Rishbala OS: Engagement Trilogy 1: Mohabbat Ho Na Jaye

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mmradhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Awesome and beautiful os... i liking very much...
Thanks for the pm... take care

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manju21.k

@manju21.k

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

UNRES...😉
Awesome update Lazy...
Loved Rishab and talking 2 herself Madhu...😆
I liked Madhu dat she never looked at him by sympathy and she was normal 2 him...😊
I like d song it was so Perfect on dem...I also like Temple and first meeting ...😳 wanted more Rishbala moments...😉
Ya last scene was bit fast...but i like it Hope u didn't mind at all !!😳
Loved it ...continue Writing such Awesome Stories Lazy...😛

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

lovely os!thanks for pm...so rudr was a cupid!thank God!& at some points i felt that he might create a problem for rishbala!but he was really a true brother & friend by supporting rishbala!madhubala found rishab's limp sexy!aanhaan!loved rishbala scenes to the core & the song was the cherry on the cake!p.s.i've read it last night & wanted to comment yesterday ifself but battery ne de diya dhokha!& morning mein it was school as soon as i came home & took my phone my mom was lyk aane se hi shuru ho gayi!& then i changed had my lunch & when i again took the phone & went to the forum i found that u have updated that perfect someone & commented on it...& then it was time to sleep...thats why got late!please forgive me!

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simran

@Love_Ashvik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Aww..so sweet!
thanx 4 d pm!
loved it!

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Janani24

@Janani24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

awesome os luved it to the core from the start till end👏 omg madhu n rishab were fighting like children n the last part when she blackmailed him n when he gave her back were sooo goood👏 thank god rudr too understood else he would have been heart broken but at last they all made rishab to understand and accept madhu that was so damn cool⭐️ good work😊

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

@book.worm: Nyc OS!!!!😊

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

It was really a very nice piece of writing...luved the way Madhu accepted Rishab's limp...thnks for the pm...

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Moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

I liked this Madhu -- She rocks & so do u ... 😎.

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benaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

This OS was just mindblowingly too great. I had a great time reading it from start to finish. The ending was just too funny seeing a scandalized RK and Madhu forcing him into marrying her. You're an amazing writer :)

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

lovely OS...madhu with bold and mischievous nature attracting hot headed rishabh...rishu with a limp is a cute change...liked the climax...i didn't find it sloppy at all...

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