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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2


Madhu's POV :

I have never seen this much big place in my whole life, my house is a small place which provides comfortable place for my family(me, my mom, my dad and deedu), but i wonder, one will not feel lonely in such a big place, i pray to god that i should not get lost at this place during this whole tenure.

And on thinking these things, i bumped on some one, its not so bright lighted, as its near backstage, the guy helped me to get up, and asked whether am fine and he went out hurriedly, as his mates called him out "Akshay", so it must be his name.

I came back to the hal where the fucntion takes place, and to my shock, i found some guy sitting in the place alloted to me, i was shocked and don't know what to do at that instant, and i didn't want to create any big scene on the first day, so i thought to ask the boy the reason for him taking my place.

I went near him and found his dark eyes looking at no particular point, i must say, any girl will fall for him at the first look, he is such a handsome guy and the next moment, he turned to me and throw his famous smile, showing his dimples, and at that time, i completely forgot where i was and why am standing there.

One volunteer guy came there to break the trance, and asked me the matter, and i told that i was asked to sit here and when i went to rest room

and came back this seat was occupied by him(pointing to RK).

The handome guy stood up and asked me "Is it the only seat avilable for you, or you don't have eyes to see the remainng free seats"

I was about to tel that every one has to sit on the seat which was alloted for them, the volunteer guy took the chance and turned towards me and

asked me to wait and then he turned to the other guy and told, "By the way Ms.Madhubala Shamser Malik, you pls be seated as requested, I'll find another comfortable seat for this girl" and every one started to laugh.


Rk didn't understand what he meant and he gave a confusing look,when madhu narrowed her eyebrows to look into the name that has been put on the chair,RK moved out of that place in a fraction of second, and madhu thanked the volunteer guy.

And he introduced himself to madhu"Karan Bhatia, am ur senior and ready to help you any time Ms.Beautiful"😊

Here RK was fuming 😡that he has been insulted on the very first day and he decided that he wont' leave both the guy and the girl, and he suddenly remember her name "MADHUBALA AHAAN"



Sorry guys, not much rishbala time, but as promised pls do wait for further updates
Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Nice shot..👏 Want to have more rishbala moments.

Waiting for your next update

Thanks for the PM😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update..keeP it up...👏 and thanks fr the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Independence day wishes to all my readers.. And sorry i'll not be updating for two days, so you can expect next part by saturday
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...
pls PM me for next update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

Madhu was holding ankit's homework notebook and helping him in his day's work from school.Ankit told madhu, that today he was taught about the 7 wonders of the world and listed them proudly,

Chichen Itza, Mexico - Mayan City
Christ Redeemer, Brazil - Large Statue
The Great Wall, China
Machu Picchu, Peru
Petra, Jordan - Ancient City
The Roman Colosseum, Italy
The Taj Mahal, India

And he proudly told that am very happy atleast one of them is in India,and then he went down to the living room, as he was called by his mother - Sumitra Choudary. Sumitra is more than like a sister to madhu, she is the only reason why madhu accepts to stay with these stone-hearted brothers who took her away from her rishab.


Thinking about the 7 wonders of the world, madhu began to think about her 7 (unforgettbale moments) wonders of her life.

First encounter
Rescue
Tennis finals
Picnic
Exam hall
Culturals
fairewell


Remembering about each , her eyes starts to shed pails of waters, as she has no one to blame, except her cruel fate.

Meanwhile, Sumitra came to call madhu to come down for lunch, but she didn't feel comfortable to share the dining table with the choudary brothers, so she took the luch and came back to her room, before arrival of choudarys.She came and sat on the bed and by mistake she spilled out the water on ankit's notebook and she quickly wiped it and found that there was list of 7 wonders, on which tajmahal was completely erased due to the water, she felt sad and kept every thing on the nearby table and went to rest room to refresh herself.

