Rishbala One Shot: In Her Love Note on Pg 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: kg15

TOO GOOD..!! thank you so much😊

I JUST LOVED IT..!! so glad u loved it😊


I THOUGHT, IT WAS A TOUGH & A DARK SUBJECT FOR AN OS... yes.. because of that i decided to make it a single shot instead of a short story.

THE NARRATION WAS APPRECIABLE !!

IT SIMPLY HOOKED ME UP TILL THE END !

GOOD JOB!!
omg tht is so sweet... thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: jaya15

Nice😳

Originally posted by: flowing_river

Amazing...just mind boggling 👏 👏

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome and a very emotinal os.

Loved it.

Originally posted by: leelaa9

Superb Rishbala one-shot fanfic.😳👏

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! this is one of the best one shot I have ever read...I just loved it...😊

Originally posted by: Shree.123

Amazing OS 👏👏

Loved it 😳

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Awesome dear awesome. Really loved it. Keep writing

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

fantastic os lazy 👏 thanks alot for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: Dil_Rishbala

Awesome...Awesome...Awesome...

I love it...

Originally posted by: cool_sri

SUPERBBB STORY!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: pooja1210

Lovely os .

Originally posted by: RohiDDan4ever

Awosum os..very well written..Loved it

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Oh my god !! I never wanted it to end😆 and at the same times wanted to know the past...the dark past... hehehehe so glad you enjoyed it😳😃

initially RK scared me😲 really? when? i had lot of difficulty writing RK trying not to make him negative regarding his relation with Madhu😳😆😆..in between even dutta and Madhu's behavior was instilling doubts in me hehehe i was trying so hard to make it seem like they are having some sort of relation but at the same time, people shud not guess that they are siblings😳😆 but i guess many might have guessed it as they read..but when it was revealed..honestly I instantly liked Dutta bhao and his sister Madhu !!! awww so glad you liked him😊 Felt sad for Trishna and Radhaji and hated that MK he deserved his end😡! yes.. he did deserve what he got but then RK and Dutta got burned because of him

Trust me, When I reached the end..I was grinning wide as am a sucker for happy endings!!! so glad you liked the ending😛...

Lovely OS and it's long...ah!! Just sone pe suhaga 😳 hehehehe... thank you...

Originally posted by: colorsluv

Oh dearie..!! i just loved loved loved this story -- It was intense -- I felt like watching a movie --- Pls do write something like this more often.

Originally posted by: livelyrose90

superb,incredible i m short of words ..best os i hv read till date, i simply love dark stories they kinda attract me and u were saying its not ur forte?

well i can say u r one of the terrific writers

Originally posted by: anjali0111

superb OS👏 thank you so much hun
RK- Dutta convo, madhu n rk's relation, her love for him and his insecurities...all were beautifully described. so glad you cud feel the intensity of their relation, i was really scared while writing it up... i have never written a story which was so complicated😳
good work
keep writing more stories😊
thank you hun... will try to write more😊