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Hey MBians🤗 I am back with another OS. I know this is totally out of sync with the current track, but since I cant see Rishabala without each other, I thought of penning something different. I know its very clinched, but still Madhubala being a filmy show, I decided to go this way!

❤️Hope you all like it❤️

RishBala OS- The Truth!

Rishabh was astounded when Madhu, his wife slapped hard across Sultan's face and showed him the DNA reports. She had very cleverly taken Sultan and his so called mother for checkup and that's when she had secretly got their DNA tested. It was negative, that meant Meera was not his mother and he was not a half brother of Rishabh. She just wanted an answer,


Madhu: "Why did you hatch a plan to demeaning Sultan? Answer me, I trusted you as a friend despite knowing your background, despite several warnings from RK. I trusted you. Why Sultan, why did you betray me?"


Sultan was ashamed to even answer, when RK butted in and answered on his behalf,


Rishabh: "Madhu, it's so simple, Sultan wanted to marry you and instead I married you. He couldn't fathom the fact that you loved me even after our horrendous past. He was instigated and hatched this entire plan. Right Sultan?"


Madhu ordered the security guards and was going to throw them out, but then she realised that she better call the cops and hand them their most wanted criminal. Finally she hugged Radha in happiness. Madhu was the one who concocted this entire plan and made it a success. Radha was ecstatic and was put to bed by Madhu. She gave Radha her medicines, covered her with the blanket and kissed her forehead. She grasped Madhu's hand and spoke,


Radha: "Thankyou Madhu! You have proved my belief was right. You didn't let a husband wife relation be maligned and off course a father and son's relation."


Madhu just smiled and closed the door behind and left for her room. As she was walking in her room, she saw Rishabh in front of the God. She was surprised not because he was standing in front if God, she knew he believed but the fact that he was ready to accept his belief in front of her again. The last time he did was when he actively participated in the procession and now. He stood there in contemplation and finally confessed that he was wrong. He was wrong in judging Madhu again. He was wrong in judging her faith and her love for him and his family. He was lost after she had decided to help Sultan, not once knowing why she ever did this, so that she could expose him and his plans. He took blessings and was about to return to his room when he spotted Madhu and didn't know how to face her. As he walked towards her, all he did was look in her eyes, eyes which showed the trust that she had in their love and their marriage. The trust that she had in him, had in them, no matter what happened, they will be together!


But before he could speak, she finally said,


Madhu: "Main maa ke ghar jaana chahti hoon. Mujhe kuch din akele rehna hai."


Rishabh: "Par Madhu, tum aise hi, mera matlab main tumhe chod ke ata."


Madhu: "Haan. Uski koi zaroorat nahi, Bittujee ne driver se ke diya hai."


That hurt him the most, that she didn't trust him enough that she could tell him to even drop her at her mother's place. Before leaving,


Madhu: "Aur haan, apna khyaal rakhna."


Rishabh: "Aur tum'" but before he could finish the sentence, she left his house.


He was totally lost and shattered. He knew that he would have to win her back but how was the big question? He stood there, alone as ever. He had destroyed their relation earlier and now he was the only one to destroy it. It was lost!

So I hope I have lived upto the standards of Rishabala fans.😃

And so if you want me to continue, do let me know!😃

Love,

Mayu

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.dream-catcher. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its my mayu ^_^
res.. will edit kal :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeahhh i read it before your PM😆
Continue Continue please continue. It was superb!!

Loved it Mayu😊😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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mayu awesome awesome🤗👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice.👏.loved it❤️ madhu slapped sultan yayyy🥳..but dont want any separation between rishbala😕...continue soon &make it a happy ending...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was superb !!👏
plz continue soon...let thm get back together :)
PM me whnever u continue...i love it !
fab !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue Continue please continue. It was superb!!

and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is Perfect n this is how I wanna see the end of Sultan's track in the show too ... Madhu should slap Sultan atleast once 😉 Plz continue it's awesome 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome 👏
plz do continue the OS 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it . Plzz Continue .And Plzz PM me whenever U Update.

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