~Drenched Romance~ Rishbala OS updated pg 14 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Payal2012

Hey pretty cool stuff and what am wondering is how is it different than previous ones.

You are good man so dont stop. Keep and am sure all of will keep putting our critical comments heheh.

Keep it up man

lots of love and hugs

aww Payal! Thanks a lot for all these compliments😳 love u🤗

Originally posted by: Aphsana

Keep it up Vinu. I always felt you are good and you should assist the writer of actual MEIEJ

awesome😃

aww thanks a lot Su 😳 hehe love u loads 😳

Originally posted by: revti21

Nyc os

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: aakriti18

Awesome vinu !!! 👏

It's really nice that you picked up a different style of writing and i must say you are good at that too !!

Very nicely written 👏

I liked the line where you used the similarity of 4 letters 😆

You know when i read the title i was a bit shocked...maybe bcoz i din't expect you to write about romance 😆

Waiting for the next part ☺️

Thanks for pm 😃

aww glad u liked it Aku 😳 yeah I tried something different this time😉 & no kiddies😆 hehe will update the next soon! & it's long & romantic☺️ Thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: 1anukriti

amazing os pls continue

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful romantic one dear

thanx for the pm

glad u liked it! Thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: Desire6

Sweet OS waitn 4next part

Thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: ananya2000

NICE

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: maria090

Awesome vinu ❤️😳👏

Thanks a lot Maria😳

Aww lovely morning scene
Nice OS Vinu.
Waiting for the next part 😃