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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ..Aliya..

Agree Radha is really selfish.
But Madhu is stupid. How can she forget the promise?! Did she once thought how hurt RK will be after knowing that she didn't tell him?

i so agree with this..really madhu should have told rk the truth the moment she knew it😕 i can almost see this is happening in the show coz CVs would leave out no opportunity to create tiffs between rishbala😡😡 i barely trust them🤢🤢 and coming to your os, it is beautiful...you have portrayed their pains so well...rishabh's anger, his world falling apart at his madhu's betrayal and madhu's repentance, her love for him😭 you made me almost visualize it😃👍🏼 great work...

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazingly written Pritt :)
Truly heart wrenching.. :)

Ya know what I like about your writing? :) When I read it.. I can totally see it happening :) Like visualise what I'm reading :) heheh
Sooo realistic :)

fab job :)

Keep em coming :D <3

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