New Rishbala FF~Charitable Thoughts Ch 1 PG 14 - Page 9

That was an awesome update and that with just the first chapter! The detailing is superb



RK is baddd 😆
I liked the judge! I can't wait till he does his checks on RK 😆
And wait! Dipali and RK! Together? 😡 😡 what! 😲 don't talk to me Komal...just don't talk to me


But Just amazing! 👏 👏 👏

I have no words...



I was NOT expecting that!
What happened to the sweet FF I thought you were gonna write! 😆

Don't get me wrong! You left me stunned with this! I love this RK!
But I feel so bad for poor bitto! Why does he let RK treat him like that? Dips and RK! I agree with Sonia...what!
But Dips and Bitto? What is going on there...


I miss MB in your update but I had to go back and read the prologue...can't begin to explain how excited I am to read where you take this story!

Very interesting & gripping start! Loved the FF.
Like the way you have mentioned such minute details like the judge's office & then later RK Mansion. Your style of writing is superb. Pls add me in PM list

wow!wonderful update.loved it.plz continue soon.and where is madhu?

Badass Kundra :D ❤️
Only things missing now is the Bala and oooeyyy goooey chocolate :D
You better do something about my chocolate fixation soon :D BAHAHAHAHAHAH!

LOVELY STUFF babe :D Sooo looking forward for the next update :D

xxx

Originally posted by: Enchanted_jassi

Alright Komal your FF was so unexpected. It was so dark and amazingly written that I'm blown away from your FF and I can't wait to see if this FF gets any sunlight or not 👏 😊

I EFFINNGGG LOVE YOU 😃
But you already know that 😉

I actually can't thank you enough for all you do!

Some sunlight for this ff...mmm maybe we should wait for Madhu and see what kind of light she brings 😉

Originally posted by: taraka2005

Awsm Update👏👏😊

Thankx Trupti! 😊

Extremely interesting story so far, Komal.👏
Looking forward to the next update.😳

awesome update!thanks alot for the pm!please update the next part soon & pm me!