RM FF-The Story Of Both Of Us Note on PG 38 21 September

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Puja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

nice update . happy friendship day

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Aakriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

hey ridhi !!
that was nice ;-)
if u had integrated chp 3 & 4...it wud hv been awesome ;-)
ohk..if u r busy..dont worry...take ur time to update but plz plz give bit longer updates dear !!
i know u hv it in u !! ;-)
nice read ridhi !! :-)

Edited by aakriti18 - 12 years ago

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Ridz..I'm totally confused now..RK and Madhu are strangers..? Then whose child is Diya...?😕 The suspense is killing me..

It was very well written. We came to know both the leads POV..I can already see sparks flying...😉

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sush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

great job Ridhi...

RK ko memory loss hua hai kya ?? Coz RK said Madhu-bala...ahaan...matlab pehli baar mila ??? yaar confuse kar diya...aur Diya ?? kaun hai ?? kisi beti hai ??

Loved it :)

Edited by sush12_DD - 12 years ago

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: tinkerred10
By god!! No comments and i thought this ch was good
Poor me :(

THE REASON IS THAT THE INDEX IS NOT UPDATED AND IT GETS DIFFICULT TO SEARCH EACH PAGE

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

SO THE SUPERSTAR AND THE DIRECTOR WILL FINALLY MEET

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Ridhi

@tinkerred10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Hiii people :) I know I'm super duper late but what to do I was busy. And well Sunday finally arrived so here am I with the next chapter. Tell me your views in the comments below. ( Dunno why but I seriously love to write that last line)

*Chapter Five*

Madhu's POV

Mr.Superstar arrives late on the sets and still has the nerve to throw tantrums. He says he is not gonna start shooting unless I meet him 'personally' in his vanity. We are already behind schedule and we have to reshoot a few scenes as well and still he is wasting so much time.
Seeing that there was no other alternative I moved towards his vanity.

I knocked and entered his vanity and saw him sitting on the sofa. Looking in my direction he said "Welcome Ms.Madhu-bala"
"Thank you but my crew is waiting for you and we need to start shooting,so it would be good if we have this chit chat later" I said

With a smirk on his face he replied "Ok ...then lets start shooting Ms.Madhubalaa...ahaan!!"

The way he pronounced my name irritated me but didn't say anything as I had to start with the shoot.

Forcing a smile on my face I said "Be on the set in 10 minutes me and my crew don't like to wait "

*After 10 minutes*

So finally Mr.Superstar stepped out off his vanity and is now ready to shoot.
Holding the mike I said "Lights,camera aaand Action!!!"

RK is way better than that previous actor but he has got an attitude that irritayes me to no end.

After being satisfied with the scene I said "Cut it" " RK your work done here ..but you need to meet my PA and get somethings cleared"

Looking in my direction he said " Ms.Madhu..balaa my PA will handle all of that but if your work is over may I leave"

I didn't miss the smirk and that taunting tone to his voice when he said that and it irritated me .

"Of course you can leave Mr.RK but be sure to come on time tomorrow " I said

Without giving any reply he left.

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Entering my Dia's room I saw that she was already fast asleep. Unknowingly a smile formed on my face . I caressed her face and left for my room.

*In room *

One more day had went by in a blur. Like any other day today had been the same ...same monotonous routine .
Another day without the love of your family,another day without Maa papa Didu and Ankit.

Sighing I went to my bed and let the tiredness take over.

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So that was the next chapter. Tried my best to make it longer :) And thank you to everyone who liked and commented on last chapter. Was busy so couldn't reply but I've read them all :)

Edited by tinkerred10 - 12 years ago

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Yaayy! I am the first to comment.

RK is showing attitude😆 .

Waiting for Madhu to blast.

Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 12 years ago

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Ridhi

@tinkerred10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Yaayy! I am the first to comment.
RK is showing attitude😆.
Waiting for Madhu to blast.

Congrats on being 1st to comment :)
And yeah my RK is showing attitude ..lol
I love him that way ;)

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Aakriti

@CrazyCryztal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

hey ridhi !!
nice update !!
attitude wala rk...😆
i like it 😆
I just want madhu to take sm action...u know dhamakedaar 😆

nice read :-)
plz disclose the suspense now...whoz daughter is dia ??

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