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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ennishet

@ennishet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wonderful OS, Dil!

I'm hoping you will convert it to a SS.

Going back to the story - it was really sweet to see Rk and Madhu start out at school. They fight on their first day 😆 sparks were sure to fly! RK is badmaash as usual and eekks Madhu goes and sits beside Mukund! How could you? 😭

I must say RK is more perceptive as after the time leap, he bothers to check Madhu's feelings for him. This action, in fact, makes Madhu realize how important he has become for her.

Loved the story and felt like it ended too soon. Am glad you ended on a happy note or I would have been here with my threats as usual. 😆
Can we hope for part 2, please, please ...

I hope the other writers, namely Pritt and Reesha too get started with their "long halted" stories. Do you hear?

Thanks for the PM, Dil! 😊

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-Nuts-

@-Nuts-

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW WOW WOW!! Dil is back with a bang! And how!! 👏 Was totally the worth Dil!!

Well coming to the dissection 😈

Little RK and little Madhu 😆 Bade wale hi itne ladakoo hain, I can imagine them as kids 😆 Poor oily Dixit. Totally empathize with him 😆

Aww!! Little Madhu the doll from the toystore? 😳 Cho cute 😳

I was shocked to read that RK was also in love with her 😆 lol...

The best part was LILY!! Aww!! I'm so in love with that name...LILLLIIEEE 😆

Hey!! I strongly suggest this be converted into one major FF, nothing less! 😈

Great read Dil!! Welcome back!! 😃

Meethi

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Aliya

@..Aliya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res

---unres---
First of all I'm sorry for unres so late *holding ears* 😳
You know even yesterday I was thinking while reading a update of a FF " I hope dil soon will start writing again" 😊 and ta da da da.. You wrote an OS 😆
Coming to your OS dillu..
It was awesome as every FF/SS/OS from you 👏
I really liked that we got to see how everything started between these stubborn love birds 😉
Their first meeting and fight was really funny 😆
Aww he calls her Lily.. What a sweet name
Ahan.. Even their parents noticed Rishbala's love
I loved the way RK stormed out of the gym and went to Madhu.. And the kiss was lovely 😳
Plss plss plss dillu continue *puppy face* PLEASE 😊
Make a SS of it 😃

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-Vinu-

@-Vinu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww Dil!!😳 That was just amazing!!!👍🏼 Loved it to the core!!👏👏👏 Aww you started from their childhood!!😳 I can picture a little Right Kameena 😉& a little jungli billi😉 in my mind!😆 Ahaa & Lilly 😆 a superb OS!! 👏Why do I felt this ended so quickly??😕 Cuz I'm already addicted to your amazing work!! 😃Please please I would be much grateful if you can turn this in to a FF & continue!!! great job Dil!! Love you!! 🤗

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dil I'm speechless !!!!

I swear to God !! Uve left me speechless wid this OS of urs ...

It was breath taking !!! 👏

I'm in complete Awe of it !! It made me smile constantly .. From the time they were 5 till they reached high school...I loved evry bit of it !!

I so missed reading good stuff on Rishbala and wid this OS u stole my heart 🤗

Only u can think so amazingly !!! Hats off to u dillu !!! I'm in love wid this OS ❤️

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

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Posted: 12 years ago

Unres

Dillluuu.. :D My Khoon bhari Taaang! Im sooo sooo haaappy that you came back with another piece of writing! 😃 😆

I was over the mooon when you said you were gonna write an OS 😃

Guuurrrlll..! That was fab :) Awsome write up Dil <3 I enjoyed it very much :D <3

I hope your planning on writing more stuff :D 😃 😳

Steph Lubz ya <3

p.s... Sush <3 Awsome Banner <3 I couldnt have done better :) 😳

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simran

@Love_Ashvik

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww...so sweet!
I just luv it!
Welcome back dear...m sure u have no idea how long i have waited 4 ur works!
But anyways,u did a gr8 job & i luv it...

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-Ronnie-

@-Ronnie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome awesome dilu!!!!
very very sweet...!
i could actualy picture them as kids :)))
cute 😊

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-Dil-

@-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuterishabhala
Aww...so sweet!
I just luv it!
Welcome back dear...m sure u have no idea how long i have waited 4 ur works!
But anyways,u did a gr8 job & i luv it...

Thank you Simran...Glad you liked it...😊 I was afraid it was too simple..😳

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