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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel


Ahh !! Halfway there already !!
Need a 'push' 😆 , guess that's why the morning session 🤣 Luvera !!
Love you for the promise of planning something good 😉..hmm how about something sizzling😆😆


ps:- ah !! Luvera, As long as I get these sizzling hot updates in return, I beg u...pull my leg more often 😆😆

Ouuuhhh your waking up the bad side in me... and that side can get pretty wild..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SreeRK

Hello..I'd missed the story in between due to work..caught up now..

love their moments..pls do pm me..

I will add you to my buddy list... But request you to post comments.. as I do trim my buddy list ever so often when I find that I am pming too many people but not receiving enough feedback..
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Posted: 11 years ago
luvu wr r u

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey luvera...have you forgotten about this FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi
missing u n both the stories
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry guys!!!! Haven't updated in a while... Its not because I had forgotten about this fanfic it was just that I lost motivation to write. The main reason was that someone opened up my eyes to the fact that people were copying The Promise and other stories and posting it elsewhere without my permission eg. facebook.
I personally find it very demoralising. I would like to request said persons to put an end to it now!!
Thank you!!

Chapter 101


When I wake, its dark outside. I turn towards the clock which strikes 9 and realize that its been just over 5 hours since I stepped into this gigantic farmhouse where I experienced what guys may call sex but us romantics call massive doses of pure unadulterated love. Did I just sound sappy?? Oh God I did, didn't I??


I stretch out beneath the duvet and I feel sore, deliciously sore. Rishab is nowhere to be seen. I sit up and look around the room. I knew this place was gigantic when I saw it from the outside but its actuality just dawns on me. Well I didn't really have time to gawk at its beauty earlier considering the fact that I was ambushed by lips as soon as we entered only to come up for air when we entered the man cave.


I hear music, a sweet lyrical lament. I wrap the duvet around me and quietly peek outside the room. Seeing no one around, I sneak downstairs as quiet as a cat. I pause at the last step as I suddenly notice Rishab at the piano. I stand rooted at the spot watching him completely lost in the melody he is playing. His expression is that of a farmer who has toiled all day in the fields but is happy because it is harvest season and his labour has finally paid off. I watch enraptured. His eyes are closed as his fingers move along the keys without hesitation, like they were meant to do just that, make beautiful music. I flush as I remember the same skilled fingers move expertly along my body, caressing me. I moan as my body remembers it too.


Rishab looks up and his eyes catch mine. I gasp as his eyes blaze with fire. The music stops. I can't help think of the contrast in his expressions when he played his music a moment ago and now when he looks at me.


"Umm.. that was beautiful." I say as I pull the duvet tighter around me. He closes his eyes for a fleeting moment and runs his fingers through his hair. "That was Songs without Words by Felix Mendelssohn." he says finally looking at me again. His eyes are hooded and I cannot see the fire anymore but I can still feel the intense heat it brings. "Mendelssohn?" I ask confused, causing a crease to develop on my forehead. "Felix Mendelssohn... He is one of the great Romantic Period Composers.. you know of the 1800's. His pieces reveal Mendelssohn's refined aesthetic sensitivity and displays his superb talent for creating unity in variety and balance in rhythm, melody and form." "So this Felix guy is to music what Van Gogh is to art??" I try to understand. Rishab just looks at me and laughs out loud. "I guess that's one way of putting it..."


My eyes move over him, beginning from his unruly hair to his chiselled cheeks, his perfectly symmetrical nose and stop for a moment on his full, swollen and bruised lips, as he laughed. I breathe in sharply at the memory of those lips.. that mouth. My heart begins to beat a mile a minute and I wonder what is this mystical connection that drove us to together. All of a sudden I realize that I have been unconsciously rubbing my thighs together to relieve some pressure and I turn crimson. I look away sheepishly trying to distract myself from my current chain of thought.


"Sorry I woke you up." Rishab apologises as he starts to rise from his seat at the piano. I turn to look at him and instantly regret it. He has nothing on but a pair of boxers that lay low on his hips teasingly. My body heats up and everything but him fades away. I want him. I need him. He is a couple of steps away and I loosen my hold on the duvet and it slips down my body slowly first revealing the bare skin of my shoulders, then my bosom, right down to my toes. Moments ago I turned crimson in embarassment and now I am making the first move?? Rishab makes me loose all sense of self.


Rishab pauses mid-step and stares at me for a moment. Goosebumps rise all over my skin in response to his look and I find myself wondering if he noticed it. I observe the corner of his mouth rising slightly and before I know it he smirks.


"Mr. Kundra.." I smirk back challengingly. He walks towards me and halts right in front of me, "Ahaan.." He gently strokes my cheek with the back of his fingers. I gaze up at him, drinking him in. He leans down and gently kisses me. But I want more... so much more. I throw my arms around his neck and kiss him back with everything I had. The fingers of my hand twist in his unruly hair while the other works towards pressing his body to me. My sudden attack takes him by surprise, but after a beat he responds, a low groan in his throat. His hands slip into my hair and down my back to cup my naked behind. Our tongues battle, a battle filled with vigor. We pull back for air and I see sheer naked need in his eyes, the same need that is mirrored in mine.


