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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all i want to say..u all should be thankful to my 3 idiotic friends who i want to dedicate this update to for actually making me update!! I tell u all these three spammed the thread!! 20 pages!!! Their tranding (#WeWantUpdate) really worked and their threats...i tell u..never mess with these three... Kavya sis (@kg16), Shree (@.Shree.) and Nina (@Ni33). Also let me tell u Nina has started her first ever story here, Licence to Kill, Forbidden to Love...so please if u havn't stared to read it it yet..do it!! It is awesome!! It's abut spies!! Awesome naa? here is the link...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4137506

And another good news people...I passed my exams!!

Chapter 14

"Hey Rohan Uncle!" I greeted him happily taking a seat down next to him "Oh Look who finally showed up.." he let out in a sarcastic tone. I scowled at him. "Oh come on..You're my favourite Uncle!" i said to pacify this adorable Man-child uncle of mine. "You mean i am your only Uncle." he said raising his brows with a teasing smile. I gave him a sheepish smile, hadn't thought of that. Laughing Rohan pulled me into a side hug, putting his newspaper aside. "Bhai that is not true." Roma interrupted us both who i think had listened to our conversation while coming down the stairs. She sat down on the opposite couch to us in the living room. "Rajev is also her Uncle." "Rajev is also her Uncle.." he mimicked her to which she pulled a face. Gosh, children they are! But Rajev? "Rajev?" i asked my query. "My Husband!" Roma replied annoyed while Rohan Uncle laughed and I gave her an apologetic smile. We talked for some more, mostly her telling me about my Rajev Uncle who works abroad and only comes during the main holidays which meant he would be coming in the Christmas holidays.

"Afternoon everyone." came a too well known voice from behind. It was Rishabh's and i could confirm that when he walked around and took a seat with us. I hadn't meet him for a week now. That kiss i think did change things between us, even if we tried to stop it. He was busy in his shooting therefore he couldn't come visit but we also hadn't talked over the phone or even texted. I just didn't know what to say to him and i think he also didn't. Everyone greeted him and i gave him a nod and put up my hand slightly as a greet. "Where have you been all week RK?" asked Uncle. "We are currently filming the climax and you know how hard and long it is. And on top the Media." he let out and exhausted sight. "Why don't you take some rest?" i suggested. He must be really tired. "No, no i am fine. I actually came here to ask if you, Trishna, the twins..and Deepali wanted to go out somewhere, with me.?" he asked. I knew he added Deepali just for Rohan Uncle who was sitting with us. "Deepali isn't home. She has gone on a trip with her friends, yesterday and won't return till Monday." Uncle informed. I live with her and i didn't know about this. I let out a breath of relief which Rishabh did too. I smiled looking down onto my lap, he made me smile like always. Whenever he is around you can't help but smile. "Okay so the others?" "Anjali and Adi, i know would go anywhere with you so once the come back from college just take them." Roma answered. "Madhu?" he looked at me waiting for an answer. I smiled at him, he got his answer and i just hoped that everything would be normal again.

"So where are we going?" Anjali asked as Trishna finally sat in the car. We had decided to pick her up from the office. "That, i am not telling you." Rishabh said smirking. Anjali pouted. "Okay so tell us at least why you told us to bring an extra pair of clothes." it was Adi this time. "Not telling. And yes Trishna we bought you some extra clothes. Get changed out of this office wear and get comfortable." He told her. I stayed silent all the time. I knew he wouldn't tell and there was no point trying to get it out from him.

"This is where you bring us?" Both twins said in unison. "Yep." he said popping the p'. Both looked at him with a are-you-for-real expression. "Well...it is beautiful." i said. It was his Farmhouse located in the woods. There was a small lake as well, just a few feet away from us. "What is the point of coming here? We could of just stayed home aswell." Adi complained. "Because i have something planned." he said with a smirk. This wasn't a attitude filled smirk but a very playful and mischievous one.

"AHHH! ADI YOU DOUCHEBAG!! TAKE HIM OUT!!" i screamed and within a second Adi flew onto Rishabh, dragging him onto the ground allowing me to run away and find a good place to hide. I can't believe i even said yes to this stupid thing. And this gear, gosh is it heavy! And i can't see clearly. I took a leaf from the ground and wiped the paint of my helmet allowing me to see better. Never in my life am i playing Paintball again! It's like Holi but to an extreme level. "Prepare to Die!!" Anjali said loudly who found me. Well now i am screwed. Quickly positioning my gun and closing my eyes i started shooting at her and tried to get away. But damn was she good! "Ahh..no Trishna di..go away!" Yes! Sister at rescue! Finally Anjali ran away leaving me at peace. "You fine?" Trishna asked. "Yes." "Keep a look out di. Both are very good." she warned. It was me, Trishna and Adi in a team vs Rishabh and Anjali. "Where is Adi?" she asked "He is taking on Rishabh." i replied. "Oh. I think Anjali went to help him then...come lets help Adi then." she instructed. We went around following the sounds of firing. "There they are! Di you go around from the lake side while i attack from this side." "Okay captain." i saluted as a joke to which she laughed. I went around as she told me, refilled my gun to full ammo and positioned it on Rishabh who was the nearest to me. And...FIRE!!! "Shit they all are attacking!!" Rishabh screamed. He turned to me and started shooting. I started backing while he came closer. He came so close that he tried taking my gun away so i couldn't shoot anymore. I wasn't going to give up this easily so started to fight back but was no use, he was way stronger. My team mates were also not here to help me as Anjali had ra off again and both had followed. "AHH! Rishaaabbh!" i Screamed as i fell into the lake but somehow managed to drag him with me. RIshabh quickly held my waist and brought it closer to his as we both splashed into the freezing cold water.

