Rishbala One Shot: In Her Love Note on Pg 8

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Oh my god !! I never wanted it to end😆 and at the same times wanted to know the past...the dark past...

initially RK scared me😲..in between even dutta and Madhu's behavior was instilling doubts in me..but when it was revealed..honestly I instantly liked Dutta bhao and his sister Madhu !!! Felt sad for Trishna and Radhaji and hated that MK he deserved his end😡!

Trust me, When I reached the end..I was grinning wide as am a sucker for happy endings!!!

Lovely OS and it's long...ah!! Just sone pe suhaga 😳

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DVDfann

@DVDfann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This is the best one shot i have ever read.. Keep going 👏

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Moumita

@-SmexyGhost-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Oh dearie..!! i just loved loved loved this story -- It was intense -- I felt like watching a movie --- Pls do write something like this more often.

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livelyrose90

@livelyrose90

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

superb,incredible i m short of words ..best os i hv read till date, i simply love dark stories they kinda attract me and u were saying its not ur forte?

well i can say u r one of the terrific writers

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome story
Loved the way u put everything beautifully

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

superb OS👏
RK- Dutta convo, madhu n rk's relation, her love for him and his insecurities...all were beautifully described.
good work
keep writing more stories😊

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Z-a-p-p-e-d

@Z-a-p-p-e-d

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

its a beautiful story ❤️

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448368

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

absolutely brilliant! loved it, u should write more...

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Janani24

@Janani24

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

omg it was such a gr8 story lazy👏👏👏 the way u turned dutta from bad to good n MK from good to bad in an instant was amazing⭐️ poor rishab n madhu had to suffer for all this but i am glad that it end up well😊 enjoyed reading it😊

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

awesome OS..

thanks for pm dear..

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