She keenly watched herself on the mirror and spoke to herself, that she has changed a lot, this is not the madhu, who was bold enough to fight with anyone for their rights, who was now not able to raise voice for herself., with that she started to think about her past


~FLASHBACK~

RESCUE

When madhu was thinking about the smiling guy, who took her place a while before and how he left the place, she was called on to the stage,

yes, she was district rank holder in her public exam, which lead her to get a merit seat in her college. She missed her family so much at that time, as per the rules, none of the family members are allowed to the first day freshers party.And hte principal of the college introduced madhu to the board members andspoke well about her and he also mentioned that madhu has a special talent that given a topic, she would get herself prepared to talk about it in the next 10 minutes and every one applauded.


Here Rishab was brought out form his thoughts, on hearing her name Madhubala Shamser Malik, he told "not again madhubala, you will deserve your punishment for messing with me by today itself, he threw a wicked smile with a evil plan on his mind."


So Madhu was given the topic and she was asked to wait in the students discussion room, which was next to principal room and far away from the function hall, so that she could get some peaceful time.

Madhu was deep in her thoughts, when a guy stepped into the room, and madhu was showing her back to him and unaware of the entry of the person, and he cleared his throat to gain her attention. She suddenly turned and find a tall , not so handsome boy, standing before her, and she raised her eyebrows to ask him what he want.

The guy was really dumbstruck on seeing madhu, he told himself "Angelic beauty, i would have not make fun of your name, if i have seen you before". Then he introduced himself that he was the Students - General Secretary of the college and his name is Akshay Kumar, he started to flirt
with her, saying some boring stories.

On the other hand, madhu was not paying any attention to him, and was busy seeing around to find some saviour from this dumbo.


Here goes the update,and pls feel free to express your likes and comments, so that i can correct my mistakes in further updates.

And sorry here also very less rishbala time, but i promise it will be full of rishbala and less of the others, and i'll try to update the post possibly by next few hours of today.

And for PMs, pls buddy me




Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4

As promised, here goes the next update.



Rishab, with his group of friends, who all were mates from their school planned somethig to spoil madhu's performance on stage, and were waiting for her, but she was not called yet and the board members were talking one after the other telling some old history about the school, irritated rishab, went alone to check out madhu, he searched all the nearby classrooms and found it all to be empty, but he didn't leave it and went to the next block where there are more individuals rooms, and he came to the floor on which madhu was there, but the place was very silent and he thought to leave, when she heard a slapping sound and hurried to that place.

On seeing that madhu didn;t paid attention to his heroic talks, the dumbo(akshay) came near madhu and held her by her hair and told"How dare you, madhubala to avoid me, you know how many girls in this college want to be friend with me, bu you the bloody hell, trying to avoid me, definitely, you must be awarded with a punishent for this", saying this he get close to her and make her head raise above by the hold on her hair, and started eyeing her lips, madhu
quickly understood what he was thinking and gave a tight slap to him and said" Maintain your distance with me or else this will continue " and she marched to the door, but he held her by the hand and he dragged her to some other room and locked her in the room and went back to the hall quietly.

Rishab, on hearing the slap, reached the place, but their convo made him to stop a little and he hid himself behind the pillar at the entrance of the room, and watched Akshay dragging madhu to other room and remained there silently.

Now, he was in a dilemma that whether he should be happy that the girl, whom he want to suffer, has already started to suffer or he must help the girl out, suddenly he made up his mind and checked out akshay, and found he has already reached the hall, so he came out from the pillar and marched towards the room where madhu was locked, he slightly moved the windows and peeped his head to see, but he couldn't find her, so he called her by her name "Madhu, are
you there, is everything ok", but there was no reply, so he thought to enter the room, but it was locked, suddenly he went out and returned back with a stone in his hand, he entered the room, by breaking the lock and found the room very dark, he switched on the light, but to his surprise there was no power in the room, so he used the light in his mobile phone and searched for her.

She lied down on one corner of the room unconciously, he went near her , holding her by her shoulders he called her, but there was no reply,so he went out and came back with a bottle of water and sprinkled some water on her face, she slightly responded, he holded her and made her to drink some water and he put his mobile light on her face and he was shocked.

He mouthed beautiful, gorgeous, he scolded himself for messing up with such a innocent beautiful girl, he just touched her face and called her name again, a chill went down her spine and suddenly her eyes shot open, Rishab just stared at her doe shaped eyes which were now staring at him, and they had a small eyelock. After few minutes, they both came back to their senses. And madhu shouted "You!!!!, you must be a part of everything, you know who am I, am not
coward girl, you know what, i'll go down and inform every one there that you along with your friend played some tricks on me and locked inside a room and can send you out of the college."