I took my helmet off, letting down my wet hair and so did he. I looked around to see if any of them had come back or were even in sight but not even one soul was. I looked back at Rishabh who was staring intensely at me. "what?" i asked. He shock his head and raised his hand to tuck away a strand of hair behind my ear. His hands were cold which made a chill run down my spine. He inched his face closer, capturing my lips into his. Nibbling slowly and gently i also responded. Once out of breath he pulled away and rested his forehead with mine. "You know, no matter how hard i try, you are attracting me." he told me "Rishabh you are my best friend." "You are mine too." "Then.." "I want to build on this thing we have between us..this pull." "Won't it be all of a sudden?" i stated my worry "Not if we take things slowly." "Hmmm" "Madhu, I am not saying that we should date just yet. But i want us to get to know each other better until we are 100% sure that this is what we want." he explained to me cupping my face. I smiled and nodded.

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Edited by Mentally-Insane - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Haha. First. Shows how much of a stalker and trending person I am of your story. 😆

CONGRATULATIONS FOR PASSING YOUR EXAMS!🥳
Finally an update. See trending does help. 😆 Or as you put it, your three idiotic friends. Not that I want us three be associated with them, but have you ever seen the Three Stooges, Moe, Curly and Larry?😆
I promise you if I haven't been busy the last couple of hours making dinner and apple pie I would trend till we had reached page 85, or at least till I reached the limit of posting comments. You would be forced to open another thread. 😈 😆
Thanks for promoting my FF in your FF and adding a link to it 😳, it means a lot. 😳 I'm happy you are liking the story. 😛 Do keep reading there are twists coming up.😉
Now over to your update that has finally arrived. It was awesome. 👏 I loved everything, especially the part where they played paintball and RK and Madhu fell down in the lake. Especially their conversation and their kiss. 😳 Aw, he want's to take it slow with Madhu, get to know her. Poor thing doesn't know what will hit him when Mukku arrives. 😆 Thank God Deepali wasn't there. Loved the part where you excluded her from the trip. 😆 She is out on some trip with some friends of hers. 😆 Never liked her. But she does afterall play a vamp. 😆
Just awesome! 👏
Now, just because you have updated the story now it doesn't mean that you don't need to update it for another couple of weeks. We will trend for an update. Even if it means you have to create another thread. 😈 Don't let me get all Mr. Burns on you. 😆
Edited by Ni33 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cute update Lubeeda Di!Luved Rishbala kissing again!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon & pm Me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats for ur result 😊.awesome update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
resdie 😃
unres 😃

hey..
reading it aftwr a long time 😳

had lost the story aafter cchapter 7

and m so thankful of yours for pming me, i ffinallyccaught up with it

it's getting more superb nw...

Rishbala's chemistry is the best thing in updates to read..

oww Mukund is coming here 😲 he will negative for sure..after all acc to himMadhu is only his

cont soon..will wait for the update

btw forget to say that farmhouse part was so superb 👏
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

😆Lubuuu... So, finally... We got what we wanted!!! Mission Update Successful, my psychos!! 😆 I never knew, Trending works out so effectively hunnn... I am feeling as if I had fought for freedom... 😆 I couldn't control my laugh on your introduction to us in your first paragraph... ROFL... We indeed are DANGEROUS!! THINK BEFORE YOU MESS!! ROFL... We have the power of TRENDING!! ROFL...

Ok, coming to the update! I can't dislike any of it as I am already deeply madly in love with this story!! And this part was so so lovely!! Paintball... I just love playing it with my cousins!! Last time I played it one year back... Lolzzz... It was indeed a great fun though hell tiring!! I could imagine all my time reading your update!! It was so lively to me...
Ahaann... Another kisss!! I am telling you once their Love Train gains some speed, this couple is gonna burn everything around them... ROFL... But wait... Why am I feeling like giggling over poor soul... Superstar Kundra!! The Jealous soul is yet to arrive no... Idhar Mukku ne maari entriyaan aur RK ke dimaag me bajengi ghantiyaan... Jealousy Ki!! ROFL... And then.. "We should know each other well" dialogue and feelings would fly away like Chidiyaa Firangi... ROFL... Tab to bas... "Madhubala... Tum Sirf Meri Ho!!!" Ohoo... I am riding on my dreamy horses too fast no... ROFL... Let my Sweetheart Mukku Chand comes to his Madhubala... I am dying to read his epic entry with his Toli... ROFL...
Lubu, see I have given you enough lengthy comment for your Not So Fast reaction to our Trending. Satisfied? Lolzzz
But that mustn't mean that you forget the further updation... Don't forget... #WeWantUpdate can be activated anytime... ROFL...Keep up this pace darling!
And my dearest Shree and Ni... Shall we now trend for #WeGotUpdate... ROFL...
Lets attack on Lubu's another story!! ROFL
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally u Updated, thank u so much for the update 🤗🤗
Will be here itself, Next time if Update doesn't come then we ll start trending 😉😉
Since I got the update here, next I will go to Kavya's thread for trending 😆😆

The update was Beautiful.Thank god Deepali was not there. Let her be with her Friends itself.
So RK and Madhu wants to take everything slow. I dont have any problem with that but hope that
Mukku doesn't create any problem
Edited by .Shree. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
loved their game. Glad that RK has decided to take it further slowly.
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
paintball...yaar so amazing and full of madness...
rk and madhu slowly slowly are attracting to each other..😃

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