"How about we take this upstairs?" Rishab whispers, his breathing hard and rapid. "How about.. here... now.." I say as I trail kisses and nips across his collarbone. His eyes widen and darken as he cups my backside and lifts me up. I wrap my legs around his middle, clutching his hair in my hand as he attacks my lips with fervor. I rake my nails lightly across his back once and then I do it again with force. He hisses and I take control of his delicious mouth. I explore every nook and corner of his mouth with my tongue. His taste is invigorating. I chew on his lip lightly. This time I settle with just light nips. His hands knead my naked backside as he backs me into a wall for support. He sucks on my neck like a leech leaving more marks in its path.


"Crap...!!!" Rishab hisses as he stops his administrations suddenly and places his forehead on my shoulder breathing harshly. As he pushes himself off me and sets me down slowly. I shout out, "Noo.. stop!!" and try to grab him to me.


Panic grips me. "Did I do something wrong?" I ask tentatively looking away disheartened. He reaches out and touches my shoulder reassuringly. "No it is nothing like that. Its just that.. the condoms are upstairs." he says trying to clear up any misunderstandings. I turn around pretty sure my eyes are smoldering yet again. "If that is the only issue... we are good" I say as I lean forward to continue where we left off. He pushes me back slightly, "Wait... What do you mean by that?" Argggh.. I roll my eyes frustratingly. "Shouldn't I be the one worried about getting pregnant?", I bitch. When he still does not budge, I tell him how this works. "I calculated the days since my period and the good news is I am not ovulating. And if that ain't enough I am on birth control."


"When did you get on birth control?" Rishab asks annoyed that he was not in on this tidbit of my life. "I asked the doctor to put me on some the last time I had my check up. I figured it was going to happen sometime. And at that time I didn't want to be left unprepared... you know since all surprises don't leave everyone happy and joyful", I say as I bend forward gathering up the duvet from the floor and wrapping it around my now cold body. "And now if the inquisition is over and done with... I think I will head upstairs and let continue where we left off in my dream." I say as I turn my back towards him and start to climb the stairs.


"Oh no you don't!!!" Rishab mutters as he steps on my duvet preventing me from going any further. I tug at the duvet as I ignore him. He smirks at my attempts. In one startling move he gathers me into his arms and sprints down the remaining stairs and heads to the massive couch, while I kick the air and wiggle around putting on a tantrum, but secretly loving every minute of it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
r/unr😆

yippeee 🥳🥳🥳 !! Me first !!

WOW..welcome back Luvera 🤗 !! its awesome to have back darling🤗🤗🤗 !!

Oh my !! What a come back ☺️ !!!

The update made me blush uncontrollably ☺️ !

i think i loved it better than their first time lol !!

Madhu's thought about Rishabh's fingers skillfully playing on Piano are the same which were previously on her body gave me goosebumps ☺️☺️☺️ !!

uff the way Madhu teased Rishabh and the way she is prepared and equipped for their ahem ahem sessions well in advance hehe was kinda cool !!! You go girl 😆😆 !

argh 😡 !!! returning after ages and now stranding us at this cliff hanger...is not done 😕😕...have mercy 😉 on all of us and continue soon sweetheart 😛😛 !!

ps : I can understand Luvera...seriously how can people be so unethical and unashamedly publish others works as their own...they need to stop it right away..even people who read them should stop it too !! Wish everybody learns to respect and acknowledge the effort that takes in to writing and conceptualizing !!!


Edited by aDarkAngel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww.paasionate update..so...Madhu on pills...LOL
Dear...dnt stop writing ur amazing...we need u Dar..dnt stop writing ur amazing...we need u Dear..dnt stop writing ur amazing...we need u 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
what did Mr. Kundra think of his girl huh...she's well prepared for the pleasurable assaults to begin...

that was a great come back..i do understand how demotivating it can be when your work is being used by others that too with out permission...hope who ever is doing that should stop it.

P.S hope you update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

r/unr😆

yippeee 🥳🥳🥳 !! Me first !!
Hahahhha... I missed everyone here..
WOW..welcome back Luvera 🤗 !! its awesome to have back darling🤗🤗🤗 !!

Oh my !! What a come back ☺️ !!!

I had to come back with a bang.. no pun intended!! 😉

The update made me blush uncontrollably ☺️ !

i think i loved it better than their first time lol !!

The natural tint of pink looks way better than the artificial blush on... don't you think??

Madhu's thought about Rishabh's fingers skillfully playing on Piano are the same which were previously on her body gave me goosebumps ☺️☺️☺️ !!

uff the way Madhu teased Rishabh and the way she is prepared and equipped for their ahem ahem sessions well in advance hehe was kinda cool !!! You go girl 😆😆 !

Well in a consensual relationship I believe that both have to take equal responsibility.. The responsibility should lie on both the shoulders.. be it in prevention of STDs or pregnancy..

argh 😡 !!! returning after ages and now stranding us at this cliff hanger...is not done 😕😕...have mercy 😉 on all of us and continue soon sweetheart 😛😛 !!

Make use of that wonderful imagination and if it ain't working... you can always role-play!!! (Not sure if your in a relationship or not!!)

ps : I can understand Luvera...seriously how can people be so unethical and unashamedly publish others works as their own...they need to stop it right away..even people who read them should stop it too !! Wish everybody learns to respect and acknowledge the effort that takes in to writing and conceptualizing !!!

Thanks for the sympathy/empathy...


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