Rishab with fake fear "Oh, I'm so scared!, pls don't do this!!!!!!" and he started to smile , "no one will believe your words and most of all, you have not only messed up with me, but also to the GS of the college, so they will change the story upside down and mainly, can you hear that, your name was being called on stage,and if you go and start giving your explanation
there, everybody willl think that you have lost in your competition".

Reality strucked madhu and she asked rishab to take her back to the function hall, he smirked a little and asked what will I get in return. Madhu doesn't know what to answer to this question, so she simply blinked and rishab told "Chill out lady, i'll get my favour later and now we'll go down"


Function Hall

After all the board members has finished their sppech, they called madhu again, but she was missing.The prinicipal asked akshay about madhu and he told that he asked her to come back once she has prepared, but she is not yet returned, means she is not yet prepared and shows fake concern and smiled inwardly.


Before the situation turn pathetic, madhu and rishab returned, madhu went forward leaving rishab and he went back to his group.

Madhu was on stage, to present her speech about the given topic - Women Safety Measures. She started her speech and ther was utter silence, she continued for four minutes and then gave a pause, and the crowd started to applaud, but two persons were in shock about her performance - Rishab and Akshay.


That's all for today.Have a happy weekend. Don't forget to post ur comments.
Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely story...

that idiot Akshay...gonna kill him..

pls cont soon..

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kingofme

lovely story...


that idiot Akshay...gonna kill him..

pls cont soon..

thanks for the pm...

thanks for commenting, lets see whats there in store for this akshay with our rishbala
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys, for not updating the ss for last few days!!! And Here goes the next part


Part 5


Rishab was having his dinner, radha ask him to pass the paneer masala, but he paid no attention to it and was deep in his thoughts.Radha, gently touched his son, and asked " Are you ok, Rishu? Seems some one has disturbed my son on his first day itself, whether it was a sweet memory and smiled" Rishab just shrugged and got out of that place. He went to terrace and was checking his mobile, suddenly he saw the moon and smiled. He remembered the face, yes her face, how bold she was in the stage, after such an incidents few minutes back, how was she able to do her presentation with that much confidencue, he asked that question to himself, so many times in that day.

Then he got a call from an unknown number and attended it, there came a hello from a female voice, which asked hi rishab and next instant he was about to tel her name (Madhu), before which the voice replied its deepali here, i got your number from the students record notebook and she smiled. But he was not in mood to speak to her, so he told that he was very tired and he was going to bed and he didn;t gave any space for her to speak and disconnected the call.

But deepali didn't give up that much easily and she texted him " Hi handsome, so tired on the first day itself, fine, you take rest and by the way this is my number, so make anote of it, so no need to address myself next time", and he didn't respond, so she texted again "Hello, you there". Rishab got irritated😡 and put the mobile on the nearby table, and he burried his head inside his pillow and got up again by the beep sound of his mobile and opened the message.

Without seeing its content, he pressed the call button and the call was answered and there came a hello from the other side, rishab started to shout at her, saying " I ve never seen a girl like you , always waiting to get stick around a guy, am not interested in you, so pls stay away form me" and [aused a little, ana then she replied "Thank you Mr.Kundra, I just texted you to thank for today's rescue but didn't have any thoughts on you as you told😡" and the call got disconnected.

And he saw the message, which was as follows,

"Thanks a lot, Rishab Kundra,this is madhubala shamser malik, am a fool, i should have thanked you there in person, but i completely forgot it and most of all i blammed you for all things happened todayso pls forgive me, and i forgot to tel you that you look good in black"

And then he realised that he spoke to madhu thinking it as deepali and he smirked and said "Good start, my true fighter⭐️" and he saved her number and went to sleep. Madhu was tensed too much on rishab's call and angrily went back to bed scolding herself for thanking him.

Both went to bed without knowing whats there in store for the next day

Precap : Tennis team selection😛


Pls spare some time to hit like button and share your comments!!!
Edited by uma88 - 12 years ago

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