SS: Mistaken Presence - PART 7 - PAGE 34 - END

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I've received a few PMs and requests to write a complete FF from RK's pov for Dark Ties...but I don't plan on doing that. I'm sorry! But don't worry! I'll be coming back with a new FF once Dark Ties is complete. I got a request for a FF with a certain concept, but I decided that'll replace Breakthrough. This FF below is a random concept that came to mind and will be replacing Dark Ties. I hope you all like it! :)


Prologue

I glanced down at my watch.

"5...4...3...2...1..."

I heard the doorbell ring as the clock struck midnight. I dropped everything and ran. I ran as though my life depended on the person behind the door.

I heard my name being called from behind, but I ignored her voice. Everything she had just told me was a lie. Everything.

I came to a stop in front of the door and took in a deep breath. Then with the flick of a lock, I slowly turned the doorknob. There he stood, looking just as he had the night before, and the night before that. I felt an eerie chill rippling along my skin as I stared up at him.

"RK..."

"How was your day Biwi?"

He asked the same question he had the night before, and the night before that. I didn't respond. I looked up at his face and saw the usual smirk, which managed to always take my breath away. Then with a final look at his face, I pushed myself into his arms. I felt his warm, comforting arms wrap around me in response and I suddenly felt at peace.

Then her voice interrupted from behind.

"Madhu?!"

I instantly pulled out of his arms and turned to see her face, which had gone white with fear. While staring at her fear-stricken face, I spoke in a stern voice.

"RK is my husband. He always will be my husband. You can't take that away from me. Never."



Chapter One - The Loophole - Page 11

Chapter Two - The Massage - Page 14

Chapter Three - The Lone Cabin - Page 19

Chapter Four - The Regrets - Page 24

Chapter Five - The Wedding - Page 30

Chapter Six - The Psychiatrist - Page 32

Chapter Seven - The Truth - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy!! me first 🥳

what a day...good morning happens with your update! 😊


nice update😊...but, i am totally confused! what is happening? it seems haunted to me...pls help me out of this confusion 😕

continue soon..😳
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@PrittB: Nyc prologue, pls do continue!!!!😊
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Quite intriguing ...I can't tell you how much anxious I am to read the rest😳. Looking forward to it😛
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nice start Pritt...Plzzz pm me when u will update.It's awesome n quite interesting.. 👍🏼
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hola at ya
side note: are you down with crazy town?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: war_is_peace

yayy!! me first 🥳


what a day...good morning happens with your update! 😊


nice update😊...but, i am totally confused! what is happening? it seems haunted to me...pls help me out of this confusion 😕

continue soon..😳


Yay!! And aw. 😳
Thank you so much! Ahaha the confusion is what I was hoping for. 😆 It's part of some secret. I love suspense! So I can't clear the confusion, sorry!!

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@PrittB: Nyc prologue, pls do continue!!!!😊


Thanks so much!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdear

Quite intriguing ...I can't tell you how much anxious I am to read the rest😳. Looking forward to it😛


Aw thanks so much, glad you find it intriguing!

Originally posted by: titli4love

nice start Pritt...Plzzz pm me when u will update.It's awesome n quite interesting.. 👍🏼


Thanks so much! And I'll pm you for sure!!

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

hola at ya

side note: are you down with crazy town?


Ahaha Jassu! Uhm, well kind of! I mean near the middle of my FF, yeah. I mean, I don't want to spoil anything but yeah. You get what I mean. 😆

Originally posted by: devsum

interesting start...


Thank you!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting...plz do pm me whenever u continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RohiDDan4ever

Interesting...plz do pm me whenever u continue..


Thank you! And for sure!!

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