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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi my dear friends, i've been in this ff from last 4 months but i never guessed i'l turn myself into a writer within this period, all this credit goes to our magical couple rishabala and all story writers in this forum, Ok enough of my stories and get back into thetrack...
Prologue:

RK: Madhu, enough of every thing, i regret for the mistake i have done at past, please forgive me and come into my arms, i'm dying every day without you, my life saving elixir 😭

At the same time, at some other place ,
Madhu: Not even once you felt my love rishu, where did i lack rishu tel me pls..

And on hearing footsteps, madhu wiped her tears and came inside her blanket like sleeping..

Third person: how long could you act like this my jaan, your rishab part is over in your life.. Lets start our new happy life.. Saying this the third person closed the door and went out

So how is it my friends? So pls frankly say your comments to correct my mistakes..

And also kindly let me know whether i should continue this or discard at this starting level itself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting 😳 do continue soon.
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Character sketch - below

Index

part 1 page 2
part 2
page 2
part 3 page 3
part 4
page 3
part 5 page 4
part 6 page 5

part 7 page 7
part 8 page 9
part 9 page 10
part 10 page 12
part 11 page 14
part 12 page 15
part 13 page 19
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interesting ..continue soon 😊
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intsrting
updt soon
and pm me wenver u updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue -- I'm all ready 2 read more --- Cont soon 😊
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Sounds interesting . Do continue soon.
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Hey friends,

Here goes the character sketch, only characters that comes in the first few parts has been introduced here, remaining will be introduced then and there as the story proceeds.

Rishab Mohan Kundra (RK) : He is currently in the film industry, has a very bad past( that will be later revealed in the story), studied with madhu in the same college, knows that madhu has soft corner for him, and secretly admires madhu

Madhubala Shamser Malik : Loves all her friends and family members, but little more love to rishab, but she scares to express it, as he may avoid her freindship

Deepali Bhatia : Studied in the same college as Rishbala, and always use to stick with RK and ask him to support her for all the silly fight, that she picks up other collegemates.

Karan Bhatia : Brother of Deepali, studied in the same college, but one year senior to all.

Rohit Kumar: Close friend of Karan and accompanies him in all mischief, he also likes madhu.

Akshay Kumar : Students - General Secretary of the college

Radha Mohan Kundra : Mother of RK, a widow (in my story no remarrying with Batia)

Shamser and Padmini Malik : Parents of Madhubala

Kukunder Bhatia : Father of Deepali and Karan

Sikander : Collegemate of Rishbala and he likes Deepali.

Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago
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Hi guys,

thank you for all the likes and comments and here goes the first part😊

Ankit choudary, 8 year old boy was changing the channels, which announced some news about the students and their encounter at the first day of their college,hearing which madhu had tears in her eyes remembering her past life, which she struggles to forget and always results invain.

She went to the drawing room and took a file and started to act like, she was immersed in her work to prevent any one from disturbing her flashback about her past.

It was the first day for the freshers in that well establsihed college, which is famous not only for studies, but also for sports and cultural activities, and all the parents in the city want their ward to be in that college, and also the students wish to join there,as that college was also well known for many real love stories.

Akshay kumar, the general secretary of the college, along with his team in full efforts to make a memorable welcome day party to the freshers, and he was a chocolate boy of the college and he was always surrounded by his girl fans, in the name of helping him.

The prinicipal came there to check the works and thereby he confirmed with akshay that every thing goes well, and he replied affirmative.

And on finally checking the students name list which was held by sikkander, seeing the name of each student, ther came a funny reply from the group of students present there.

There were totally 36 students, among which 24 werre boys and 12 were girls.

The boys paid more concentration on the list of girls, the first name on the list was Deepali bhatia.

The information recieved at that part was,she was very rich girl and get every thing she wants forcefully.
And when the name Madhubala Shamser Malik was read, every one started to comment that it was so filmy, and akshay pointed "she should have entered a film institute and not this professional college", and there was loud appreciation for him, as he had cracked a joke.


And finally the students started to enter the college.

All the students were asked to take the seat alloted for them and the event was about to start.

A White shining Mercedes came to halt to distract every body from what they were doing, and there landed our hero.

Some students went to guide him, but he didn't wait for anyone , he just came inside and sat on the empty chair in a row, which was full of girls.

And on this hurried act, he missed to see the name pasted on the chair, which was written in block letters "MADHUBALA SHAMSER MALIK".



So here goes the update, sorry you may found it little boring, pls do adjust with me, i promise you, as the story proceeds you will find it interesting. And those who want PM, pls buddy me


Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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interesting dear . continue soon

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