Ye Dooriyan - Short RishBala OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This OS is just to emphasize the fact that Radha is selfish and stupid (I'm talking about the character, not actor). I'm already prepared to make a VM on the song 'Ye-Dooriyan' with future scenes because of Radha's selfishness. I hope Madhu goes against her and tells RK the truth. My post from earlier: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3650771/selfish-radha


Ye Dooriyan


"You knew…"

"RK…I…"

"YOU KNEW?!"

RK slammed a fist on the nearest wall. With the ear piercing sound, Madhu rushed to mend his hand. As her hand touched his, he flinched away.

"Don't touch me Madhu."

"RK…I can expl…"

"SHUT UP!"

He turned to stare her in the eyes; unable to accept the fact that she'd hide such a big truth from him. As he searched her eyes for his Madhu, he found himself at a loss. He looked away as she began to raise his hand to caress his face. He stepped back, leaving Madhu's hand hanging in the air, longing to stroke the side of his face. Her hand fell to her side as tears flowed through her eyes. She could see the pain, the look of betrayal written in his eyes as he ran his hand through his hair. Just as she was about to speak, he looked up at her.

"You promised…we promised not to hide anything from each other…then why Madhu? Why?"

"I…ma…"

"I kept my promise. I kept it…but you? My Madhu? I never would've thought that my Madhu would hide such a big truth from me. What's happened to you? You've changed. You're not the Madhu I fell in love with. She would've never done this to me. You hurt me, you betrayed me…how could you…"

"No…RK…ma didn't wan…"

"Stop. Just stop. Leave. I want to be alone."

"RK…"

She put out her hand to place it on his shoulder when suddenly he raised his hand and stopped her midway.

"I said go!"

Her hand fell to her side once again as she turned to leave. With a final glance in his direction, she walked out of their room silently.


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(Cue 'Ye Dooriyan' song.)

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Yeh dooriyan

In raahon ki dooriyan

nigahon ki dooriyan

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Madhu's feet dragged her through the rainy streets with no destination in mind. RK picked up a picture of his father, staring at it for a minute, when suddenly he threw it across the room.

"WHY! How could you…how could…"

Tears began to flow out of his eyes as he fell to his knees and broke down.

The cold rain ran through Madhu's hair and drenched her clothes. She continued to walk in the rain, lost in thought. She regret not telling RK the truth the instant she found it out. She wished she could turn back time and go back to when her mother-in-law had stopped her from telling RK. She fell to her knees and cried out in the middle of the street, knowing she had broke whatever trust RK had in her, knowing the relationship they shared would never be the same.

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kishlay95 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing
I can almost see this happening
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good post PrittB.

But I hope this never happens. However, it looks like this is where the story is headed, so I can only hope that Madhu tries her best to be with RK and hold him after he is all broken, which I know won't be easy. 😔
Edited by mm990 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS pritt 😊
Really like your banner 😃
Agree Radha is really selfish.
But Madhu is stupid. How can she forget the promise?! Did she once thought how hurt RK will be after knowing that she didn't tell him?
But No instead of worrying for her hubby she thinks about the mad woman and her bloody killer son! 🥱
Can't wait for the VM I really like the song 'yeh dooriyan'
You know yesterday I saw your MEIEJ one year anniversary video in YT.
It's awesome preeto 👏 really amazing work 👍🏼
And also saw the VM on 'Bol na Halke Halke' it's also nice 😊
Edited by ..Aliya.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderfully written...i can almost see this happening
Prarthna.B thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written 😊 but hope this never happens in the show .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS.

I am sure this is exactly what's gonna happen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS! Really Sad! Can't wait for your vm.
amandadsouza95 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@PrittB: Awesome OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os...bt hope dis never happens in the show...

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