Rishbala OS: Engagement Trilogy 1: Mohabbat Ho Na Jaye

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

beautiful OS..

thanks for pm dear..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

OMG!! brilliant os...not a single dull moment...& I just loved this crazy madhubala & this arrogant Rishabh...plz do write more with such brilliant characters...

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I am commenting here for 2nd time and read this OS for 3rd time.😆

On each time reading I felt as like 1st time reading. Lazy you are awesome 👏 I love all your writings. If possible please write the last part or epilogue for this OS ☺️

I know its a one shot. But i need more on this story 😊 Please write more OS and FF. Waiting for your updates on other FF

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Lazy...if you ask me to choose one out of all your works here on forum...i can never make the choice. How can you write so beautifully and distinctively.coz non of your works look repetitive. They all have such a fresh feel. Hats off to you.

This mule head and arrogant shrew were treat to my senses...i could totaly imagine every scene you wrote and when madhu pulled that so called ruining fiasco i was laughing like hell.

No it dint look all rushed up and no it was not at all sloppy. I just loved it to the core.

P.s: can you please give an epilouge...plz plz plz

Edited by tanuja.siri - 11 years ago