Rishbala One Shot: In Her Love Note on Pg 8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: bahnni.mj
good stuff 👏

thank you😊

Originally posted by: Clara20
awesome os lazy...too emotional

thank you so much clara😊

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
Awesome story
Loved the way u put everything beautifully

thank you so much Neha.. so glad u enjoyed it😊

Originally posted by: DVDfann
This is the best one shot i have ever read.. Keep going 👏

that is so sweet of you hun.. thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: SB200
its a beautiful story ❤️

thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: Piyatrix
absolutely brilliant! loved it, u should write more...

thank you so much hun... pls do check out my other fanfics though they are more light heart romances... will try to write more like this one in the future😊

Originally posted by: janu_2006
awesome OS..
thanks for pm dear..

thank you janu... no probs hun

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri
This is a very good piece of writing. I dont have much words to say rather than this.

thank you so much tanuja... this means a lot to me😊

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#42

Originally posted by: Janani24
omg it was such a gr8 story lazy👏👏👏 thank you so much janani😊 the way u turned dutta from bad to good n MK from good to bad in an instant was amazing⭐️ thank you😊poor rishab n madhu had to suffer for all this but i am glad that it end up well😊 yeah except for MK everyone else suffered, but RK and Madhu were lucky enough find each other enjoyed reading it😊 so glad u enjoyed reading it😊

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#43

Originally posted by: punam2712
WHAT A WONDERFUL STORY
IT DESRVES MORE THAN TO BE TAGGED AN OS
BUT MUST SAY YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER

thank you so so much punam.. so sweet of you... so glad u enjoyed it so much😊

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#44

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL
WOW! its awesome👏 very beautiful story ful of passion, love, n suspense👏 .u shud write more😃😃

thank you so much hun... so glad you enjoyed it😊... will defo try to write more😊

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#45

Originally posted by: mimibm
I have just no words to describe how I am feeling after reading this OS...it was outstanding...👏 thank you so so much hun😊😊😊😊...the inner turmoils of RK and Madhu have been wonderfully portrayed in your writing so glad u cud feel their turmoil... i was very scared while writing it...and the story itself is a masterpiece...thank you for penning down such a commendable concept thanks hun and thanx to you for reading it and appreciating my work... ...

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#46

Originally posted by: ..Cute_Angel..
Awesome OS👏

thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
i loved every bit of it! 😳
u r BRILLIANT! 👏

thank you so much dear🤗

Originally posted by: van1
Its a beautiful piece of writing!

thank you hun.. so glad u liked it😊

Originally posted by: bria
jst wonderful

thank you😊

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it

so glad u loved it hun😊

Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366
lazy , ek baath tume patha hai , you are a wonder ful writer , 👏 .i love this os

thank you so much sriram😊😊😊 it means a lot to me😛

Originally posted by: shweta2728
Very nice...this is something I would read again!

P.S. This is not a short os lol

thank you so much shweta😊 so humbled that you feel this is worth another read😊
i tried and tried just cudn't make it anymore short😆😆😆

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#47

Originally posted by: kamiya
This is a wonderful OS dear👏 thank you so much hun😊
i love the way u write you captured all the emotions that needed to be captured. honestly i didn't want your story to end ⭐️ wow so glad u feel like that... i was worried that i was not conveying their emotions properly. so glad i cud do justice to the story
can't wait to read more😊
do write another os
thanks hun will try to write more in the future😊

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#48

Originally posted by: nshahtalati
👍🏼Wow, wow, wow that's all I can say. Loved it very much. Read this Os two times and ..., I don't know what to say more. 👏

thank you so much hun,,, so glad u feel this is worth another read...

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#49

Originally posted by: rg0782
amazingly written...completely mind engrossing...this Mohan😡...once a jerk always a jerk...really well written👍🏼...thnks for the pm...

thank you so much hun... so glad u found it interesting.. yeah Mohan was a @#@#@@ in this... Everyone else suffered because of him. no probs\

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#50

Originally posted by: Rkmadhuawsome
Amazinggg

thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: srik1
very nice story...it could have been a short story too.

thank you hun... i thought of making it a short story but i doubted whether i will have much readers if it was a short story. hehehe.. specially with Madhu's secret love for Dutta😳 and i realize i was wrong... but then i think os is better as it wudn't have this effect if you have to read it in gaps.

Originally posted by: Janani24
wow lovely os loved it to an extreme👏 mk is a monster n poor rishab he had to suffer this long because of him😡 but the end was beautiful😊

so glad u loved it Janani...yeah MK was the monster and he didn't suffer like others... so glad u loved the ending...