to her continually arguing or trying to annoy one another, and here she was stuck between them both. "Why aren't you eager to meet someone?" "Yh, after all she spent A.Whole.Day. Without her Arjun!" the twins commented, whilst laughing to which RK and Madhu joined. Trishna however bit her lip, feeling embarrassed. "Hey how about we meet up with him?" RK asked. "Yh Trishna Di call him up!" Anjali said in joy.

"Ok, RK just go to XYZ Hotel, he said he would meet us there." "Oh that is one of his Dad's hotels right?" Madhu asked. She had talked to him in the partly when he told her that he has a chain of hotels which he owns. "Yep, it belongs to Mr. Verma." RK answered back.

"Hello Sir. How may i help you?" "We have a reservation here..." "Alright." the receptionist answered tuning her head to the computer screen in front of her. "Sir, what name is the reservation under?" "There should be two rooms under Mukund Dixit." he said resting his arm against the desk. "Thank you." she said as she searched for his name. "Welcome Sir, your rooms are on the first floor, Room 105 and 106."she passed two cards to him. "Sir could you please fill this out and sign here." she said with a smile as she gave him a form for contact details and pointed out where he would need to sign. Mukund smiled back and started filling it out.

"Mukund when will you finish?" asked Priya bored, with her luggage in one hand and her back resting against the desk. "Aren't you supposed to call me Sir?" he asked still engrossed in the form. "That's only when we are at work." she replied casually. "Well, then i could get you fired." he threatened. He couldn't wait to get rid of her. "But i don't work for you." "So?" "I work for Madhu and she won't fire me." "I am her best friend. If i tell her she would." he replied with a smirk, handing back the form to the receptionist who smiled back to him. "Well, then you should also know that she won't listen to you." she replied back chuckling.

"Come let's go. He would be waiting." Adi said to Anjali as they both got out of the car, and started walking. Locking the car the rest followed both of them, into the Hotel where they were meeting.

"I am hungry!" "I thought you needed the toilet." "I already went." "Okay good." "So now lets go and eat." "Go yourself!" "Look, i know we rather be with a dozen of other people right now, but i don't want to dine alone!" Priya answered him. "Whateva.." he said grabbing his bags and making his way to the elevator, leaving her standing there in the lobby.
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Satisfied? If not then suck it up😆...u guys will get two more updates so yh...be happy and also check out ur replies...and leave some feedbacka and also like if u do😛
Edited by Mentally-Insane - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc update
some spice is coming
waiting fr next
party tu banta hain as m the 1st
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. But very less of rishab and madhu want more of them 😉 .
If my guess is right then they will be meeting mukund in the same hotel.
How i hate this mukund 😡 .continue soon pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woho finealy we got the update. U are always teasing mod on us right? For cliffhanger and late updates. But I want to tell that we love your updates. Thanks for nice story on our beloved rishbala.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update Lubu!!! 🤗
Madhu is a lazy ass for sure 😆
Loved the part when RK came in the kitchen and teased Madhu.
You are trying to build up suspense, ain't you?
Well I don't forgive you for that coz you got me hooked with it. I so want to know about his past. 😡
Thanks a lot for the PM.
And please update soon!! 😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
I'm already hating mukund. So guess they are going to meet in next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay now I am pissed. You couldn't tell me you would update it today? Didn't me asking you to tell me when you will update, mean anything to you. Hm. *Breathing out* Very well what is done is done. And by the way, I stand by with my promise. But I can't promise any update before 17 October. Studies comes first. And I want to ace my first exam for this semester.
And now to burst that Little bubble of yours. 😆 The Damon thing. I forgot to mention. It happened in those TVD books. So it might not happen in the show. Here's a link if you want to read it for yourself. But it's on you. Don't come crying to me if doesn't happen. Because as far as I remember, my memory might be wrong, Bonnie didn't die in the books. I might be wrong it was a long time ago I read this. You know I lost interest. But it might come up again. Bonnie is afterall dead. I really don't know who irritates me more she or Caroline. Or all of their overacting.🥱 Like your comment on when Elena cries. Priceless I tell you.😆
Now over to the update. Huh. I guess they faked ignorance for each other once again after that kiss.😆
But I loved the scene where he comes in the kitchen and wants something to eat and teases Madhu. You did got me curious about RK's past. It's still a questionmark for me.
Can't wait for the jealous and possessive RK to emerge. I assume he will get that when he gets to meet Mukund. 🤣 What a reaction that will be. RK throwing angry glances at him, Mukund returns the favor. 😆
In one corner we have the great Superstar RK, former best friend of Madhubala Malik.
In the other corner we have her coworker and the secret admirer Mukund Dixit, the new best friend of Madhubala Malik.
Now guys they say everything is fair in love in war. With that said.
LETS GET READY TO RUMBLEEE!!!!!!!ROFLROFLROFLROFL
No worries RK if you about to lose. I am sure of that the twins will surely help you out. But with their clumpsy nature, they will definitely make you lose.😆
Now I can't not tell you thanks for the PM. But I am saying that with some reluctance. And I Think you know why. Tell me is about teasing you for Only for you or the candy part? Well since you didn't tell me you'll update. I will trend #WeGotUpdate.😆 And hopefully my still untitled story will get posted along with that update. But no promises on that one. It's far away from being done. And I am not posting anything until I am completely done with it.
Thanks for the PM and for the update sis. And for the Little mentioning of me on your update. Even if keeps a lot of pressure on me to update.😆
Instead for YouGotMail, like the Movie you got mail with Meg Ryan. I will tell you YouGotALongReply.😆
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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